高三英语写作公开课课件-(共26张).pptx

1、What makes a good writing?What makes a good writing?A Good Writing作文评分标准作文评分标准分数分数档档要要 点点词词 汇汇语语 法法交交 际际逻逻 辑辑21-25 覆盖所有要点丰富基本无错得体，满足要求清楚、合理16-20 覆盖所有要点基本满足任务要求少许错误基本符合要求清楚、合理11-15 漏掉一些要点有限有一些错误但不影响理解基本得体基本清楚6-10漏掉主要要点贫乏错误较多，影响理解不得体混乱1-5未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关1.要点完整；2.语言准确且多样；3.结构清晰；4.逻辑连贯5.交际得体6.书写美观好作文标

2、准：好作文标准：好作文的写作步骤好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法写作七步法)审 题体裁体裁时态时态人称人称要点要点列提纲结构结构要点要点关键词关键词补充细节语言表达准确准确地道地道词汇词汇句式句式连词成句+过渡词逻辑逻辑连贯连贯流畅流畅连句成篇润色修正美化句子美化句子高级替换高级替换定稿 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事注意：1.词数120左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好 Dear sir or madam,_ _ I am looking forward to h

3、earing from you.Sincerely,Li Hua(2019 全国1卷)体裁体裁人称人称时态时态 要求要求一般现在时一般现在时 120左右左右 gallery,art center应用文（申请信）应用文（申请信）第一人称第一人称A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings,traditional Chinese art,the artworks.字数字数内内 容容a volunteer,the voluntary job,the position写作背景写作背景:(抓关键词抓关键词)美术馆美术

4、馆 中国画展中国画展 志愿者志愿者内容要求：内容要求：1.写信目的写信目的;2.个人优势个人优势;3.能做的事能做的事自我介绍自我介绍+写信目的写信目的开头开头正文正文结尾结尾Para.1Para.1Para.2Para.2Para.3Para.3个人优势个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势个优势）总结总结意愿意愿自我介绍自我介绍+写信目的写信目的Para.1Para.1我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者

5、；我迫不及待地写信想申请这个工作。写信想申请这个工作。I am Li Hua,an exchange student from China.an exchange student;the coming Chinese painting exhibition;the local gallery;cant wait to do;apply for the position;I Hear that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery.I can t wait to

6、apply for the position.个人优势个人优势+能做的事能做的事 （中国画展）（中国画展）Para.2Para.2因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。traditional Chinese art;I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good educat

7、ion in art,so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.be deeply interested in;have a good knowledge/grasp/understanding/command of;not only but also;explain toI can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.个人优势个人优势+能做的事能做的事 （在伦敦的中国人）（在伦敦

8、的中国人）我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障碍。碍。have a good knowledge/grasp/understanding/command of;I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating with others.Para.2Para.2communicate with others;have no trouble/difficulty in doing个人优势个人优势+能做的事能做的事 （申请做志愿者）（申请做志愿者）我非常热

9、情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者工作。工作。enthusiastic and responsible;I am enthusiastic and responsible,so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.Para.2Para.2be qualified for 总结总结具备了以上提到的所有品质具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述如上所述)，我可以肯定的，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。说，我就是你要找的合适人选。As is mentioned

10、 above；With all these qualities mentioned above,I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.Para.2Para.2with；qualities表达感谢和期待回复表达感谢和期待回复Para.3Para.3如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。I would appreciate it if;I would appreciate it if you could take my applic

11、ation into consideration.take my application into consideration/account/take account of/seriouslyLooking forward to your early reply.逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇排序关系 递进关系举例关系转折关系因果关系归纳总结并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least;at first;first of all;in the first place;at last;last of all;for one thing;fo

12、r another thing;on the one hand;on the other hand;finallyand;too;as well as;along with;together with;both and;not only but alsofor example;for instance;like;such as;as follows;take as an example but;however;while;though;on the contrarybecause(of);since;owing to;due to;thanks to;as a result/consequen

13、ce(of);thus;thereforein a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion;in general;in summary;on the whole;in briefwhats more;besides;furthermore;in addition;additionally;to make matters worse;whats worse;worse still;（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）自我介绍自我介绍+写信目的写信目的开头开头正文正文结尾结尾Para.1Para.1Para.2Para.2Para.3Pa

14、ra.3个人优势个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势个优势）总结总结意愿意愿逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇排序关系 递进关系举例关系转折关系因果关系归纳总结并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least;at first;first of all;in the first place;at last;last of all;for one thing;for another thing;on the one hand;on the other hand;finallyand;too;as

15、 well as;along with;together with;both and;not only but alsofor example;for instance;like;such as;as follows;take as an example but;however;while;though;on the contrarybecause(of);since;owing to;due to;thanks to;as a result/consequence(of);thus;thereforein a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion;in

16、general;in summary;on the whole;in briefwhats more;besides;furthermore;in addition;additionally;to make matters worse;whats worse;worse still;（使用恰当的连接词）（使用恰当的连接词）Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua,an exchange student from China.I Hear that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition

17、in the local gallery.I can t wait to apply for the position.At first,I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art,so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stor

18、ies behind them.Besides,I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating with others.Additionally,I am enthusiastic and responsible,so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.With all these qualities mentioned above,I can say with certainty that I am the r

19、ight person you are looking for.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.好作文的写作步骤好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法写作七步法)审 题体裁体裁时态时态人称人称要点要点列提纲结构结构要点要点关键词关键词补充细节语言表达准确准确地道地道词汇词汇句式句式连词成句+过渡词逻辑逻辑连贯连贯流畅流畅连句成篇润色修正美化句子美化句子高级替换高级替换定稿二二.使用使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档非谓语动

20、词使句子简洁高档三三.巧巧用倒装增强句子表现力用倒装增强句子表现力四四.尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式一一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句主宾表同从句)各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态一一.使用较高级词汇使用较高级词汇与句型与句型使文章增加使文章增加吸引力（形吸引力（形容词做状语，对谓语动词强调）容词做状语，对谓语动词强调）I am enthusiastic and responsible and I believe I am perfectly

21、 qualified for the job as a volunteer.Enthusiastic and responsible,I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.Deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and having received a good education in art,I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.二二.使用使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档非谓

22、语动词使句子简洁高档I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and have received a good education in art.I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.三三.巧巧用倒装增强句子表现力用倒装增强句子表现力Not only can I explain

23、to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.I am quite satisfied that I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating with others.四四.尝试尝试多样化表达方式多样化表达方式(主语从句主语从句+表语从句表语从句)What satisfies me most is that my good command of English makes me ha

24、ve no difficulty communicating with others.Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua,an exchange student from China.Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery.I can t wait to apply for the position.Deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and having re

25、ceived a good education in art,I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.Not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.Besides,What satisfies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty communicating with others

26、.Additionally,enthusiastic and responsible,I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.With all these qualities mentioned above,I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consid

27、eration.Looking forward to your early reply.好作文的写作步骤好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法写作七步法)审 题体裁体裁时态时态人称人称要点要点列提纲结构结构要点要点关键词关键词补充细节语言表达准确准确地道地道词汇词汇句式句式连词成句+过渡词逻辑逻辑连贯连贯流畅流畅连句成篇润色修正美化句子美化句子高级替换高级替换定稿 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的外国中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1.口语能力2.相关经验3.应聘目的注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好 Dear sir or madam,_ _ I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Li Hua