新高考英语作文续写技巧45张下载课件.ppt

1、读后续写：理论与实践的对话读后续写：理论与实践的对话目标PART 1浅谈浅谈理论理论PART 2如何如何教学教学PART 3问题问题探讨探讨浅谈理论浅谈理论PART ONE 什么是什么是“续续”？什么是什么是“续论续论”？什么是什么是“续写续写”？为什么要为什么要“续写续写”？1.什么是什么是“续续”？“红楼梦的作者只有一个曹雪芹，高鹗只是一个续书者。”“又经过两次修订，将作者署名为：（前八十回）曹雪芹著，（后四十回）无名氏续，程伟元、高鹗整理。”1.什么是什么是“续续”？例子：例子：1.什么是什么是“续续”？“从语言习得角度看，幼儿与成人对话，实则是在续中交流，在理解对方话语的基础上表达自己

2、的意思。”“续的操作极其简易，促学效果却十分明显。”（王初明 2016）1.什么是什么是“续续”？“所谓所谓续续是指说话者是指说话者在语言交际使用中承接他人的表述，在语言交际使用中承接他人的表述，阐述自己的思想，前后关联，推动交流阐述自己的思想，前后关联，推动交流。”（王初明（王初明 2017）2.什么是什么是“续论续论”？王初明王初明（2017）1)语言是通过语言是通过“续续”学会的学会的；2)语言学习高效率语言学习高效率是通过是通过“续续”实现的实现的。王初明，从“以写促学”到“以续促学”J.外语教学与研究，2017(4).新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技

3、巧 45张PPTPPT下载“语言是通过语言是通过续续学会的，学会的，因为“续”是对话必须的，而对话是人类学会语言的最基本方式。”2.什么是什么是“续论续论”？“语言学习高效率是通过语言学习高效率是通过续续实现的，实现的，因为学习者的语言理解水平通常高于语言产出水平，前高后低不对称，学习者因“续”而将理解与产出拉平，可产生立竿见影的学习效果。”新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载续论尝试解决影响外语是否学过能用的一个根续论尝试解决影响外语是否学过能用的一个根本问题本问题:语言的静态操练如何适应思想内容表达语言的静态操练如何适应思想内容表达的

4、动态变化的动态变化?2.什么是什么是“续论续论”？续论是互动研究的深化，续论是互动研究的深化，“续续”既是互动的源头，既是互动的源头，又是强化互动的机制又是强化互动的机制，还是习得语言的有效途径。，还是习得语言的有效途径。独特优势独特优势新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载“创造性模仿创造性模仿”是续论促学语言的核心理念，“续”是将内容创造与语言模仿有机结合的介质。2.什么是什么是“续论续论”？“创造”指学习者自主创造内容，模仿则指主动语言模仿，发生在丰富的语境中，服务于动态变化的思想内容表达，绝不是机械的语言重复。核心理念核心理念新高考

5、英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载3.什么是什么是“续写续写”？“续作续作”类型类型S以“续”促学设计 新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 基本操作方法：基本操作方法：针对学生语言水平挑选一篇读物，将结尾抹去，让学生阅读截留部分，在理解的基础上续写，补全内容。学生续写时，“伴有前文构建的语境，伴有语言模仿的样板，伴有内容创新的依据”(王初明 2014)。读后续写读后续写3.什么是什么是“续写续写”？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT

6、下载“为保证前读与后续连贯，学习者会向高于自己写作水平的原作看齐，就如同与比自己语言水平高的本族语者互动，产生拉平效应拉平效应(王初明 2010)，从而实现外语能力的快速提升。”（姜琳、涂孟玮 2016）读后续写读后续写3.什么是什么是“续写续写”？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 可激活促学语言的积极因素，其中包括学习者主观能动性；理解与产出有机结合，能将他人的优质语言高效转化为学习者自己也会用的语言；以正确语言输入促学，弱化负面输入(改错)的作用;可操作性强，静态操练的语言可实时应用于内容动态变化的续写；在丰富语境的伴随下学用语言

7、，促使语言与语境粘合，有助于语言得体使用。4.为什么为什么“续写续写”？王初明王初明（2019）新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 续写可以在词汇、短语、句型、语篇连贯性、写作复杂度、语法（如被动语态、过去时、冠词等）等方面有积极的促学作用。多样化的续写方式能够提高学生写作的积极性，激发其内生表达动力。4.为什么为什么“续写续写”？前人研究前人研究 新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载“读后续写不仅能够有效考查学生的读写综合能力，还能够借助考试的反拨效应，促使外语教学和学习将理解和

