人教版中考英语作文指导与复习-话题9-健康与安全课件.ppt

1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“健康与安健康与安全全”这一话题，河北并未考查。但分析全国近年真题发现，此话这一话题，河北并未考查。但分析全国近年真题发现，此话题在中考中出现频率较高，常见的命题角度有：题在中考中出现频率较高，常见的命题角度有：如何保持健康以如何保持健康以及如何保证自身安全。及如何保证自身安全。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“健康与安全健康与安全”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体

2、如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度如何保持健康如何保持健康【好句扩写范例】【好句扩写范例】1.Teenagers need about one hour of physical exercise every day.(扩写目的扩写目的)To stay healthy,teenagers need about one hour of physical exercise every day.2.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)We

3、think the best way to relax is through exercise.It is healthy for the mind and the body.人教八人教八(上上)Unit 2 P13【句子扩写】【句子扩写】1.We should remember to wash our hands before meals.(扩写目的扩写目的)_2.Regular exercise and a balanced diet can help us.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_To protect us from getting diseases,we should remem

4、ber to wash our hands before meals.Regular exercise and a balanced diet can help us keep healthy both physically and mentally.2 2角度角度如何保证自身安全如何保证自身安全【好句扩写范例】【好句扩写范例】3.Note where the nearest stairs and doors to the outside of the school buildings are.(扩写目的扩写目的)Note where the nearest stairs and doors

5、to the outside of the school buildings are so that you can get to the safe place as quickly as possible.外研八外研八(上上)Module 12 P994.We must obey the traffic rules when we go out.(扩写具体做法扩写具体做法)We must obey the traffic rules when we go out.We mustnt cross the street when the traffic lights are red.【好句范例】

6、【好句范例】5.Its necessary for us to be accompanied by those who are skilled in swimming,for they can help us in case of emergency.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】3.Cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth when you escape from a fire.(扩写目的扩写目的)_4.We must prevent us from getting into trouble when we surf on the Internet.(扩

7、写具体做法扩写具体做法)_Cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth so that you can escape from a fire without taking in too much smoke.We must prevent us from getting into trouble when we surf on the Internet.We shouldnt tell others about our personal information.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】5.将刀具带在身上很危险，因为这可能会伤到自己和他人。将刀具带在身上很

8、危险，因为这可能会伤到自己和他人。_It is dangerous to take a knife with you,because it may hurt yourself and others.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2020陕西改编陕西改编)某英文网站开展关于某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活美丽校园，健康生活”的的征征稿活动。稿活动。请你根据以下图示内容积极投稿，倡导同学们请你根据以下图示内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活境，健康快乐生活”。定主题：爱护校园环境，健康生活定主题：爱护校园环境，健康生活定人称：第一人称和第二人

9、称定人称：第一人称和第二人称定时态：一般现在时和一般将来时定时态：一般现在时和一般将来时定文体：说明文定文体：说明文定要点定要点1：保持校园干净：保持校园干净定要点定要点2：坚持：坚持锻炼锻炼定要点定要点3：照顾好自己：照顾好自己补充要点补充要点4：如：如：与同学友好相处与同学友好相处注意：注意：(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示 词语仅供参考；词语仅供参考；(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总

10、词数)Students need to have a healthy school life._ I hope they will work for you.列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句开篇：引开篇：引出主题出主题(已给出已给出)正文：根正文：根据图片给据图片给出三点建出三点建议和一点议和一点补充建议补充建议学生需要学生需要健康的校健康的校园生活园生活Students need to have a healthy school life.1.保持保持校园干校园干净整齐净整齐We should keep our

11、school clean.Its important for us to keep our school clean.我来写：我来写：_ We should do some sports every day.2.进行进行 锻炼锻炼(do sports）It is good to do some sports every day.我来写：我来写：_ Its good to do some sports every day,like running,playing basketball and so on.正文：根正文：根据图片给据图片给出三点建出三点建议和一点议和一点补充建议补充建议3.照顾照顾

12、好自己好自己(look after）Wed better look after ourselves well.Wed better look after ourselves well,such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary.我来写：我来写：_ 列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升We should get on with each other and keep happy.If we always get on well with each other an

13、d keep happy,well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.我来写：我来写：_ I hope they will work for you.4.补充补充要点：要点：和同学和同学友好相友好相处处(get on with）我希望这些我希望这些建议可以奏建议可以奏效（效（hope)结尾：表结尾：表达祝愿达祝愿（已给出）（已给出）正文：根正文：根据图片给据图片给出三点建出三点建议和一点议和一点补充建议补充建议列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分范文】写作练兵

14、写作练兵(2020黔东南改编黔东南改编)安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能会遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理呢？校团委学生，我们可能会遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理呢？校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会。假如你是李华，请根据所给决定组织一次安全教育主题班会。假如你是李华，请根据所给提示和要求，以提示和要求，以“How to Keep Safe”为题写一篇英文发言稿。为题写一篇英文发言稿。提示：提示：(1)Follow the traffic rules.(2)Pay attention to food safety.(3)Keep to the rig

15、ht when going upstairs or downstairs.(4)要求：要求：(1)发言稿须包含所给的三个提示要点和一个补充要点；发言稿须包含所给的三个提示要点和一个补充要点；(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；发言稿中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)How to Keep SafeHello,everyone!Safety is very important for us._ _We should learn to protect ourselves.Here are some su

16、ggestions about how to keep safe.Firstly,we must follow the traffic rules.Secondly,we should pay attention to food safety.Be sure not to eat too much junk food.Thirdly,when we go upstairs or downstairs,we should keep to the right.Because its easy to get hurt when we go upstairs or downstairs.Whats more,wed better not make friends online.We must stay away from dangerous people around us._If we get into trouble,we must keep calm first and then find ways to ask for help.In a word,as students,we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.