人教版九年级英语专题复习--书面表达(一-24张)课件.pptx

1、 书面表达书面表达(一一)人教版题型破译题型破译四连三扩二列一审六查五美审文体、要求、人称、时态、内容（主题）列提纲，确定文章框架，列全要点扩写句子，在主干的基础上添枝加叶。连句成文，句子与段落之间适当加人连接词。美化文章，使用修饰词、复合句、谚语、俗语等。书写工整、美观，卷面整洁。书写工整、美观，卷面整洁。通读文章,检查改错查六步走誊写特别是应用文的格式，如书信、通知等，注意检査各要素是否齐全。检査文章时态是否正确，特别是从句中的时态一致问题。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等(如宾语从句的语序);看语言表达是否流畅，切忌将题目要求中的内容逐句译成英语。看谓语动词时态是否使用得当、主谓是否一

2、致等。看使用的习语、搭配是否符合英语表达习惯等。6.查单词拼查单词拼写、标点符写、标点符号和大小写号和大小写1.查格式查格式2.查时态查时态3.查句式查句式4.查动词查动词5.查习语、查习语、搭配搭配尤其要注意检査动词的过去分词拼写形式、名词的单复数形式，检査书写是否规范，有无拼写和标点错误等表示转折表示转折:2)常用连接词表示并列：表示并列：and either.or:neither.nor:both.and;not only.but also表示递进表示递进:besides;whats more:whats worse表示原因表示原因:because;for;because of:than

3、ks to表示结果表示结果:so;as a result;so.that表示目的表示目的:so that;(in order)to表示对比表示对比:while:on the one hand,on the other handhowever;but常用作文常用作文话题话题计划假期安排或记叙过去经历等4家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等课外生活.5环境、健康6自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人感受等1旅游地点2春游、校规、科目、同学关系、学习困难等校园生活3个人观点建议.701亲友师长亲友师长人际交往人际交往2019济宁Dear Kevin,Im so excited that you wll co

4、me to our schoolLooking forward to seeing you next term!Yours,Wang Hong01体裁体裁:时态时态:人称人称:应用文应用文一般过去式，一般过去式，一般将来时，一般将来时，一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称第二步第二步:列提纲、列要点列提纲、列要点【写作剖析】【写作剖析】第一步第一步:审题审题第二人称第二人称第三人称第三人称正文正文第二步第二步:列提纲、列要点列提纲、列要点列提纲OutlineBeginningBodyEnding 称呼称呼 结束语结束语Dear Kevin,Discribe Kevins problems.Yo

5、urs,Wang HongProblem1Problem2一般过去式一般过去式You said that.You also said that.1.talk in Enlishhelp sb.with be friendly and helpful2.practise.with sb.play well;win a good prizefriendly helpulbe good at一般现在时一般现在时Give some advice第三步：扩写句子，在主干的基础上添枝加叶。you were worried about communicating with teachers and stud

6、entsyou could speak only a little Chinese.You can talk with them in English.We can help you with Chinese.You also said you wanted to learn to play ping pong.You can practise it with Li Lei.He has ever won a good prize.He is friedly and helpul.4561237第四步：连句成文you were worried about communicating with

7、teachers and studentscould speak only a little Chinese.You can communicate with them in English or Chinese.we will help you with your Chinese.you wanted to learn to play ping-pong.You can practise it with him.becauseYou saidAlso,You also said第五步：美化文章Its necessary for you to be worried about it becau

8、se its 第六步：检查错误next term.He is friedly and helpful.you very common in our daily life.Its a piece of cake.you can use your body languages.alsoSometimesThere are so many students who are good at playing ping pong in China.My friend,Li Lei is an excellent ping-pong player.He has ever won the first priz

9、e.He can teach you how to play ping-pong.next term.You said you were worried about communicating with teachers and students.Its not necessary for you to worry about it because its too common in our daily life.Id like to give you some advice.You can communicate with the teachers and students in Engli

10、sh or Chinese.Sometimes you can also use body languages.I think most of them can understand you.Also we will help you with your Chinese.As time goes by,your Chinese will be better and better.Then you can communicate with your Chinese people freely.You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong.

11、Its a piece of cake.There are so many students who are good at playing ping pong in China.My friend,Li Lei is an excellent ping pong player.He has ever won the first prize.He is friendly and helpful.He can teach you how to play ping pong.Looking forward to seeing you next term!Yours,Wang HongEndingB

12、ody测练平台体裁体裁:时态时态:人称人称:第一步第一步:审题审题记叙文记叙文一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称2019.黄冈第二步第二步:列提纲、列要点列提纲、列要点12341love each otherwork hardstudy hard2be kind and friendly to are polite to each other3protect the environmentMy mom and my sister.My father.I.4 be volunteers help the children in poor areas第三步：扩写句子，在主干的基础上添枝加叶。第三

13、步：扩写句子，在主干的基础上添枝加叶。1love each otherwork hardstudy hard2be kind and friendly to are polite to each other3protect the environmentMy mom and my sister.My father.I.4 be volunteers help the children in poor areasMy family love each other.(My parents love us,we love our parents.)My parents work hard.My si

