高三英语一轮复习人物型写作课教学课件.pptx

1、Introduction to a PersonSTEP1 Lead inShare and Guess The American scientist,a well-known inventor,The American scientist,a well-known inventor,was born in a small town in the west of America.was born in a small town in the west of America.Since his childhood he became deeply interested Since his chi

2、ldhood he became deeply interested in reading.Besides,he is also hardworking.He in reading.Besides,he is also hardworking.He spent his whole life trying and testing.spent his whole life trying and testing.Thanks to Thanks to his research,his research,the first electric lamp was invented,the first el

3、ectric lamp was invented,which made a great change to our life.which made a great change to our life.It was It was his diligence and determination his diligence and determination that that brought changes to the world.brought changes to the world.As a middle school As a middle school student,student

4、,I should learn from him and try to be the I should learn from him and try to be the best one in our class.(guess the person)best one in our class.(guess the person)Activity 1educationbasic information:age,birthFour acpectsachievementevaluation 评价评价STEP 2 Check Pre-class homework born in 1975，Shando

5、ng Provincehave a gift for become an outstanding artistreceive a good educationgraduate from STEP 2 Check Pre-class homework Activity 2STEP 2 Check Pre-class homework Activity 2gain a Masters Degreedevote to care for the charity make great contributions to respect her for her achievementsinspire sb

6、to doset an example for meSTEP 2 Check Pre-class homework Activity 2AssessmentCriteria(标准标准)Marks(15 points)Content(内容内容)5 4 3 2 1Language(语言语言)8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0Coherence(连贯性连贯性)2 1 0STEP 2 Check Pre-class homework STEP 3 Writing 即学即学即练即练 STEP 4 SummarizeSTEP5 Assignment1.Polish your writing after c

7、lass.2.Review the important phrases and patterns we have learnt today.1.1.高考高考作文不同于作文不同于“自由写作自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。2.2.而而要既符合要求，

8、又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。3.3.一一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主

9、体段至关重要。4.4.出现出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点缺点。5.5.空洞空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力无力。6.6.段落段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说

10、服力说服力。7.7.这这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出“你们你们”成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。8.8.在在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。