高中英语-浙江卷高考续写公开课课件-共20张PPT).pptx

1、12阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so

2、 angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowc

3、apped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for

4、 the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To

5、 her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is t

6、hat for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._

7、 It was daybreak when Jane woke up._20162016年年1010月月浙江浙江高考高考读后续写读后续写22022-10-19ReadThinkWrite1)5W1H2)organization3)language关键词关键词开头语开头语Predict the plot properly1)Actions动作动作2)Feelings情感情感3)Surroundings环境环境Get the main idea32022-10-19Read for 5W1Hcontent who when where what Why main idea?On weekend i

8、n July,Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.42022-10-19 One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached

9、the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest an

10、d,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that

11、 she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the

12、sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane hea

13、rd a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters ca

14、me and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke up._In what order is the material developed?One weekend in July,As night was beginning to fall,Jane rose at the break of the day,But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Time Read for the organization52022-10-19阅读下面短文，根据所

15、给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that

16、she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mounta

17、in top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.L

18、ying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great j

19、oy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?U

20、nfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It was dayb

21、reak when Jane woke up._With no path to follow,Jane,she turned around,hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that Jane rose,hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Read for language62022-10-19细读两段续写的细读两段续写的开头语开头语，理顺续写段

22、落的，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系逻辑关系；围绕划定的围绕划定的1010个个关键词关键词，合理创新，合理创新故事情节故事情节。Para.1:But no more helicopters came and it was dark.How did Jane feel then?What did Jane do then?How did Jane struggle through the night?Para.2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Was Jane rescued?Who rescued Jane?How was she rescued?How did

23、she feel then?Think72022-10-19The underlined words where020304 yellow blousewalkedTomhelicopterJanelakestreamclimbedat a distanceto her great joyClassify 10 key words into different groups.82022-10-19Classify 10 key words into different groups._:Jane,Tom_:helicopter,yellow blouse_:walked,climbed_:la

24、ke,stream,at a distance_:to her great joycharactersactionsobjectssurroundingsfeelings92022-10-19A:actions A:actions 动作的动作的丰富性丰富性F:feelings F:feelings 情感情感表达的多样性表达的多样性S:surroundings S:surroundings 恰当运用环境描写恰当运用环境描写Write102022-10-19He was so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.Maybe asham

25、ed of what he had done,he was about to turn away when I seized his arm quickly.I stared at him for several seconds and broke the silence,saying“Roy,trust me.I am willing to help you.”Having regretted what he had done,he couldnt hold back his tears,bent down and burst out crying with his head buried

26、in his hands.Tears welling up in my eyes,I picked him up and hugged him tightly.He put his head against my should,sobbing and saying“If I could turn the clock back,I wouldnt have stolen the money”.A:A:动作的动作的丰富性丰富性112022-10-19F:F:情感表达的多样性情感表达的多样性 Janes feelingsIs that for me?“Tom!”“Help!”confused,hun

27、gry and thirsty.walked away,turned around,criedactionswordsthoughtslooks122022-10-19 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.Amid the dreadful darkness,strange sounds of wild beasts were heard.“If it werent for that stupid quarrel,I wouldnt be trapped here,”she thought to herself,r

28、egretful tears clouding her eyes.Surrounded by the fear and tiredness,Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep.“Tom,is that you?”she murmured.“Tom,help!”In her dream,she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance.It was day break when Jane woke up.After a washing,Jane continued to

29、 force her way ahead.In the boundless search,she found it impossible to find a way out,which threw her into desperation.Fortunately,a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment.In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it.She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.To her

30、 great joy,this time,the helicopter spotted her.The moment Jane was reunited with her husband,her tears clouded her vision.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.thoughtssurroundingslookswords132022-10-191.Stepping out of the office,we felt a sense of relief with the sun

31、 shining down over us.(Roy 续写续写)2.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.(范文范文)3.A ray of sunlight shines through the dark clouds,bringing warmth and hope to the world.4.Seeing the moon shining in the dark sky,he couldnt help thinking of the days that she spent with Tom

32、and her family.(王晨嵛王晨嵛)5.The cold wind blew violately in the gloomy air.(胡缨红胡缨红)6.With the cold wind blowing,Jane had to.(姜玉萌姜玉萌)7.The sound of the stream sounded relaxing,which relieved Janes anxiety.(马莹昕马莹昕)S S:恰当恰当运用环境描写运用环境描写142022-10-19 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.

33、Exhausted and hopeless,Jane sat beside a tree,stretching her acing arms.“Had I not qualrrelled with Tom,I wouldnt have been here.”She was so regretful that tears welled up in her eyes.Since Jane already worn out,she quickly fall asleep beside the tree.It was day break when Jane woke up.The sun shone

34、 through a break in the clouds.Jane walked along a stream,hoping to find the lake where Tom may camp at night.Suddenly,she heard a loud scream at a distance,“Jane,where are you?”To her great joy,it was Tom.They hugged tightly with each other,swearing that they will never leave each other again.15202

35、2-10-19162172WindWind1.A gust of wind blew and parted the dropping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.2.A cold breeze blew through the quiet park.3.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.S S:恰当恰当运用环境描写运用环境描写w wind water skyind water sky一阵风一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳低垂的枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。吹，吹起了弯柳低垂的枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。凉爽凉爽的微风

36、吹拂着寂静的公园。的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。冷风吹拂过我的头发。冷风吹拂过我的头发。182022-10-19WaterWater1.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.2.There was a brook not far away from here,rushing and sparkling between green banks.3.At one point,the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.

37、水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。离离此此不不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。在某在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。192022-10-19SkySky1.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.2.By 3 oclock,the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.3.Like a dim lamp,the moon shone above and the stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。月亮像一盏昏暗的灯，从上面照下来，星星也好奇的眨着眼。月亮像一盏昏暗的灯，从上面照下来，星星也好奇的眨着眼。他们在落日的暖阳下紧紧拥抱在一起。他们在落日的暖阳下紧紧拥抱在一起。202022-10-19