14、ster and I study hard at school.My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors.We are all polite to each other.My family try our best to protect the environment.My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping.My father is used to taking the bus to work.I never order takeaway food.My family

15、 are glad to be volunteers at any time.My parents often help the children in poor areas.My family love each other.(My parents love us and we love our parents.)My parents both work hard.My sister and I study hard at school,too.My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors.We are all polite to each

16、 other.So we get on well with each other.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping.My father is used to taking the bus to work.I never order takeaway food.My family are glad to be volunteers at any time.My parents ofte

17、n help the children in poor areas.My sister helps the school library twice a week.Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.第四步：连句成文第四步：连句成文,句子与段落之间适当加人连接词句子与段落之间适当加人连接词 My family love each other.(My parents love us and we love our parents.)My parents both work hard.My sister and I study hard at

18、 school,too.My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors.We are all polite to each other.So we get on well with each other.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping.My father is used to taking the bus to work.I nev

19、er order takeaway food.My family are glad to be volunteers at any time.My parents often help the children in poor areas.My sister helps the school library twice a week.Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.第五步：美化文章，使用修饰词、复合句、谚语、俗语等第五步：美化文章，使用修饰词、复合句、谚语、俗语等第六步：检查错误Dear Mr.Smith,Its my pleasur

20、e to introduce myself to you._I do hope to join in the activity and look forwarto your reply.Best wishes!Yours SincerelyLi Hua体裁体裁:时态时态:人称人称:第一步第一步:审题审题应用文应用文一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称假如你是李华，想参加 China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Smih写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好;2.梦想职业与个人计划。写作要求:1.词数100左右，开头和结

21、尾已给出，不计总数.2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称姓名2019.吉林假如你是李华，想参加 China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Smih写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好;2.梦想职业与个人计划。写作要求:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计总数.2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称姓名Dear Mr.Smith,Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you._I do hope to join in the activity and look forwar to your

22、 reply.Best wishes!Yours SincerelyLi Hua第二步第二步:列提纲、列要点列提纲、列要点假如你是李华，想参加 China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Smih写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好;2.梦想职业与个人计划。写作要求:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计总数.2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称姓名第二步第二步:列提纲、列要点列提纲、列要点列要点列要点个人信息与兴趣爱好;梦想职业与个人计划四连三扩六查五美Dear Mr.Smith,Its my pleasure to i

23、ntroduce myself to you.My friends say Im an outgoing and helpful girl,and its easy for me to get on well with others.As for my hobby,reading is what I like best.In my spare time I spend much time reading books,especiallyon medicine.Actually my parents are both doctors.They influence me a lot,so to b

24、e a good doctor is my dream.I have been studying hard to enter a good medical university.Besides,Im going to take more volunteer work to help sick people.Those experences may help me become an excellent doctor.I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours sincere

25、lyLi Hua俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下流程图提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。NeighborhoodFeelingsNeighboursConditionWhat is your neighbourhood like?What are your neighbours like?How do they help others?(give two examples)What did you do for your neighbours?(give one example)How do you fe

26、el to Iive in your neighbourhood?要求:1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;2.必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥;3.词数:100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数);4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My NeighborhoodMy name is Li Lei.I live in Garden Neighborhood._2019.江苏My neighbourhood My name is Li Lei.I live in Garden Neighbourhood.Its a beautiful and quiet neighorhood.Ther

27、es a beautiful park near here.People always take a walk in it.And theres a supermarket in our neighborhood,so its very convenient for us to buy things.Our neighbourhood has some interesting activities during the festivals.People enjoy them very much.The best thing is that my neighbors are very frien

28、dly to each other.As the saying goes“a neighbor is better than a distant relative.I have a new neighbour,Peter.He lives on the fifth floor.He is a policeman in a police station nearby.He is kind-hearted and ready to help others.When people are in trouble,they usually ask him for help.Another neighbo

29、ur is Mr Li，a-sixty-year old man,helps people fix up old things.Everyone in our neighbourhood especially likes them.Of course.Im also kind to others.Last year,an old man in my neighbourhood was badly ill.His chilldren were not at home.I took him to the hospital.He thanked me very much.I felt happy a

30、bout that.Its really comfortable for me to live in my neighbourhood.Im lucky to have nice neighbours.范文范文1My Neighborhood My name is Li Lei.I live in Garden Neighborhood.Its a beautiful and quiet neighborhood.I have been living here for years.Theres a beautiful park near the neighborhood.I always ta

31、ke a walk in it,And theres a shop in our neighborhood,so its very convenient for us to buy hings.The best thing is that my neighbors are very friendly.I love my neighborhood very much.My neighoors are very Friendly.We just like good friends.They often have a helping handsmeeting at the weekend.Some of them often visit the old people.They help the old people clean their flats.They also do some shopping for them.Sometimes I join them.If there is something wrong with their washing machine or fridge,I can help them check and fix it.I think its a good neighborhood.We are happy to live here.范文范文2