人教版中考英语作文指导与复习-话题8-学校生活课件.ppt

1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“校园生活校园生活”这一话题，近这一话题，近10年并未考查。年并未考查。全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：介绍丰富多彩的校园介绍丰富多彩的校园生活；介绍理想中的高中生活；对来年校园生活的计划或打算生活；介绍理想中的高中生活；对来年校园生活的计划或打算等。等。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“学校生活学校生活”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的

2、单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度学生学校生活学生学校生活【好句范例】【好句范例】1.He has become more outgoing and made some good friends in school.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 4 P302.In the first year,I didnt work very hard in class,but I joined many different school clubs and had a lot of fun.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 14

3、P1083.Our school starts at eight in the morning from Monday to Friday.译林牛津七译林牛津七(上上)Unit 4 P444.At school,I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.2019安徽书面表达安徽书面表达5.Since I came to the junior high school,Ive gained confidence and happiness.

4、2019齐齐哈尔书面表达齐齐哈尔书面表达【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.我养成了良好的学习习惯，并在学习上取得了很大的进步。我养成了良好的学习习惯，并在学习上取得了很大的进步。_2.过去我不喜欢参加课外活动，但是现在我对此很感兴趣。过去我不喜欢参加课外活动，但是现在我对此很感兴趣。_Ive developed good learning habits/a good learning habit and made great progress in study.In the past,I didnt like to join in/take part in afterclass activities

5、,but now I am interested in them.3.我通常下午四点到五点和我的朋友们打篮球。我通常下午四点到五点和我的朋友们打篮球。_4.自从我来到这里，老师们和同学们都给了我很多帮助。自从我来到这里，老师们和同学们都给了我很多帮助。_I usually play basketball with my friends from 4：00 to 5：00 pm.My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here.2 2角度角度介绍丰富的校园活动介绍丰富的校园活动【好句范例】【好句范例】6.We ar

6、e encouraged to take part in all kinds of afterschool activities.7.In short,weve learned much about the world through our colorful school activities.【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】8.Shed like to join the Dance Club.(扩写原因扩写原因)Shed like to join the Dance Club because she can dance really well.外研七外研七(下下)Module 2 P89.

7、Im really good at football.(用用and扩写扩写)Im really good at football,and I play basketball in the school team.外研七外研七(下下)Module 2 P10【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】10.School activities can make our life colorful.They can also let us relax.(用用not only.but also.升格升格)School activities can not only make our life colorful b

8、ut also let us relax.11.I often play basketball with my classmates.It brings me a lot of fun.(用定语从句升格用定语从句升格)I often play basketball with my classmates,which brings me a lot of fun.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】5.我们被鼓励参加英语角的活动。我们被鼓励参加英语角的活动。_6.总之，通过这次活动我们学到了很多。总之，通过这次活动我们学到了很多。_We are encouraged to take part in the a

9、ctivities of the English Corner.In short/a word,weve learned a lot through this activity.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】7.My favorite afterschool activity is the English corner.(扩写原因扩写原因)_8.I joined the football team.(用用and扩写扩写)_My favorite afterschool activity is the English corner,because I enjoy communicating with

10、foreigners.I joined the football team,and this made me very happy.【句子升格】【句子升格】9.All my classmates are easy to get along with.We play games.We hold some activities together.(用用not only.but also.升格升格)_10.Through school activities,we can learn many things.We cant learn these things from books.(用定语从句升格用

11、定语从句升格)_All my classmates are easy to get along with.We not only play games but also hold some activities together.Through school activities,we can learn many things that we cant learn from books.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2020重庆重庆A卷改编卷改编)国家提出了将劳动教育国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏

12、目入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就就开展开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。发起征文。请你根据所给提示及要求，写一篇短文参赛请你根据所给提示及要求，写一篇短文参赛。定主题：劳动教育的意义及如何开展劳动教育定主题：劳动教育的意义及如何开展劳动教育定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定文体：说明文定文体：说明文；定人称：第一人称定人称：第一人称提示：提示：(1)The meaning of Labor Education(2)The suggestions on Labor Educati

13、on in school.(3).定要点定要点1：劳动教育的意义：劳动教育的意义(如：如：学习生活技能、养成良好习惯等学习生活技能、养成良好习惯等)定要点定要点2：在学校开展劳动课：在学校开展劳动课的建议的建议(如：开设种植课等如：开设种植课等)要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所给的两个提示要点和一个补充要点。短文须包括所给的两个提示要点和一个补充要点。(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Its reported that Labor Education will be

14、 included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China._ _列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句开篇：引开篇：引出主题出主题(已给出已给出)正文：阐正文：阐述个人对述个人对劳动教育劳动教育的看法以的看法以及学校开及学校开展劳动教展劳动教育课提建育课提建议议劳动教育课劳动教育课被纳入国家被纳入国家教育课程的教育课程的方案方案Its reported that Labor Education will be included in

15、 the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.1.阐述开阐述开展劳动教展劳动教育课的意育课的意义义(learn some skills）We can learn some life skills and form good habits.We can learn some life skills and form good habits.Both are good for our future and help us become more independent.我来写：我来写：_ The school can p

16、rovide some lessons about growing plants.The school can offer chances to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.我来写：我来写：_ The school can set up some clubs.The school can set up some clubs,such as cooking club and papercutting club.我来写：我来写：_ 2.就学校开就学校开设劳动教育设劳动教育课提出自己课提出自己的意见的意见(some ideas）正文

17、：阐正文：阐述个人对述个人对劳动教育劳动教育的看法以的看法以及学校开及学校开展劳动教展劳动教育课提建育课提建议议列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升The school can hold competitions.The school can hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes/papercutting.我来写：我来写：_ I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term.I believe I will do

18、well in it.2.就学校就学校开设劳动开设劳动教育课提教育课提出自己的出自己的意见意见(some ideas）正文：阐正文：阐述个人对述个人对劳动教育劳动教育的看法以的看法以及学校开及学校开展劳动教展劳动教育课提建育课提建议议希望新学期希望新学期可以开设这可以开设这门课程，也门课程，也相信自己可相信自己可以做好（以做好（do well in)结尾：表结尾：表达期待达期待列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分范文】写作练兵写作练兵 万唯原创万唯原创 三年的初中生活给我们留下了很多美好的回忆，丰富有

19、三年的初中生活给我们留下了很多美好的回忆，丰富有意义的社团活动更是让我们收获颇丰。假如你是李华，请你以意义的社团活动更是让我们收获颇丰。假如你是李华，请你以“A meaningful club activity I took part in”为题，根据以下提示和要求写为题，根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文。一篇短文。提示：提示：(1)What is the most meaningful club activity for you?(2)Why do you think it is a meaningful activity?(3)Whats your feeling towards the ac

20、tivity?要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)A meaningful club activity I took part inI joined many club activities.But the most meaningful club activity I took part in is_ _ giving help to a student.I took pa

21、rt in the meaningful club activity last year.After knowing a poor student in our school got a serious disease,we decided to help her.We collected things and raised more than 2，000 yuan.When we gave money to the girls parents,they couldnt help crying.Besides,we went to see her once a week to communicate with _ her.I think the activity is meaningful.We not only helped the girl who was in need,but also brought happiness to her.Though the activity was a small thing,we all felt happy to be able to help others.