2020高考英语写作指导：建议信(书面表达)课件.ppt

1、2020年高考英语写作训练指导年高考英语写作训练指导 书面表达是近年高考中较为书面表达是近年高考中较为稳定稳定的题型，重点考查学生能否有效的题型，重点考查学生能否有效地运用所学英语知识进行地运用所学英语知识进行布局谋篇、遣词造句布局谋篇、遣词造句的能力，以及能否的能力，以及能否清楚、清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达真实思想连贯地传递信息，表达真实思想的能力。试题难度适中，的能力。试题难度适中，稳中求变稳中求变，但，但总的来说越来越总的来说越来越贴近课程标准贴近课程标准的要求。的要求。在命题方向和规律上，书面表达题型有几个在命题方向和规律上，书面表达题型有几个明显特点明显特点：1.1.写作形式：写作形

2、式：仍为仍为半控制性、半开放式半控制性、半开放式写作，以写作，以提纲方式提纲方式呈现材呈现材料，词数料，词数100100左右；左右；2.2.写作体裁：写作体裁：命题多以命题多以书信或电子邮件书信或电子邮件形式突出写作的交际性、形式突出写作的交际性、应用性、真实性；应用性、真实性；3.3.写作话题：写作话题：贴近现实和学生生活实际，学生比较熟悉，贴近现实和学生生活实际，学生比较熟悉，第一人第一人称称写作为主，话题写作为主，话题场景性和真实性场景性和真实性突出，体现突出，体现中外交流中外交流以及现实或传统以及现实或传统中的中的“正能量正能量”，往往涵盖考纲要求的，往往涵盖考纲要求的多个功能意念和话

3、题项目多个功能意念和话题项目的组合的组合运用；运用；4.4.写作手法：写作手法：介绍性说明介绍性说明占主体（说明时间、地点、原因、过程占主体（说明时间、地点、原因、过程等），辅以等），辅以交际性应用交际性应用（解决（解决“现实现实”生活中的实际问题）。生活中的实际问题）。附1：高考新课标卷书面表达命题特点建议信写作攻略：建议信写作攻略：1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是写给个人个人，就其遇到的某个问题某个问题提出自己的看法和观点提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织组织和机构和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.建议信要写出写信

4、的原因原因，建议的内容内容，提出建议的理由理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信写作的注意事项：建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本基本格式格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用这类文章的基本时态多用现在时和一现在时和一般将来般将来时。时。c.掌握建议信的语言特点：掌握建议信的语言特点：语气要诚恳，语气要诚恳，有礼貌有礼貌；建议；建议内容要详尽具体内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔

5、接各个建议之间的衔接。d.熟悉建议信的熟悉建议信的常用句型常用句型。常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to3.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter.4.I am writing to you in reply to.5.You have asked me

6、 for my advice on how toand Ill try to make some suggestions.6.I am writing to express my views on/concerningB.B.表达建议（表达建议（BodyBody正文）正文）1.Have you considered doing./So why not do.?2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest that you should4.If I were you,I would5.In

7、 my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.6.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can7.Youd better do./Its better for you to do.8.The best way to do sth is to do/There is no better way to do sth than to do sth.C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will tak

8、e my suggestions into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在这一点上在这一点上).4.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5.In the end,I will be glad if you find these ideas useful.6.I would be ready

9、 to further discuss this matter.7.I am looking forward to your early reply and good news.8.Lets keep in touch.I do hope to hear good news from you.附附2 2：书面表达：书面表达句式的润色与升格句式的润色与升格感叹疑问开篇巧感叹疑问开篇巧肯定不如双否好肯定不如双否好陈述不如倒装高陈述不如倒装高主动不如被动妙主动不如被动妙分词从句不可少分词从句不可少结尾升华用强调结尾升华用强调英语书面表达英语书面表达句式句式运用策略运用策略 Dear XXX,Ive

10、received your letter,saying+对方的问题.Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,_,because _.Secondly,youd better_.By doing this,youll _.Thirdly,it is useful for you to _.Only in this way can you _.Whats more,why not _?I hope my suggestions will be help

11、ful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 适当运用模板适当运用模板建议信例题 假定你是李华，现在全世界正遭受新型冠状病毒感假定你是李华，现在全世界正遭受新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎，你对外国朋友染的肺炎，你对外国朋友 Jack 的状况非常担心，所以的状况非常担心，所以给他写一封电子邮件，询问他的状况并给他建议。给他写一封电子邮件，询问他的状况并给他建议。内容包括：内容包括：1.询问询问 Jack 身体状况如何；身体状况如何；2.建议建议 Jack 照顾好自己（别出门，勤洗手，戴口罩）；照顾好自己（别出门，勤洗手，戴口罩）；3.愿意力所能及帮助他渡过难关愿意力所能及帮助他渡过

12、难关。注意：注意：1.词数词数 100 左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎COVID-19;口罩口罩 face maskOne possible sample:Dear Jack,As we know,the world is suffering from COVID-19,and Im very worried about you.This is why Im writing to know about your situation.For anyone,keeping healthy

13、was,is and remains to be the most important thing in ones life.So you must take good care of yourself during this period.Youd better keep staying in these days.And I advise you wash your hands frequently and wear a mask when having to go out.One possible sample:As your best friend,Im willing to try

14、my best to help you with overcoming the difficulty.I hope you are all right forever.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua.Homework 假设你是学生李华，你的外国朋友假设你是学生李华，你的外国朋友Tom目前正在目前正在努力学习汉语，但在学习中遇到了一些困难，因此他努力学习汉语，但在学习中遇到了一些困难，因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样才能学好汉在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样才能学好汉语。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件：语。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件：1感谢

15、他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助；感谢他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助；2简要介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法；简要介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法；3邀请他暑假期间来中国，交流语言学习经验。邀请他暑假期间来中国，交流语言学习经验。注意：注意：1词数：词数：100左右左右;2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Im so glad to receive your last letter.I cant thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study,due to which

16、Ive made great progress.Meanwhile,Im concerned to know that you are facing some difficulties when studying Chinese.Im willing to offer you some help.One possible sample:As you know,Chinese is so flexible that you need to pay attention to the different meanings of a word or phrase in different situat

17、ions.Besides,it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters,especially for the beginners.So I advise you to learn some oral Chinese first.Then you may begin to try writing some simple Chinese characters.Finally,there is one point for you to remember:practice makes perfect.One possible sample:Another suggestion is that you should experience the native Chinese language environment in person.How about coming to China during the summer holiday?We can talk about our experience in language learning with each other.Best wishes!Yours Sincerely Li HuaOne possible sample:Goodbye!