8、产出紧密结合起来，将内容的创造与语言的模仿有机结合起来，藉此提高外语教学和学习效率。”王初明、王初明、亓鲁霞亓鲁霞（2013）4.为什么为什么“续写续写”？王初明，亓鲁霞 2013 读后续写题型研究 外语教学与研究，(5):707 718新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载读后续写不仅是一种考试题型，读后续写不仅是一种考试题型，更是更是高效促学高效促学的一种手段。的一种手段。4.为什么为什么“续写续写”？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载如何教学如何教学PART TWO 教什么？教

9、什么？怎么教？怎么教？如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？其他建议？其他建议？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载万事开头难新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。读后续写读后续写高考题型高考题型1.教什么？教什么？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 理解原文内容情

10、节；理解原文重点词汇、短语、句型；理解故事的语言风格。阅读（理解）阅读（理解）续写（产出）1.教什么？教什么？由读到写的思维能力 内容与原文高度相关，情节发展连贯合理；有效使用规定词语和连接词语，结构紧凑；使用多样化的词语和句型，表达准确。新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 浅层信息定位：who,when,where,what,why,how等；理清事件发展的顺序和文章写作结构；抓住重要情节，为续写铺垫思路；总结语言使用特点：词汇、短语、句型；人物刻画、动作描写、心理描写、环境描写等。阅读理解阅读理解2.怎么教？怎么教？新高考英语作文续

11、写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the ti

12、me they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothi

13、ng but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane w

14、as so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly s

15、he followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the

16、 stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no mor

17、e helicopters came and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke up._2016年高考读后续写注：参考百度文库注：参考百度文库新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载1）浅层信息定位）浅层信息定位who:what:where:Jane,TomJane was lost.in the forest新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,To

18、m,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path t

19、o follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she ha

20、d not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold

21、 him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she t

22、asted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes late

23、r,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke up._2）理清事件发展顺序）理清事件发展顺序In what order is the material developed?One weeken

24、d in July,As night was beginning to fall,Jane rose at the break of the day,But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.time sequence新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载3）抓住重要情节）抓住重要情节BehaviorsFeelingspara.1quarrel,walked awayangrypara.2was lostfrightened,regretful,c

25、onfused,para.3criedpara.4kept moving,had to stop,wanted para.5saw,drank,ate,felt strongerjoyful,hopefulpara.6heard,took off,thinkinghopeful,anxious新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载BeginningClimaxEnding quarrelledgot lostcriedwantedsaw,drank,ateheard,took off,thinking that.angryfrightene

26、dregretful(helicopters)joyfulhopefulno more helicopterswoke uprescued?feelings?3）抓住重要情节）抓住重要情节新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载4）总结语言）总结语言使用特点使用特点阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overn

27、ight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite

28、 a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that ba

29、g with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved h

30、im.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger

31、 now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jan

32、e took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke up._With no path to follow,Jane,she turned around,hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that Jane

33、rose,hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 在充分理解原文的基础上，设想接下来会发生的情节；n 细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；n 围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节；n 可在课上或课下开展同伴讨论，增强互动强度，扩展写作思路。由读到写由读到写的构思的构思2.怎么教？怎么教？新高考英语作文续写技巧

34、 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载由读到写由读到写的构思的构思2.怎么教？怎么教？Para.1:But no more helicopters came and it was dark.Para.2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.规定用词分类规定用词分类CharactersJane,TomActionswalked,climbedToolshelicopter,yellow blousePlaceslake,stream,at a distanceFeelingsto her great joy新高考英语作文续写技巧 4

35、5张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。n 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。n 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。n 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。续写产出续写产出2.怎么教？怎么教？评改标准评改标准(21-25分档分档)新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 提高语言使用的准确性和丰富性：提高语言使用的准确性和丰富性：词汇、句式、语法的多样性 情感表达的多样性 动词使用的丰富性续写产出续

36、写产出2.怎么教？怎么教？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 语篇的连贯性：语篇的连贯性：内容连贯，故事大意和写作意图一致；语句连贯，准确使用连接词；语言连贯，语言风格保持一致；结构连贯，前后呼应续写产出续写产出2.怎么教？怎么教？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.Amid the dreadful darkness,strange sounds of wild

37、beasts were heard.“If it werent for that stupid quarrel,I wouldnt be trapped here,”she thought to herself,regretful tears clouding her eyes.Surrounded by the fear and tiredness,Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep.“Tom,is that you?”she murmured.“Tom,help!”In her dream,she saw a man extend

38、ing his arms towards her at a distance.It was day break when Jane woke up.After a washing,Jane continued to force her way ahead.In the boundless search,she found it impossible to find a way out,which threw her into desperation.Fortunately,a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment.In no time did

39、 Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it.She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.To her great joy,this time,the helicopter spotted her.The moment Jane was reunited with her husband,her tears clouded her vision.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.20

