2020浙江高考新冠状病毒应用文建议信.ppt

1、高考书面表达： 新冠状病毒之建议信,复工潮 Resumption tide,novel coronavirus,financial difficulty,dilemma,A Letter of Advice,假定你是李华，看到越来越多的人复工了，你的同学Tom觉得太无聊了，约你一起去旅游。请你给Tom写一封信，表明自己无法赴约。内容包括： 1你的答复； 2你的建议； 注意： 1词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Tom， _ _ _ Yours sincerely， Li Hua,建议信    A letter of

2、suggestion,注意事项： 建议信写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。, 首段： a.看情况简介自己，不要罗嗦； b.说明写作背景、写作目的，注意礼貌。 主体： 建议内容，注意礼貌委婉，否则易变成投诉信或者抱怨信； 尾段： 总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。,一、写作方法,二、写作流程,说明写信的背景、目的,提出建议,提出希望采纳建议(盼望回复),第一部分：说明写信的背景、目的,.的建议 n.: advice / suggestion(s) / proposal(s) / recommendation(s) v.: advise / suggest / pro

3、pose / recommend a.: helpful / important / valuable / practical 提出建议 make a suggestion offer a proposal provide / supply come up with / put forward ,第一部分：说明写信的背景、目的,(1) 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。 I'm more than delighted to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you som

4、e advice on how to learn English well in high school. (2) 我给你写信是想告诉你我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。 I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more guests.,(3) 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常 的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 I'm sorry to hear that you are havi

5、ng trouble   fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. (4) 还有许多其它可以保持身心健康的方式，我给你推荐一些。 There're many other ways to keep you healthy both mentally and physically, and I'd like to recommend you some.,第二部分：提出建议,依我之见

6、in my opinion / view / point of view. as far as I am concerned I think / believe / suppose / assume. 你最好. /最好不要. /.有必要 You'd better (not ) V sth. / It's necessary that. 如果我是你，. If I were you, . 只有用这种方法，你才能. Only in this way can you.,采取.措施 take . measures / steps / action to V sth Measures /

7、Steps / Action should be taken to. a.: necessary / essential / effective / efficient / enormous. important / significant / crucial positive / active / supportive negative / opposed subjective / objective neutral indifferent,首先，看书是一个不错的消遣方式，你可以趁这段时间来仔细品读。 First, reading is not a bad choice to kill /

8、pass the time. You can make full use of / take good advantage of this special period to explore what it conveys.,第二部分：提出建议,而且，随着高考的临近，留出时间来好好学习是非常重要的事情。 moreover / furthermore / what's more with the College Entrance Examination coming / approaching / around the corner determine / call for 需要 要求/

9、 call on号召 It's most significant / crucial to set aside some time to study hard.,此外，定期锻炼不仅可以使你放松，还可以增强体魄。 in addition / besides / . regular exercise / exercise regularly be relaxed / refreshed（精神焕发） build up / strengthen / improve one's physique In addition, not only can regular exercise mak

10、e you feel refreshed, but also it ensures / guarantees you a strong body.,只有通过合理安排时间，你才能充实你的假期生活,不再无聊。 Only by scheduling your time appropriately can your enrich your holiday life and stay away from boredom. 如你一定要去旅游，也请保护好自己。 If you must travel, make sure to protect yourself well.,第三部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意

11、(盼望回复),(1) 我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, don't hesitate to let me know. (2) 我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。 I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I'm ready to discuss about furthe

12、r details with you.,Dear _, You have asked me for my advice about _ , and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here. In my opinion, it is better for you to take the following actions: First, _. Whats more, _.Finally,_. （建议的内容） I hope you will find these suggestions useful, and I am ready

13、 to hear good news from you. Yours sincerely Li Hua,A Letter of Advice,假定你是李华，看到越来越多的人复工了，你的同学Tom觉得太无聊了，约你一起去旅游。请你给Tom写一封信，表明自己无法赴约。内容包括： 1你的答复； 2你的看法； 注意： 1词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Tom， _ _ _ Yours sincerely， Li Hua,Sample,Dear Tom, Glad to receive your invitation to travel, bu

14、t I'm sorry that I have to let you down. The reason why I can't go with you is that the situation of Novel Coronavirus is still very serious. And I strongly advise you stay at home too. If you feel bored, you can read some books you are interested in. Burying yourself in study is also suggested, as the College Entrance Examination is around the corner. Hope you can understand the situation and accept my suggestions. Yours, Li Hua,Sample,Thanks for your attention!,