如何润色作文How+to+polish+your+writing课件+2023届高考英语作文备考.pptx

1、高考英语如何提升书面表达的语言表现力？Learning aims:Learning aims:1.1.Learn some ways to improve your words asLearn some ways to improve your words as well as sentences in your writingwell as sentences in your writing.2.2.Be able to use these methods to rewrite and Be able to use these methods to rewrite and polish yo

2、ur writingpolish your writing.目 录010102020303Something about writingSomething about writingWays to polish Ways to polish your writingyour writingAppreciation of Appreciation of excellent excellent compositioncomposition 1.1.Something Something about about writingwriting词汇和短语层面句子层面 段落层面 2 2Ways Ways

3、to to polish your polish your writingwriting一句话征服阅卷老师！一句话征服阅卷老师！词汇和短语层面1)使用使用更高级更高级的词汇。的词汇。晚学晚学的同义词优先的同义词优先/具体化具体化词汇优先词汇优先高中高中初中初中小学小学2)使用使用更高级更高级的短语。的短语。建议：词汇句型小册子建议：词汇句型小册子P32贾黎军贾黎军I I am good at am good at English and English and ChineseChinese.Mr.Wang is a Mr.Wang is a goodgood teacherteacher.更高

4、级的词汇更高级的词汇/短语短语 have a good command ofhave a good command ofhave a good knowledge ofhave a good knowledge of 更具体，更有描述性的词汇更具体，更有描述性的词汇 excellentexcellent kind/warm-heartedkind/warm-heartedTask 1 BrainstormingTask 1 Brainstorming句子层面1.1.句子的合并句子的合并 定语从句状语从句非谓语定语从句状语从句非谓语2.2.句式的变化句式的变化 主动变被动主动变被动普通变倒装普通

5、变倒装普通变强调普通变强调句子层面(句子的合并)I am interested in the I am interested in the activityactivity.The activity is held by your The activity is held by your schoolschool.=I am interested in the activity=I am interested in the activity which which is held by your is held by your schoolschool.=I am interested in

6、the activity=I am interested in the activity held held by your by your schoolschool.1.1.什么时候使用什么时候使用定语从句定语从句两个单句有两个单句有共同的共同的n n.当一个句子是简单句时，可以用定语从句当一个句子是简单句时，可以用定语从句添加信息将其丰富。添加信息将其丰富。2.2.定语从句定语从句-非谓语非谓语（并非所有）（并非所有）去掉定语从句的引导词，后接的第一个动词去掉定语从句的引导词，后接的第一个动词变成变成v-ingv-ing（beingbeing）可省。）可省。Task 2 Brainstor

7、mingTask 2 BrainstormingHe is quite familiar with the bookHe is quite familiar with the book.The book was written by Mo YanThe book was written by Mo Yan.He is quite familiar with the book He is quite familiar with the book which/thatwhich/that was written by Mo Yan was written by Mo Yan.He is quite

8、 familiar with the He is quite familiar with the book book writtenwritten by Mo by Mo YanYan.张世纪张世纪Knowing Knowing that you are interested in that you are interested in it,it,Im Im writing to tell you something about writing to tell you something about it it.句子层面(句子的合并)I knowI know that you are inte

9、rested in it that you are interested in it.Im writing to tell you something about itIm writing to tell you something about it.Because I Because I know that you are interested in know that you are interested in it,it,Im writing to tell you something about Im writing to tell you something about it it.

10、1.1.什么时候使用什么时候使用状语从句状语从句根据两句的根据两句的逻辑关系逻辑关系，在其中一个句子前加，在其中一个句子前加逻逻辑连词辑连词。2.2.状语从句状语从句-非谓语非谓语去掉状语从句连词去掉状语从句连词主语相同，主语去掉（主语不同，主语保留）主语相同，主语去掉（主语不同，主语保留）后接的第一个动词变成后接的第一个动词变成V-ingV-ing（beingbeing）可省）可省孙春梅孙春梅Task 2 BrainstormingTask 2 BrainstormingI was faced with so many questionsI was faced with so many qu

11、estions.I had to ask for your helpI had to ask for your help.Because/SinceBecause/Since I I was faced with,was faced with,I I had to.had to.Faced Faced with,with,I I had to.had to.I was faced with I was faced with soso many many questions questions thatthat I I had to ask for your had to ask for you

12、r helphelp.主动变被动普通变倒装普通变强调句式的句式的变化变化 Task 3 BrainstormingTask 3 BrainstormingWe should take measures to improve We should take measures to improve the situationthe situation.(变被动变被动)Traveling can not only enrich our knowledge,but Traveling can not only enrich our knowledge,but also it can broaden ou

