十二月正反观点类作文课件.pptx

1、正反观点类作文现在高中生普遍流行平安夜送苹果，圣诞节互送贺卡。针现在高中生普遍流行平安夜送苹果，圣诞节互送贺卡。针对这种现象，你班同学进行了一次班会讨论，请你把讨论对这种现象，你班同学进行了一次班会讨论，请你把讨论的情况写成一篇英语文章，发给某英语报社的编辑。的情况写成一篇英语文章，发给某英语报社的编辑。多数学生反对多数学生反对原因原因少数学生支持少数学生支持原因原因你的观点你的观点注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数Dear Editor:Now many senior high students exchange apples an

2、d Christmas cards on Christmas Eve.审审抄抄列列How to write your compositionHow to write your composition润润 文文 体：体：时时 态：态：人人 称：称：要要 点：点：议论文议论文 一般现在时一般现在时 第第 一和第三人称一和第三人称现象现象 讨论讨论 观点观点 原因原因 我的观点我的观点审审正反正反观点观点对比对比类的类的文章文章提出问题提出问题不同观点对比不同观点对比说明自己观点说明自己观点Paragraph1Paragraph2Paragraph3 (4)我的观点我的观点:(1)现象是什么？对此，

3、我班同学进现象是什么？对此，我班同学进行了一次班会讨论。有不同观点行了一次班会讨论。有不同观点(2)态度一态度一:多数学生反对。原因多数学生反对。原因1 原因原因2(3)态度二态度二:少数学生支持。原因少数学生支持。原因1 原因原因2列列 我班同学对学生是否应该交换礼物进行了一次班会讨论我班同学对学生是否应该交换礼物进行了一次班会讨论提出问题提出问题We had a heated discussion about/on whether students should exchange gifts on festivals.Recently,a heated discussion has bee

4、n held in our class on whether its reasonable for students to exchange gifts on Christmas Eve.There is a widespread concern over the issue that students exchange gifts on festivals.Paragraph1 末尾过渡句：不同的人有不同观点 Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter./think quite differently on

5、this matter.Opinions are mainly divided into two groups on this issue.There are two opposite opinions about it.People have taken different attitudes towards Paragraph2 开头开头表达观点表达观点:多数学生反对多数学生反对1)People who are against the idea think that2)of them are opposed to the idea.3)A majority of them object t

6、o exchanging gifts.4)Most of them disapprove of this behavior.观点一观点一原因原因1.浪费钱和精力，影响学习。浪费钱和精力，影响学习。1)It is a waste of money and energy,which will influence our studying.2)It wastes money as well as energy,having a negative effect on our studyng.原因2.这是外国的节日，我们没必要去庆祝。The reason why theyre against it is

7、 that its a foreign fstival,so its unnecessary to celebrete it.原因原因3.3.易于攀比，是不良习惯易于攀比，是不良习惯It is easy to form the bad habit of keeping up with the Joneses 少数少数学生学生支持支持 1)However,a minority of them hold a different view.2)But people who are for/in favor of it dont think so.3)However,each coin has two

8、 sides.4)Nevertheless,few of them hold the opposite opinion.观点二观点二原因原因1.有助于增进友谊，使我们的生活更加丰富多彩有助于增进友谊，使我们的生活更加丰富多彩原因原因2.缓解学习压力缓解学习压力，让我们，让我们学生感到放松学生感到放松For another,it can relieve the pressure of studying and relax us students.It contributes to promoting our friendship with classmates,making our life m

9、ore colorful.For one thing,it can help students get along well with each other，which makes our life more colorful.It can add/enhance the festive atmosphere of joy.It can add more atmosphere to the festival.原因原因3.增添节日的欢喜氛围增添节日的欢喜氛围As far as Im concerned,whether we students exchange gifts depends on o

10、urselves.We can exchange,but not over do it.自己观点自己观点在我看来，是否在我看来，是否交换礼物取决于自己。可以交换，但不交换礼物取决于自己。可以交换，但不能能过分。过分。Personally,As for me,Its my opinion that As far as Im concerned,these activities are expected to be limited.On the one hand,time is of great significance to us senior high students.On the othe

11、r hand,some businessmen raise the price of gifts on purpose.I hold the view that we senior students are supposed to celebrate Christmas.Because we not only can spread foreign culture but also can deliver our best wishes to people we love.自己观点自己观点技巧点拨技巧点拨词汇词汇句式句式衔接词衔接词2使用较高级的词汇名词性从句强调句和倒装句润润定语从句递进、转折

12、、因果、对比、总结 Pattern.There is a widespread concern over the issue that（作文题目（作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the firs

13、t place,原因一原因一.Furthermore,in the second place,原因二原因二.So it goes without saying that观点一观点一.People,however,differ in their opinions on thismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that观点二观点二.In their point of view,for one thing，原因一原因一.For another thing,原因二原因二.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat观点二观点二_.As far as I am

14、 concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二观点一或二.Itis not only because _,but also because _.高考作文高分卷的特点高考作文高分卷的特点 结构结构美：美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。外在美：外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。抄抄acceptablegoodniceneatexcellentperfectsuperb太挤了太挤了太乱了太乱了太空了太空了太潦草了太潦草了太花了太花了 仿写文仿写文 假设你是高三学生李平，近来，你的同学去饭店过生日的现象越来假设你是高三学生李平，近来，你的同学去饭店过生日的现象越来越盛行，对此，同学们有不同的看法。越盛行，对此，同学们有不同的看法。赞同者理由赞同者理由:1.有利于同学的友谊有利于同学的友谊 2.为同学提供交际机会。为同学提供交际机会。3学习之余可以放学习之余可以放松一下松一下反对者理由反对者理由:1.造成浪费；造成浪费；2.易于攀比，是不良习惯；易于攀比，是不良习惯；3.不利于青少年的学习和不利于青少年的学习和成长成长你的观点：至少两条。你的观点：至少两条。写作要求写作要求至少至少150词词参考词汇：攀比参考词汇：攀比 keep up with the Joneses