中考英语写作公开课(共25张)课件.pptx

1、A Lesson of Writing假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sW

2、WF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng)认真认真审题审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。息。写作第一步假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure an

3、d successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng)一般现在时一般现在时 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it b

4、rings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide.He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.My dream is to work at school.I want to be an Engli

5、sh teacher.Because I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide

6、.He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.Boys and girls，

7、Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.a nice heada nice taila nice body连连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：英语写作时常用的过渡语英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列或递进：表并列或递进：and,besides,bothand，not onlybut also，whats more,表转折：表转折：but,yet,however,th

8、ough，although 表因果关系表因果关系：because,so,therefore,as a result 表先后顺序表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally 表时间关系表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,表列举说明表列举说明：for example,for instance,such as 发表观点发表观点：in my opinion,to my understanding,from my point of view,表总结陈词表总结陈词：in general,all in all,in a word,ge

9、nerally speaking Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide.he can experience different

10、life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams c

11、an come true.alsoalsoIn this wayIn this wayBecauseBecause美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing.So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes trave

12、lling best.In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams

13、can come true.She wants to be a writer.She wants to be a successful writer in the future,just like Mo Yan.He wants to be a guide.He is looking forward to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.When she grows up,she w

14、ants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.适当运用名言或俗语适当运用名言或俗语Time is money.一寸光阴一寸金一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量知识就是力量Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧熟能生巧Its never too old to lea

15、rn.活到老，学到老活到老，学到老Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekWatchingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different ways When he spok

16、e,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（25-21分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发

17、挥时内容有新意或亮完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（第四档（好）（20-16分）分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（第三档（一般）（15-11分）分）基本基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（第二档（较差）（

18、10-6分）分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。达信息。第一档（差）（第一档（差）（5-0分）分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。能清楚传达信息。Rome is not built in a day.Tips:1.卷面工整。2.规范写作过程。3.多背诵美文，积累素材。Have a Try!Have a Try!以以“I have a dream”为题写一篇不

19、少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。个词的短文。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy/like/prefer To make my dream come true,I If my dream comes trueThanks!1.学习学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章

20、时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内

21、容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.7.由由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最

22、佳的立意。果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.8.提炼提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多最多。9.9.抓抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。