上海新世纪高考英语作文分类讲评范文课件(共27张PPT).pptx

1、上海新世纪高考英语作文分类讲评范文课件(共27张PPT)一议论文/论说文（一）问题解决型 此题型是先提出某一问题和现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在于解决问题上，但有时也要对问题产生的原因或引起的后果做相应的描述，所以审题要注意段落的合理比例。1 写作结构指导 问题陈述-分析（原因/后果）-问题解决-结论（期望/展望）2 常用句型 问题陈述 Recently/nowadays,.has become a serious problem we have to face.the phenomenonhas aroused the publics concern.There is no d

2、enying that has become a serious concern among people.分析（原因/后果）There are several reasons for the problem.There are a variety of factors contributing to the phenomenon.起作用 问题解决 People have figured out many ways to solve the problem.It is high time that we figured out ways to deal with the problem.结论（

3、展望/期望）With the joint efforts,I am confident that As long as we.,we will resolve the problem eventually.作文范文：Junk message 目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们生活带来困扰，分析原因谈谈如何解决这个问题。Junk messages are in the air.People are caught up in a constant rustle with them-you delete while they arrive.How unpleasant!Reasons for such inc

4、onvenience vary.Some may be caused by business battles where companies take advantage of leaked personal information and use text messages as a ay of advertising while others may result from evil thoughts,including teasing ones or even blackmailing ones.Still others are perhaps due to ineffective ad

5、ministration or technological failures.Whatever the causes,they must be removed.The most direct solution is to turn to phone producers who may equipped each phone with a message filter so as to automatically abandon those junk messages.But it may not be the most far-reaching solution.To handle the p

6、roblem thoroughtly we may first set up a supervising network to detect the spread of junk messages.Secondly,laws for punishment shall follow to fight against these behaviors.Meanwhile,our personal information must get better protection to avoid being aimed at as potential customers.And finally,the p

7、ublic should be educated to respect others by stopping the spread of junk messages.Anti-junk-message war can be demanding,but it will be worth the efforts to free people form the constant assault presented by these unwelcomed visitor.分为4段 第一段：陈述垃圾信息泛滥 第二段:出现这样的原因分析 第三段：采取的应对方法 第四段：总结长期的解决方法（二）说明利弊型

8、此题型要求针对某一事物或现象从正反面分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或想象的看法。1写作结构指导 描述某事物或现象-陈述它的优缺点-表面我的看法或态度。2常见句型 陈述事物的优点 There are several advantages in.the first/biggest advantage is that陈述事物的缺点 However,just like anything else,has its negative side as well.In the meanwhile,we cant ignore the disadvantages of.However,the negativ

9、e aspects of.are also obvious.To begin with,to make matters worse,worst of all In spite of/Despite the advantages/beneficial sides,it has its comprehensive/disadvantages side effects.表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊）As to me,I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.至于我，我认为优势大于劣势 As far as I am concerned,I hol

10、d that.has more advantages than disadvantages.就我而言，我认为利大于弊。范文：手机是人们生活不可缺少的交流工具，谈谈它对中学生在学习上或生活中带来的优缺点。As the life standard becomes higher and higher,mobile phones play an essential part in our own daily life now.not only the adults but also many middle school students use them frequently.There is no

11、doubt that mobile phones have their advantages.As a communication tool,mobile phones connect people conveniently.We can use mobile phones to call or send text messages to each other,keeping in touch with the outside world.On the other hand,mobile phones also have disadvantages.Some students are keen

12、 on playing games and others spend too much time on sending short messages.By doing so,both time and money are wasted and even our sleep and studies are harmed.As far as I am concerned,using mobile phones is quite necessary in some way,especially for those boarding school students.Acting as a strong

13、 link between parents and us,mobile phones bring us lots of convenience.Whats more,mobile phones can also help to promote friendship and provide us with a way to communicate with our peers or friends.With the smart phones,we students can access much more information,becoming more efficient in our st

14、udies and staying open-minded in this information age.All in all,everything has two sides.Whether mobile phones will do us good or harm all depends on how we use them.If we have a right attitude towards them and use them properly,mobile phones are our good servants.分为4段 第一段：陈述现状 第二段：优点罗列；缺点罗列 第三段:表明

15、自己的态度 第四段:总结二图表类别二图表类别：最近学校在高中生中做一次:有烦恼向谁说？的调查活动，谈谈想法和理由。Recently,a survey on the topic of whom do you turn to when in trouble has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students.58%of the students tend to turn to their friends and classmates in that being similar

16、 in age leads to better mutual understanding and communication while another 33%argue that they can be fully trusted.Apart from the above,those who refuse to share their thoughts with others account for the rest 9%.In the case of myself,friends will be those who emerge in my mind the instance I find

17、 myself a t a loss with the reasons as follows.First and foremost,due to the same environment and similar challenges to face,friends can fully understand my worries and offer me really helpful suggestions instead of those related to morality and responsibility from parents.Secondly,opening my mind a

