2023届高考英语一轮复习写作备考：读后续写专题练习指导.docx

1、2023届高考英语一轮复习写作备考：读后续写专题练习指导【题目展示】I was moving as fast as I could, stepping cautiously from rock to rock along the uneven jetty(栈桥). Far ahead, I could see the back of my brothers sandy hair and the bright orange of his shorts.“Too slow, sister!” I heard Sam yell as he hopped with ease.“Ill show him

2、,” I thought, and attempted a double jump. What a mistake! My left foot came down hard between the edges of two gray rocks, scraping my ankle.” “Ouch!” I yelled. I tried to wiggle(扭动) my foot out, but my shoe was stuck. I bent closer to the rock and thats when I saw it: a shiny, square shaped stone

3、the color of water, attached to a glittery gold chain. It was just lying there on the wet sand, and a few seconds later it was in my pocket.Sam squinted(眯着眼睛看) in the sun. Could he tell I was hiding the most perfect discovery of the summer? I kept turning the treasure around in my pocket, pushing ea

4、ch corner of the square stone into my finger. I was dizzy, but I didnt want Sam to notice. He liked to tell everybody my business.“Ryan saved the mini cola bottle from the carnival! It happened to be perfect for sand art!“Ryan wasted her allowance on salt and pepper shakers from the yard sale!” They

5、 were antique little pig and cost only 50 cents.My family calls me their “little collector”. Some mean kids at school call me “trash girl”.Sam and I walked along the main street, the small buildings giving us a break from the sun. Through the window of the candy shop, I could see tubes of colorful j

6、elly beans. A sign on the windows glass read LOST: Gold and blue necklace. Very special. If found, call Chrissy at 555-9924.Chrissy had drawn a crayon version of the necklace at the bottom of the poster. The necklace looked different from the one I clutched in my pocket, I decided. Rounder, bluer. T

7、he poster appeared old and weathered. It must have been put up months ago. We continued to walk, and I noticed four more posters. Someone must have returned that necklace by now, I thought.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for

8、 special things, lost in thought.Paragraph 2:Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.【文本解读】时间：after seeing the poster地点：at homein the candy shop人物：Sam, Ryan, Chrissy分别为弟弟，姐姐(也就是主人公“我”)、糖果店主人主题：诚实 拾金不昧文本主要内容：“我”是一个热衷于收集各种东西的小女孩，有一次和弟弟在海边时偶然捡到了一条特殊而又珍贵的项链，但是在回家途中看到了寻

9、找这条项链的海报。接下来是有关这条项链的是否归还的问题。根据原文信息，结果应该是积极向上的，由一开始还在犹豫，不是很愿意归还项链的【负】转变为最后约见Chrissy，归还其项链的【正】能量结局。【段首句解读】“3Q”法应对考场作文 三个问题不固定 可以用英文也可以用中文 并给出解答1.抓住段首句的关键词key word2.根据情节，再提出三个问题然后回答这三个问题3.抓住故事的主题themeParagraph1：Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.Para

10、graph2：Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.首句一到家，我就把项链摆放在一个专门放特殊物品的地方，然后陷入沉思。接下来后文应该描述我关于是否归还项链的心理斗争，但是根据第二段首句十五分钟过后，我在糖果店之中，并坐在Chrissy的对面，可知我经过一段时间的心理斗争后，最终还是决定找项链的主人，并根据正能量原则，一定是皆大欢喜，我将项链归还给主人，体现拾金不昧，诚实诚信的优秀品质。【语料储备】第一段可以表达我的纠结，犹豫或担忧。Tortured by the waves of

11、thoughts, I felt myself clutched by the dire emotion somewhere between apprehension and horror. 被一波可怕的思想的浪潮所折磨，我感到自己被一种介于忧虑和恐惧之间的可怕的情绪所抓住。Hesitant and tense(形容词作状语), I constantly played with his fingers and didnt know whether should I return it or not. 我犹豫而又紧张，不停地摆弄手指，不知道是否应该归还这个项链。第二段可以表现我和Chrissy的

12、喜悦和感动。The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。shine like a diamond 像钻石一样闪闪发光She cast/flashed/shot me a reassuring/beaming smile. 她朝我投以一个宽慰的/灿烂的微笑。cast/shoot/flash sb. a adj. smile 向某人投以一个的微笑She shed tears of joy. 她高兴得流下了眼泪。shed流；洒She was overflowing with joy. 她洋溢着喜悦。(比喻手法)overflo

13、w with feeling 充满，洋溢着某种情绪Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. 她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。(独立主格)tears filling her eyes 热泪盈眶【下水作文】Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.“Maybe its just the one they have lost.” I mumbled to myself. Gazing at t

14、he treasured necklace, I was totally entranced by its beauty and even had an impulse to hide it away in secret, because anyway it was picked up by accident. But on thinking of this, I felt someone had stuck a sharp stick into my side and my heart was wrung by extreme anguish. After struggling for a

15、long time, my initial desire to keep the necklace gave way to my resolve to return it. The next several minutes witnessed me dialing Chrissys phone and making an appointment with her.Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.I took the necklace out of my pocket and g

16、ently handed it to Chrissy. No sooner had she shot a glance at the necklace than she screamed with exhilaration, “Yeah, it is exactly what I have lost. Thanks a lot!” Meanwhile, she grabbed a handful of candies for me to express her appreciation for my finding the necklace. A beaming smile escaping

17、from her lips, I held the candies gently in cupped hands and felt a surpassing warmth surging through my body. It dawned on me that nothing is more precious than honesty.【参考范文】Once home, I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things, lost in thought.So far, there were a variety of thin

18、gs like mini cola bottles and shakers. I stared at the stone, so clean and polished. Could it be Chrissys? Was it a very special necklace? Should I return it to her? I paced back and forth in the room anxiously, not knowing what to do. Having struggled for a long time, I finally decided to call the

19、number on the poster and get in touch with Chrissy. I told her that I might have something that belonged to her and made an appointment with her.Fifteen minutes later, I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.We were drinking milkshakes and sharing an order of sweet potato fries. Looking

20、at the blue stone in her hand with her tearful eyes, she told me that the necklace was a gift from her mom before she got sick and she was grateful to me for returning the necklace to her. “Holding onto it somehow makes things a little better.” she said. I couldnt agree more with her. It dawned on me that I became “a treasure girl” instead of “a trash girl” called by the mean kids at school.【文本词汇积累】1. as far as one can：尽可能=as far as possible2. with ease：容易地3. attempt a double jump：尝试双脚跳