人教版九年级英语中考复习专题-中考英语写作-My-school-life-课件.pptx

1、 CompositionMy School Life 第五档（第五档（13-15分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误 （词汇拼写错误（词汇拼写错误2个以内或语法错误个以内或语法错误1个）；个）；第四档（第四档（10-12分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少 （词汇拼写错误（词汇拼写错误4个以内或语法错误个以内或语法错误2个以内）；个以内）；第三档（第三档（7-9分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多 （与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误（与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误6个以内或语法

2、错误个以内或语法错误3个以内）个以内）第二档（第二档（4-6分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句子形式，有子形式，有3-4个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）；个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）；第一档（第一档（0-3分）要点不全，语言无可读性（与要点提示内容相关的词汇分）要点不全，语言无可读性（与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。A:What do you usually do at school/after class?B:I alw

3、ays I usually I sometimes I hardly ever I neverA:What do you think of your school life?Lets talk about your school life.B:Its busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic boring/terrible/so-soMy name is BethI study in No.1 Middle School.My school is very big and beautiful.I want to say something ab

4、out my school life.My school life is busy but pleasant.In a word，I love my schoolI love my lessons，my friends and my teachersI find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful五步法：五美四连三列二构一审书面表达Step by step 1.审审 2.构构 3.列列 4.连连 5.美美文体_ 时态_ 人称_连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心

5、思想，使文增色。把握文章框架结构，必要时必要时适当增加细节列出要点文体 _ 时态 _ 人称 _二.Structure（结构）开头中间结尾 My School Life（怎么样.（具体.(情感：期待，热爱，收获Beginning 开头（怎么样.interesting/enjoyablecolourful&meaningfulbusy but pleasanthave a lot of fun.My school life My School Life TeachersClassmatesSchool ActivitiesStudyEnding结尾My school life(情感：期待，热爱，收

6、获I believe/l hope +从句How/What+感叹句结构初现：抛出观点展开描述总结（点题、升华感情）Teacherskind/friendlyHumoroushave a strong sense of responsibility/be strict withpatienthelp /encourage me to improve my study三.Make a list(列)列出要点Classmatesoutgoingdicuss problems togetherhelp/encourage each othersmart&hardworkingActivitiesspo

7、rts meetingsArt Festivaljoin the clubstake part in different competitionsActivitiesfun&interestinguseful/meaningful:To improve our abilitiesrelax ourselvesmake more friendsdevelop our interests or habits1.spend on sth/(in)doing sth2.Although 尽管3.so that 如此.以致。4.in order to/so that 为了5.How/What(感叹句）6

8、.be proud of 7.take(an active)part in (积极）参加 8.be interested in9.比较级 quicker,more exciting10.not only but also 11.when 从句 三.连：连字成句，连句成段My School Life 第二段第二段Body(正文正文)StudyClassmates Activities Teachers第一段第一段 Beginning:interesting/enjoyable busy but pleasant 临考如何提高写作能力：适当加强阅读量读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快 背诵经典文段在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道 加强练习加强实际写作练习至关重要我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等