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1、2020届高三英语一轮复习-writing-about-how-to-enrich-writiHow to enrichenrich our letter our letter by by adding detailsadding details英语作文之英语作文之细节描写法细节描写法2019年普通高等学校招生全国统年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷一考试（全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1写信目的：2个人优势：3能做的事情。2019年普通高等学校招生全国统年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷一考试（全国卷II）假定

2、你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。2019年高考英语全国卷 书面表达 假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。党员发展和管理工作自查报告总结党员发展和管理工作自查报告总结我们坚持以国共产党章程和国共产党发展党员工作细则为指导我们坚持以国共产党章程和国共产党发展党员工作细则为指导,着眼着眼于始终保持共产党员的先进性于始终保持共产党员的先进性,认真贯彻关于加强

3、新形势下发展党员和管理认真贯彻关于加强新形势下发展党员和管理工作的意见文件规定工作的意见文件规定,有领导、有计划、有组织地抓好党员发展工作有领导、有计划、有组织地抓好党员发展工作,扎实推扎实推进组织建设进组织建设,不断加强党员管理工作不断加强党员管理工作,取得了一定的成效。现就我支部党员发展取得了一定的成效。现就我支部党员发展与管理工作情况自查如下与管理工作情况自查如下:一、发展党员工作一、发展党员工作1、基本情况我院现有党员、基本情况我院现有党员27名名,其预备党员其预备党员1名。名。20XX年共发展入党积极分子年共发展入党积极分子1名名,转正党员转正党员2名名,转预备党员转预备党员1名。其

4、名。其39岁以下岁以下7名名,占占26%;大专以上文化程度大专以上文化程度22名名,占占81%;女党员女党员13名名,占占44%。2、发展党员工作的主要做法首先、发展党员工作的主要做法首先,保证新发展党员质量保证新发展党员质量,切实增强发展党员的切实增强发展党员的透明度。我院遵循透明度。我院遵循“坚持标准、保证质量、改善结构、慎重发展坚持标准、保证质量、改善结构、慎重发展”的原则的原则,紧紧紧紧围绕建设高素质党员队伍的目标围绕建设高素质党员队伍的目标,通过党员、群众、团支部推荐通过党员、群众、团支部推荐,党支部根据推党支部根据推荐结果确定培养对象荐结果确定培养对象,对其进行政治审查、培养教育、

5、短期集培训对其进行政治审查、培养教育、短期集培训,一年后对符一年后对符合条件的培养对象进行党内外推荐和评议合条件的培养对象进行党内外推荐和评议,确定为建党对象确定为建党对象,在此基础上再经公在此基础上再经公示成为预备党员。一年后具备党员条件的转正成为正式党员。通过示成为预备党员。一年后具备党员条件的转正成为正式党员。通过“两推一审两推一审公示制公示制”和民主评议和民主评议,广泛听取了广泛听取了分析 1.在高考全国卷英语高考书面表达中，应用文的命题形式主要以提纲式材料来呈现。所提供信息趋向于简单化，要点化，多呈现半开放式命题特点。2.这既是机遇（发挥空间更大）。3.这又是挑战（字数不够，拿什么来

6、凑？）？注意：注意：可可根据内容要点根据内容要点适当适当增加细节增加细节，以使行文连贯。，以使行文连贯。如何如何“短话短话长说长说”？拓展拓展I am writing to offer you some suggestions.Sample One1.I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.2.Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dre

7、am universities,I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.给今年即将读大学的全体高三学生写封信，信中建议他们在高考（the College Entrance Examination）结束后的暑假中能够安排一些有意义的事去做。给给建议建议(15)(18)(22)1.英国朋友对中国传统文化感兴趣。你邀请他参加中国国画展览。I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chi

8、nese painting exhibition.1Practice：Improve it!_Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture,I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese painting exhibition.Look forward to your reply.Sample One I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into

