人教八年级下册UnitCouldyoupleasecleanyourroom写作课课件.pptx

1、名词/动名词词块:a waste of time class meeting as much time as possible 动词词块:have a discussion on share some housework pay more attention to studydepend ondevelop ones independencedevelop the sense of responsibilityreduce the pressure（）依靠，依赖（）培养独立性（）就进行讨论（）减压（）分担家务（）更专注学习（）培养责任感介词词块:in order to get good gra

2、des in my opinion in a wordby doing sth.（）依我看来（）总之（）通过做某事（）为了取得好成绩Knowledge aimsAbility aimsEmotional aimsTo learn to express your opinion about the topicChores&HouseworkTo improve the writing skills by making sentences and coopertion.To learn to share the housework with our parents and communicate

3、with them.What kind of housework do you do at home?Do you like or dislike doing chores at home?ProsCons请注意：先陈述观点，再说明理由（10）As for.至于，关于How to express your own opinions on something？In my opinion/view在我看来As we know/As is known to all正如我们所知As a result/In a word/In fact因此，总之，事实上Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/

4、Finally第一，第二，第三，最后On one hand.On the other hand在一方面，在另一方面I think/believe我认为，我相信【例句【例句1 1】Playing computer games is a waste of time.浪费时间做家务是浪费时间。【仿写】（汉译英）【例句【例句2 2】2.Tom my maths.我喜欢帮妈妈做家务。【仿写】（汉译英）help sb.do/with sth.帮助某人做某事【例句【例句3 3】Its very hard for him to study two languages.对青少年来说，在家里做家务是有趣又有意义的

5、。【仿写】（汉译英）【例句【例句4 4】They should spend their time on schoolwork in order to get good grades and get into a good university.李明花了很多时间在篮球上就是为了能赢得篮球比赛。【仿写】（汉译英）1.浪费时间2.帮助某人做某事3.对某人来说做某事怎么样4.花时间在某事上5.为了 a waste of timehelp sb.do/with sthIts+adj.for/of sb.to do sth spend time on sth in order to Doing house

6、work is a part of our life.Do middle school students do housework?Recently a survey was made among 100 students.We can get some information from the survey.Only ten percent of the students often do housework.About twenty-five percent of the students do housework sometimes.And the rest of the student

7、s seldom or never do housework.This result takes me by surprise.（普宁市2017-2018学年 八年级下学期期末素质监测真题）Pre-writing According to the survey,forty percent of the students dislike doing housework,and eighteen of them say that their patents dont allow them to do housework.I think sharing the housework is helpfu

8、l for parents.As for students,we can get a lot of practice by sharing the housework.And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up.So I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life.重要信息点考点表述简洁答案直接获取信息重组信息归纳命题原则The number of the students who were surveyed86._The pe

9、rcentage of the students who seldom or never do housework87._10065%The feeling the writer has after knowing the result88._The thing students can get by sharing the houseworking89._The number of the students whose parents dont allow them to do housework90._SurprisedA lot of practice 18 本单元的话题为“谈论学生是否

10、应该做家务”,在写相关作文时,首先要提出自己的观点,然后根据观点做进一步阐述。体裁多以议论文为主。While-writing 三审写作要点这是一篇关于是否应该做家务的议论文，根据题目提示可考虑采用下面的模板。做家务引出话题阐明原因列举例子I think its necessary for us学会自理:We can learn self-care保持健康:make our bodies healthy学到东西:learn a lot of things.For example,写作提纲1.表明观点，我们是否应该做家务活；I think its necessary for usI think i

11、ts necessary for us to do some housework at home.1.做家务可以使我们学会自理；2.做家务可以使我们的身体保持健康、强壮；3.做家务可以帮助我们学到很多东西；A.学会自理:We can learn self-careB.保持健康:make our bodies healthyC.学到东西:learn a lot of things.A.By doing it we can learn self-care.B.We can make our bodies healthy and strong.C.Doing housework can also h

12、elp us learn a lot of things.A.I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home.B.By doing it we can learn self-care.We can make our bodies healthy and strong.Doing housework can also help uslearn a lot of things.And it can make us understand our parents better.C.I always help my parents wi