13、r horizonsalso it can broaden our horizons.(倒装句倒装句)What he said What he said inspired inspired me a lotme a lot.(变强调变强调)Task 3 BrainstormingTask 3 BrainstormingSuggested answer:Suggested answer:3.It 3.It was was What What he said he said that that inspired inspired me a me a lotlot.1.Some measures s

14、hould be taken to improve the situationSome measures should be taken to improve the situation.2.Not only 2.Not only cancan traveling enrich our knowledge,but also it traveling enrich our knowledge,but also it can broaden our horizons.can broaden our horizons.it作形式主语(平衡句子结构，避免平衡句子结构，避免“头重脚轻头重脚轻”)To l

15、earn English is necessary for youTo learn English is necessary for you.That you have missed suchThat you have missed such a good chance is a a good chance is a pitypity.ItIt is necessary for you to learn English well is necessary for you to learn English well.ItIt is a pity that you have missed is a

16、 pity that you have missed such a good such a good chancechance.段落层面（1 1）添加相应的连接性副词（过渡词），通常位于句首，）添加相应的连接性副词（过渡词），通常位于句首，起到承上启下的作用。起到承上启下的作用。表并列表并列 at the same time,meanwhile表表递进递进 whats more,besides表表转折转折 however,instead表表总结总结 in a word,in brief表表因果因果 as a result,thereforeTask 4 BrainstormingTask 4

17、Brainstorming I think Im suitable for the I think Im suitable for the jobjob._,_,Im Im writing to apply for writing to apply for it it.I have I have completed my application completed my application letterletter._,_,Im Im nor sure of the language Ive nor sure of the language Ive usedused.Therefore/A

18、s a resultTherefore/As a resultHoweverHowever段落层面表顺序（三个要点及以上）表顺序（三个要点及以上）普通版：普通版：Firstly,/Secondly,/Thirdly,/Finally,Firstly,/Secondly,/Thirdly,/Finally,进阶进阶版：版：To begin To begin with/First of allwith/First of allWhats more,/Moreover,/In addition,Whats more,/Moreover,/In addition,Last but not least,

19、/At last,Last but not least,/At last,段落层面（2 2）添加关键句，使行文流畅。）添加关键句，使行文流畅。首段最后首段最后+过渡句过渡句 e.g.Im writing to offer you some advice.e.g.Im writing to offer you some advice.I will tell you more details about it.I will tell you more details about it.中间段开头中间段开头+主题句主题句 e.g.e.g.My suggestions are as follows.M

20、y suggestions are as follows.Firstly,Secondly,Finally,.Firstly,Secondly,Finally,.结尾段结尾段+总结总结句句 e.g.e.g.In a word,I do hope you will find my In a word,I do hope you will find my suggestions helpful.suggestions helpful.3.3.Try to polish the Try to polish the following compositionfollowing compositionD

21、ear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua.I am an outgoing boy.I am studying in London.I have heard that this local city will hold a Chinese Painting Exhibition.I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team.I have some advantages for the job.Firstly,I have lived in China for sixteen years and have learnt En

22、glish since I was a child.I am good at English and Chinese.I think it is good for introducing Chinese paintings.Secondly,I am good at Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture.I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it.Finally,through my introduction an

23、d efforts,I believe I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua个人独立完成，小组结合，查漏补缺。个人独立完成，小组结合，查漏补缺。20192019年真题美文欣赏年真题美文欣赏Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua,an outgoing boy,who is studying in London.Having hea

24、rd that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team.I have some advantages for the job.First of all,having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chines

25、e,which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.Besides,having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it.Last but not least,through my introduction and efforts,I believe I can streng

26、then the friendship between China and England.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li HuaYour handwritingSummary 总结总结What we have learnt today?proper得体得体三段式作文三段式作文注意开头和结尾注意开头和结尾实现交际功能实现交际功能 handwriting书写书写卷面干净卷面干净字体工整字体工整足量足量rich丰富丰富句式多变句式多变主语多样主语多样语法灵活语法灵活accumulate积累积累字词句字词句全靠背全靠背 假定你是李华假定你是李华，得知你的城市博物馆，得知你的城市博物馆要举办中国传统要举办中国传统服装展服装展，你的外国朋友，你的外国朋友Mike，对此很感兴趣。，对此很感兴趣。请写一请写一封邀封邀请信，请信，内容包括：内容包括：1.写信目的；写信目的；2.服装展的内容安排；服装展的内容安排；3.期待回复。期待回复。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,Yours,Li Hua4 4 HomeworkHomework谢谢聆听