2022新外研版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册信件作文评分标准及范文展示.ppt

1、作 文高考英语作文在评分的时候，主要从内容要点、运动词汇和语法结构的数量、词汇的准确运动和句子的结构把握、上下文的连贯性等四个方面进行考虑。如果你的书写很差，影响正常的阅读，会将分数降低一个档次。英语作文内容太少，阅卷教师无法进行评判的，或者是写作内容和作文要求无关的，这类作文基本不会给分。没有完成作文规定的任务、遗漏了主要内容或者是偏题、语言的结构非常单调、词汇项目少、语法中错误较多等，这类作文属于第一档（差），阅卷教师会给1-5分。第二档（较差）：较少使用语法，内容之间缺少连贯性，不能把自己写的内容准确的传达给读者，阅卷老师一般会给6-10分。第三档（适当）：就作文整体而言，达到了学写作的

2、目的地；文中应用的都是一些简单的语句；虽然有语法和词汇的错误，但是不影响读者理解，这类作文一般会给11-15分。第四档（好,16-20分）：可能会漏掉一两个重点的内容，但是整篇作文覆盖了主要内容，语法也能够满足作文规定。第五档（很好，21-25分）：很好的完成了人物并且作文覆盖所有内容要点，应用的词汇很多，在语法和词汇上的错误很少，能够完全达到写作目的。高考作文评分标准本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。词数小于100的，从总分中减去2分。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法

3、结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。没错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。作文整体架构模式第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，必须提出，通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，须进一步说明和支持主题句。第二段为正文，第二段的第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。剩下的内容为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。第三段为结尾，简

4、化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面内容总结为一结果，表明自己的论点。三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。作文整体架构模式第一段第二段第三段主题句扩展句主题句扩展句1扩展句2总结句写作步骤做到“四”确定体裁 时态人称要点 不健康生活方式：健康生活必要性：建议：坐在电视机前吃快餐抽烟熬夜不锻炼会生病影响学习工作多吃蔬菜水果每天锻炼保证充足睡眠假如你是一名乘客,名叫李华,对次航班不满意,理由如下四个:(1)航空公司给你丢了一个重要的包,内有公司机密文件;(2)飞机迟到一个半小时;(3)飞机上食物很差;(4)乘务员的服务态度不好。请就此事给航空公司写一封投诉信。体裁格式：书信格

5、式主体时态：一般过去时中心人称：第一人称内容要点：1.自我介绍，说明投诉事由2.投诉事由四点3.提出要求或希望Dear Manager,My name is Li Hua.I am a passenger of your airline.Im writing this letter about your bad service.Im sorry to say that Im very unhappy about your airline.First of all,your airline lost one of my bags,in which there is an important pa

6、per of our company.Secondly,my plane was one and a half hours late.You know,I had to attend an important meeting in time.Thirdly,the food on the plane was terrible.Fourthly,I hate to have to say this,but I think that the service on the plane were unfriendly and impolite to me.Honestly speaking,this

7、is the worst airline I know in the world.I do hope that you can help me find my bag and improve your service.YoursLi Hua2014年北京高考作文你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.Dear Chris:Yours Joe满分作文Dear Chris,Im writing to make an apology.We have planned to go to

8、Yunnan together in July.However,Im afraid that I cant make the trip due to my foot injury.Im very sorry for that.In my opinion,we can put the trip off in August.I think I will be fully recovered then.Will you be free in August?Please let me know whether that time is okay with you.Im looking forward

9、to your early reply.Yours Joe15分作文Dear Christ,Im glad that you enjoy travelling as much as I do.You cant imagine how excited I was when you agreed to travel to Yunnan with me in July.However,something unexpected happened,and Im writing to inform you of the change.I accidently hurt my foot during a b

10、asketball match.As a result,I cant go to Yunnan with you as planned,Im terribly sorry that the change of the plan.In addition,can we put the travel off until August?My injury will by no means be a matter by then!I sincerely hope that the time is convenient for you.If you have made a decision,dont he

11、sitate to let me know.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours Joe倡议信：假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，请根据下面的提示写一封倡议信，呼吁同学们爱护共享单车。内容包括：1.共享单车的便利；2.出现的问题3.发出呼吁注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear friends,As we all know,shared bicycles are easily available in our city now,which makes it convenient for us to get around.H

12、owever,bad things happen.Some people damage the code on the bike,which causes the trouble to other users.Whats worse,some users take shared bicycles home for their convenience.So Im writing to appeal to you to take care of shared bicycles.We should use them carefully and park them neatly in public p

13、laces.Only in this way can we create a more harmonious society.Lets take action now.The Students Union邀请信假定你是李华，你们学校将组织一次唐诗比赛。请你给你们的外教Jack发一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛的时间与地点2.比赛的目的与方式3.赛后活动安排注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1.我想邀请你参加一个关于唐诗的比赛。2.比赛计划于下周五下午两点到五点，在校图书馆202房间举办。Im writing to invite you to take pa

14、rt in a competition,which is about Tang poems.The competition is planned to be held from 2 p.m.to 5 p.m.next Friday in Room 202 of the school library.单句练习3.比赛的目的是欣赏唐诗之美。4.在本次比赛中，你可以背诵著名的唐诗，并且表达你的意见。5.请提前告诉我你是否参加活动。The aim of the competition is to appreciate the charm of Tang poems.In the competition

15、,you can recite famous Tang poems and express your feelings about them.Please let me know whether you will enter it in advance.范文Dear JackIm Li Hua.Since I know you are familiar with Tang poems,I am writing to invite you to take part in a competition about it,which is scheduled to be held from 2pm t

16、o 5pm next Friday in Room 202 of the school library.You can recite famous Tang poems composed by any Tang poets.The aim of the competition is to appreciate the charm of Tang poems.Besides,after reciting poems,you will have time to express your feelings about them.At the end of the competition,there

17、will be a lecture given by an expert on Tang poems.Please let me know whether you will enter it.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua.必备佳句1.邀请 invite/invitation2.做演讲 deliver a speech3.评委 judge4.感激 appreciate/be grateful5.荣幸 honor6.欢迎 welcome7.接受邀请 accept sbs invitation8.代表学校 on behalf of our school9.举办活动的目的是 The purpose of this activity is to10.活动的细节有 Here are some details about this activity.Recently our class had a discussion about whether we students should take morning exercise.Some students argues that we should.because.While others are against it.In my opinion,we should