2021年中考英语写作指导课件.pptx

1、Writing 中考作文指导中考作文指导 书面表达评分标准：书面表达评分标准：第五档：（1315分）能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。第四档：（1012分）能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。第三档：（79分）能写明一些要点，语言错误较多，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第二档：（46分）能写出少数要点，语言错误较多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。第一档：（13分）只能写出若干词语，无可读的句子。：语言无误语言无误(语法和中英文表达语法和中英文表达)；连接词至少连接词至少3；高级句子至少高级句子至少2；词数够；层次清晰。词数够；层次清晰。得

2、满分作文的步骤：得满分作文的步骤：第一步：第一步：审审题题明确明确体裁体裁、时态时态、人称人称具体做法：用笔勾画具体做法：用笔勾画假设你是阳光中学的李明，你在学校看到一张环保俱乐部的招募海报。请根据海报内容，用英语给Helen写一封电子邮件，询问与该俱乐部相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：1.如何申请加入俱乐部；2.俱乐部活动的时间和需要做的事情；3.你还想了解到该俱乐部的其他信息。人称：第一人称人称：第一人称时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时询问需用疑问句句型。询问需用疑问句句型。注意：注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理

3、清楚，书写规范；语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数：词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。第二步：列列要点要点具体做法：有层次地写出要点具体做法：有层次地写出要点 列出相关单词、词组、句列出相关单词、词组、句型型（1）如何申请加入俱乐部；如何申请加入俱乐部；（2）俱乐部活动的时间和需要做的事情；俱乐部活动的时间和需要做的事情；（3）其他信息其他信息jointheclub/beamemberoftheclubthetimeandtheactivities千万不要遗漏！千万不要遗漏！千万不要遗漏！千万不要遗漏！千万不要遗

4、漏！千万不要遗漏！introducemyfriendstojointheclub考虑所用询问句型：考虑所用询问句型：Iwanttoknow+宾从宾从/Iwonder+宾从宾从Iwouldliketoknow+宾从宾从Couldyoutellme+宾从宾从注意宾语从句中的注意宾语从句中的语序语序。HowcanI 第三步：连词成连词成句句1.如何申请加入俱乐部；如何申请加入俱乐部；2.俱乐部活动的时间和需要做的事情；俱乐部活动的时间和需要做的事情；3.你还想了解到该俱乐部的其他信息。你还想了解到该俱乐部的其他信息。1.IwouldliketoknowhowIcanjoinyourclub.2.Co

5、uldyoutellmethetimeandtheactivities?3.IwonderifIcanintroducemyfriendstojoinyourclub.;扩扩充内容充内容Do I have to write an application letter?I just need to give you a call and tell you something about myself.I can only take part in activities at the weekend.I want to know what I should prepare before the a

6、ctivities.I hope to get your reply.My email is .第四步：美美化化1.IwouldliketoknowhowIcanjoinyourclub.2.Couldyoutellmethetimeandtheactivities?3.IwonderifIcanintroducemyfriendstojoinyourclub.If I want to be a member of your club,do I have to write an application letter?Or I just need to give you a call and t

7、ell you something about myself.I can only take part in activities at the weekend.I hope to get your reply.My email is .I want to know what I should prepare before the activities.Firstly,I would like to know how I can join your club.IfIwanttobeamemberofyourclub,do I have to write an application lette

8、r?OrI just need to give you a call and tell you something about myself.Secondly,I can only take part in activities at the weekend.Could you please tell me the time and the activities youorganize?And Ialsowant to know what I should prepare before the activities.Finally,can I introduce my friends to j

9、oin the club?I amlookingforwardtoyour early reply.Please call me on 025-86430246 oremail me at .1.Second,Please tell me when the activity starts and ends.2.Sometime I have no time to help your.3.If you allowed,we will do as possible as we can to help the club do anything.4.I wonders whether I can go

10、 to club anytime or not.5.Last,I want to know how many people will join us?第五步第五步:检检查查Spelling(拼写拼写)Capitalletter(大小写）大小写）Punctuation(标点符号）标点符号）Tense(时态时态)（主谓一致）（主谓一致）6.I also consider what the club need us to do.Otherwise,I want to learn about other information.7.How many members there are in the c

11、lub?I also want to know what should I do？8.If I can join you,I will think it is my pleasure.If I join the club,will I need to do what?9.I think it is important for us to protect environment.10.Then I wonder that when the club takes action.Missingwords（漏词）（漏词）Usingwrongword（选词错误）（选词错误）Chinglish（中式英语）

12、（中式英语）Wrongstructure（结构混乱）（结构混乱）好作赏析好作赏析遗漏要点！遗漏要点！内容可以进行适当的扩充！固定搭配用错固定搭配用错my缺少主句，缺少主句，whether引导宾语从句引导宾语从句the句意不通句意不通另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。规范抄写规范抄写怎样写出高分作文？怎样写出高分作文？1、审题审题（体裁、人称、体裁、人称、时态时态）2、列要点列要点，写出写出重点单词重点单词，短语短语和和句型句型4、美化美化：注意注意开头与结尾开头与结尾连接

13、词的连接词的使用；有把握地使用高级句子使用；有把握地使用高级句子中英文的表达中英文的表达差异及语法问题差异及语法问题5、检查检查修改，修改，规范抄写规范抄写3、连词连词成句成句（有层次）（有层次）扩充内容扩充内容千万不要遗漏要点千万不要遗漏要点大错指大错指：内容：内容要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、语态误用语态误用。小错指小错指：冠词：冠词、介词、介词、拼写、标点等拼写、标点等方面的方面的错误错误Properconjuctions(恰当的连接词恰当的连接词)时间顺序时间顺序First(of all),second,then,last but not the

14、leastFirstly,secondly,finally/at last/in the end对称关系对称关系on one hand,on the other hand转折关系转折关系but,however,although/though因果关系因果关系because,so,as a result,therefore,thus,条件条件if,unless递进顺序递进顺序Whats more,moreover美化美化文章文章美化美化文章文章1.I hope you can help me.Im _ your help.2.They arrived very early.They arrived

15、 _.3.His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised._,his dog was saved at last.4.I think learning English is interesting._5.We should protect the environment._Can you make these sentences better?looking forward toas early as they couldTo his surpriseI find it really fun to learn EnglishIts our dut

16、y to protect the environment.美化美化文章文章She is too young to carry the heavy box.She isnt old enough to carry the heavy box.She is so young that she cant carry the heavy box.She is such a young girl that shae cant carry the heavy box.6.She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.选择最有把握选择最有把握的表达方式的表达方式评分说明：评分说明：1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错，一处大错扣一分。2.通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣2分。3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于一个大错。4.相同错误，只扣一次。5.词数不足80词扣2分。6.文中若出现自己及学校等真实名称扣3分。7.书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣2分。