40、16年高考读后续写参考范文新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载3.如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载阅读（理解）阅读（理解）续写（产出）由读到写的构思由读到写的构思3.如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？哪些哪些具体的教学任务具体的教学任务可以提高教学效率？可以提高教学效率？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 前文阅读文章要尽量有趣，吸引学生的注意力，愿意主动接续；n 平时练习的原文体裁

41、可丰富一些，例如书虫分级读物节选一部分续写，甚至节选几部分进行多轮续写；选取原版电影片段，阅读剧本，续写剧情或台词；n 除了老师讲解以外，增加学生之间的互动交流，例如分担不同的任务全方位理解原文，共同探讨接续内容；3.如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 续写完成之后，对照原文接续的内容，验证预测内容，找出语言表达差距，进行深度学习；n 除老师批改以外，学生之间互相阅读，给出一些评价意见，互相学习；n 除续写这一种形式外，时间充裕的情况下，还可以让学生朗读续作、表演故事等，穿插非续写任务，采取多样化的

42、写作方式，保持学生的学习积极性。3.如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载n 全班学生分小组，每组4-5人，组内每个人承担不同的阅读理解任务/角色；n 角色可包括：Reader for the information,reader for the organization,reader for the plot,reader for the language,summarizern 每个角色填写相应的 role sheet，完成之后找一个时间进行组内分享、讨论，以便深入理解原文，并对接续内容进行构思。阅读

43、圈阅读圈Readingcircles3.如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载科学化教学设计科学化教学设计教师可根据学生水平和教学目标自行切换组合，如“续写”多样化任务、同伴讨论合作等，增强互动量。增加阅读量增加阅读量从低年级开始，规定每学期必读书目，保证学生一定的英语阅读量。读后续写对阅读能力要求更高，有了大量阅读积累，读后续写更顺畅。保持良好心态保持良好心态正确对待续写任务，找到方法，接受挑战，坚信它的促学效果，把积极的心态传播给学生，提高师生的信心。4.其他建议其他建议新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张

44、PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载问题探讨问题探讨PART THREE 一节课的教学设计？一节课的教学设计？一学期的教学安排？一学期的教学安排？如何布置批改作业？如何布置批改作业？如何对待高考续写？如何对待高考续写？还遇到哪些难题？还遇到哪些难题？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载问题探讨问题探讨PART THREE 没有完美答案没有完美答案 一起探索前进一起探索前进新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载PART 1浅谈浅谈理论理论PART 2如何如何教学

45、教学总结总结什么是什么是“续续”？什么是什么是“续论续论”？什么是什么是“续写续写”？为什么要为什么要“续写续写”？教什么？教什么？怎么教？怎么教？如何激发学习兴趣？如何激发学习兴趣？其他建议？其他建议？新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载谢谢大家，让我们一起“接续奋斗”！新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载1应该认识到，阅读是学校教育的重要组成部分，一个孩子如果在十多年的教育历程中没有养成阅读的习惯、兴趣和能力，一旦离开校园，很可能把书永远丢弃在一边，这样的结果一定是我们所有的教育

46、工作者不想看到的。2对教育来说，阅读是最基础的教学手段，教育里最关键、最重要的基石就是阅读。3但是现在，我们的教育在一定程度上，还不够重视阅读，尤其是延伸阅读和课外阅读。4.“山不在高，有仙则名。水不在深，有龙则灵”四句，简洁有力，类比“斯是陋室，惟吾德馨”，说明陋室也可借高尚之士散发芬芳5.这是一篇托物言志的铭文，本文言简义丰、讲究修辞。文章骈散结合，以骈句为主，句式整齐，节奏分明，音韵和谐。6.了解和名著有关的作家作品及相关的诗句、名言、成语和歇后语等，能按要求向他人推介某部文学名著。7.能够根据所提供的有关文学名著的相关语言信息推断作品的作者、作品的名称和人物形象，分析人物形象的性格和作

47、品的思想内容并进行简要评价。8能够由具体的阅读材料进行拓展和迁移，联系相关的文学名著展开分析，提出自己的认识和看法，说出自己阅读文学名著的感受和体验。9巧妙结合故事情节，在尖锐的矛盾冲突中，充分深刻显示人物复杂内心世界，突出了对人物性格的刻画，使其有血有肉，栩栩如生。10保尔身上的人格特征或完美的精神操守：自我献身的精神、坚定不移的信念、顽强坚韧的意志11把记叙、描写、抒情和议论有机地融合为一体，充满诗情画意。如描写百草园的景致，绘声绘色，令人神往。12简爱人生追求有两个基本旋律：富有激情、幻想、反抗和坚持不懈的精神；对人间自由幸福的渴望和对更高精神境界的追求。新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载新高考英语作文续写技巧 45张PPTPPT下载