13、th housework.For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.表示并列或递进:and,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor.表示结果:sothat,tooto .表示转折:but,however,although,though.表示因果:because,so,therefore,as a result.表示条件:if,unless.表示对比:on the one handon the other hand.表示解释:for example,such as.表示顺序:first,firs

14、t(of all),to begin with;second,next,later,finally,in the end.表示目的:to,in order to,in order that.表示结论:all in all,in a word I think its necessary for us to do some housework at home.By doing it we can learn self-care.Besides,we can make our bodies healthy and strong.At the same time,doing housework can

15、 also help us learn a lot of things.And it can make us understand our parents better.I always help my parents with housework.For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.It can make your parents feel relaxed,why not go to do that?.活用各种句式.避免重复使用同一词汇.多用固定搭配和谚语.改变句子开头的方式 I think its necessar

16、y for us to do some housework at home.By doing it we can learn self-care.Besides,we can make our bodies healthy and strong.At the same time,doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things.And it can make us understand our parents better.I always help my parents with housework.For example，I of

17、ten wash the dishes and clothes at home.It can make your parents feel relaxed,why not go to do that?Whats moreLast but not leastIf we can help them out with housework,they will feel much better.Therefore,I strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.I think its necessary fo

18、r us to do some housework at home.By doing it we can learn self-care.Whats more,we can make our bodies healthy and strong.At the same time,doing housework can also help us learn a lot of things.Last but not least,if we can help them out with housework,they will feel much better I always help my pare

19、nts with housework.For example，I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.It can make your parents feel relaxed.Therefore,I strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.1.青少年做家务的现状。2.你对青少年做家务的看法及理由。（可从以下几个方面来阐述：1.做家务可以动手动脑，使人更聪明。2.帮父母做家务可以使父母有更多的时间休息和放松。3.通过做家务，可以学到基本的生活技能。

20、）3.你平时在家是否也会帮忙做家务？做的是哪些家务？现实生活中，很多青少年在家不做家务。请你也写一篇短文谈谈自己的观点。内容包括：作文要求：1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。How to write an argumentation（议论文）?Outline Beginning:Main body:Ending:提出论点并陈述正反方观点表明自己的观点支持自己观点的理由再次重申自己的观点作文等级 1315分 1012分 79分 46分03分同桌评分老师评分勾选()Post-writing 1.本文为我们讲述了一位老人收养弃婴的感

21、人故事。本课的教学旨在引导学生关注自己的生活实际，去真切地感悟这种人间真情，并让学生体会爱的伟大，从而也能奉献爱心。2.引导学生关注自己的生活实际，去真切地感悟这种人间真情，并让学生体会爱的伟大，从而也能奉献爱心。3.该组散文诗短小精巧，富含诗意哲理，把纷繁的事物经过高度浓缩，使之呈现出简洁美，给人以启迪，令人从中品味出诗意。4.诗人柯蓝没有用长者身份灌输自己的想法，而是以孩子的口吻，从孩子的视角去观察生活，认识生活，想象生活，感怀生活，拉近了沟通的距离，增强了亲切感。5.全篇笔锋自然流畅，语言亲切活泼，抒情色彩极为浓重，容易打动读者感染读者，读后能给人以启迪与思考。6.童年童年生活，是无忧无

22、虑，天真烂漫的时光，对它的描摹更能激起学生的共鸣，相似年纪发生的事情也会更具说服力，更能使学生体会作者丰富的情感，能引导学生健康的成长。生活，是无忧无虑，天真烂漫的时光，对它的描摹更能激起学生的共鸣，相似年纪发生的事情也会更具说服力，更能使学生体会作者丰富的情感，能引导学生健康的成长。7.这篇文章诗意盎然的优美散文，文辞优美，字里行间透着灵气，迸发出勃发向上的追求与热情，展示了作者与众不同的个性。要在反复读中用心去体会。8.学习本文，不光要了解文章的内容，分析其结构；更重要的是要认识文学作品对青少年成长的意义，从而养成自觉主动地阅读优秀文学作品的习惯。培养热爱大自然、热爱生活、热爱祖国的思想感情