18、nd expressing my confusion to peers wont make me feel shameful or embarrassed,let alone be afraid of being scolded by them.Finally,as sorrows will only be shared with my close friends who I fully trust,such communication may enhance the friendship between us and add to our mutual understandings.In s

19、um,I myself favor turning to friends for help whenever Im in trouble,but it doesnt mean its inappropriate to share thoughts with other people.I believe everyone can find their own right way to ease their uneasiness.第一段：开头引出全文 第二段:描述图标和数据 第三段:分析问题及原因（就自己而言也可）第四段：结论话题作文：话题作文：课程建议类作文课程建议类作文 假设你是学生李华，你校

20、正在为下学期开设的选修课程征求学生意见，请你向学校课程部老师写一封email,提出你的课程建议。你的email 中必须包括：1.课程名称。2.课程的主要内容 3.设置该课程的理由Dear teacher,Its really a surprise to learn that our school is seeking suggestions from us students about the course to be developed next semester.The proposals I put forward are as follows:As far as Im concerne

21、d,most classmates really expect to have a course named Selected Reading from British and American NewspaperThe content of this course can be separated into three parts:current affairs,exotic culture and practical techniques in daily life.There are four reasons accounting for my preference.得知我们学校正在向我

22、们的学生征求有关下学期课程开发的建议，真是令人惊讶。我提出的建议如下：据我所知，大多数同学都希望有一门英美报纸选读的课程，内容可以分为三个部分：时事、异域文化和日常生活中的实用技巧。有四个原因可以解释我的偏好 首先，我们将很好地了解世界上最新发生的事情，通过这些事情我们可以跟上时代的变化。其次，我们将学习各种文化习俗，这有助于开阔视野，丰富知识。第三，学会自主解决日常生活中的实际问题，独立于父母。此外，我们还可以通过阅读母语人士写的大量文章，扩大词汇量，提高阅读理解能力。不可否认，我们将从下学期的新课程中获益匪浅。如果我们卑微的建议能得到您的好评，我们将不胜感激。Firstly,we will

23、 be informed of the latest affairs that is happening in the world very well,through which we can keep pace with the changing times.Secondly,we will learn a variety of culture and customs,which can help to broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge.Thirdly,we will learn to work out the practical p

24、roblems in daily life on our own,becoming independent of our parents.In addition,we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our capacity of reading comprehension by having access to considerable articles written by native speakers.There is no denying that we will benefit a lot from the new course we

25、can take next term.We would appreciate it very much if our humble suggestions can receive your favorable consideration.Yours sincerely Li Hua 话题作文：垃圾分类 假设你是明启学校的高年级学生李磊，你校的英语报正在征集宣传垃圾分类(classify the garbage)的口号与具体措施。请就此写一篇稿件。你的稿件必须包括：你设计的口号及其含义 你的校园垃圾分类建议 I have been exposed to the news that our sch

26、ool is appealing to all the students for campaign slogan as well as specific measures about classifying the garbage.This topic holds such a particular fascination for me that I cant wait to contribute my thoughts concerning it.The slogan I ve come up with is“A small step,A big difference.”As far as

27、I am concerned,the responsibility of sorting out garbage not falls on those who clean the street,but on us,on every individuals who are blessed to live on this wonderful planet.It is our duty to do our utmost to save the limited resources on it.By classifying the garbage,we can,to a large extent,sav

28、e some valuable resources by recycling and reusing.The point I want to highlight here is that even though it is only a little effort made by us.But if everyone of us can join this meaningful cause and contribute to it,what a great difference it can make.It goes without saying that the significance o

29、f sorting out garbage can never be too emphasized.To raise students awareness on this issue,schools are expected to hold different campaign where students are offered instructive and informative guidance on how to classify the garbage effectively.Knowing what a great difference they can make to the

30、environment is likely inspire students to take constant effort to devote themselves to the cause of environment protection.Besides,a contest can be organized each month to give special credit to those who have done a great job.At the end of each month,every class will be evaluated in terms of their

31、performance on classifying garbage,which can,in turn,motivate others to be actively involved in it.征求活动方案作文：阳光中学即将举办英语周活动，学校向向全体师生征求活动方案。假如你是高三李明，请写一篇你的建议。推荐名称及简要介绍节目内容。推荐活动的具体实施方法及注意事项。My favourite programme Hearing that our school English Week is around the corner,I am delighted as an English love

32、r.And among all the fantastic activities,I strongly recommend English debate contest.English debate contest has been my favourite programme that I enjoy the encounter of different ideas very much.During the contest,a topic is given and the students of both sides start a heated debate.The detailed pl

33、an is as followed.Students are divided into groups according to their grades to ensure the fairness of competition.Then,pieces of paper strips,on which various topics are written,are put into a box.The leaders from each group will randomly pick one and prepare for it.to make the contest more enterta

34、ining and interactive,each group may have a chance to ask help from the audience.In this way,whoever wants to participate in the activity can have the opportunity to express their opinions freely.It will be an honor if my proposal can be put into practice,and l can hardly wait for the coming of English Week.l am sure it will add a brilliant touch to my school life and we can gain a lot from it.