9、consideration and look forward to your reply.2.盼望收到你的回复。tip：交际性拓展，主要集中在信件交际性拓展，主要集中在信件开头开头与与结尾结尾，可通过可通过背景介绍背景介绍，感谢期待感谢期待等内容的添加，等内容的添加，让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。1.Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities,I am writing to offer you some sugg

10、estions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.2.I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.拓展In China,the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year,so most students take part in different Spring Festival activit

11、ies.Sample TwoIn China,the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year,so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities,such as visiting family,eating lots of food,and most importantly,getting lucky money.1.向英国朋友介绍中国学生的寒假生活。I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for

12、 his favor.In China,the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship,reunion and good luck,so I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for his favor.2.你准备了中国结作为礼物送给外国网友，感谢他的帮助。Practice：细节拓展可通过两方面进行细节拓展可通过两方面进行:1.1.下义延伸下义延伸，即通过，即通过适当添加例子适当添加例子，将，将写作内容具体化写作内容具体化。（such as,for example,like）2.2.平行补充平行补

13、充：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。拓展Sample Three 1.邀请他来中国体验文化。2.所有老师全部为外教。3.暑假建议你去学车。Look at the sentences below:I would like to invite you to come to China this summer.All the teachers are native English speakers.You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license.Why not pay a visit to China,so that

14、 you can have a taste of Chinese culture in person?All the teachers are native English speakers,making you exposed to fluent language environment.You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license,which will enable you to drive in your daily routine.so that makingwhich表结果表结果试试试试 4.向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘

15、画，推荐同学李雷为导游。5.学校茶文化活动通知。6.李华，考试不要紧张。Id like to recommend my classmate Li Lei to be your guide.A Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.Li Hua,dont be nervous while taking exams.As I know,you want someone who has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting.So Id like t

16、o recommend Li Lei to be your guide.In order to enrich our students knowledge of tea,a Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.Li Hua,dont be nervous while taking exams,because it will prevent you from concentrating your attention on the test paper.Look at the sentences belo

17、w:Sample Three表原因表原因1.课前请做好充分准备。Please make full preparations for the lesson.12.建议网友Peter学习中国唐诗。Why not try to learn Tang poetry?Practice：_1.学校安全会议召开。A meeting will be held on May 13th in Room 504,Building No.1.3_In order to raise students awareness of security,a meeting will be held on May 13th in

18、Room 504,Building No.1.Why not try to learn Tang poetry so that you can feel the beauty ofChinese language?Please make full preparations for the lesson,which will enable you to understand the content much better.掌握拓展技巧，在于先写出句子主干(核心信息)，再根据需要增添附加成分。逻辑性拓展交际性拓展细节性拓展拓展小结拓展小结写出句子主干课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，假定你是李华，你

19、正在你正在为期末考试紧张为期末考试紧张复习，复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：寻求帮助。要点如下：1.作业多，没有时间运动。作业多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到希望得到Kate的帮助。的帮助。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。11111.你正在为期末考你正在为期末考试

20、试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习导致无法集中精力学习。2.作业多，没有时间运动。作业多，没有时间运动。3.压力大，难以入睡。压力大，难以入睡。4.希望得到希望得到Kate的帮助。的帮助。1.你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习无法集中精力学习。Recently,Ive been busy preparing for my final exam,but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on m

21、y study.2.作业多，没有时间运动。作业多，没有时间运动。I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.3.压力大，难以入睡。压力大，难以入睡。The high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down.What troubles me most is that its difficult f

22、or me to fall asleep every night.4.希望得到希望得到Kate的帮助。的帮助。Faced with the above problems,Im anxious to get your helpDear Kate,I a m L i H u a,a S e n i o r 2 s t u d e n t._ Yours sincerely,Li HuaDear Kate,I am Li Hua,a Senior 2 student.Recently,Ive been busy preparing for the final exam,but unfortunate

23、ly I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.So Im writing to ask you for help.Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with,I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.Moreover,the high expectation from the teachers and my parents ma

24、kes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down.What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night.Faced with the above problems,Im anxious to get your help.I will appreciate it very much if my trouble can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li HuaHomework Review what we get today.Finish the writing task of module7 in book6.