2020年福建英语中考作文指导话题8安全与救护课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图命题探索 分析福建近分析福建近7年中考真题可知，针对年中考真题可知，针对“安全与救护安全与救护”这一话题，考这一话题，考查了查了4次，命题角度为：次，命题角度为：1.如何保证自身的安全如何保证自身的安全。如：。如：2016龙岩介绍如何保证安全；龙岩介绍如何保证安全；2014莆田介绍如何安全出行；莆田介绍如何安全出行；2013福州以福州以“安全安全”为主题进行演讲。为主题进行演讲。2.介绍安全规则介绍安全规则。2014三明以三明以“Lets Obey the Traffic Rules”为题为题介绍了遵守交通

2、规则。介绍了遵守交通规则。分析全国近年中考真题可知，此话题还从以下角度进行考查：分析全国近年中考真题可知，此话题还从以下角度进行考查：学学校安全教育校安全教育。典例剖析典例剖析 (2016龙岩龙岩)新的暑假即将到来，鉴于以往假期中各种事故频发，新的暑假即将到来，鉴于以往假期中各种事故频发，同学们，请以同学们，请以“How to Keep Safe”为主题，用英语写一篇短文。为主题，用英语写一篇短文。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审审主题：如何保证安全主题：如何保证安全审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时要求：要求：1.根据根据一幅或多幅图片提示一幅或多幅图片提示，自主立意构思，要切合

3、图意，自主立意构思，要切合图意，可适当发挥；可适当发挥；2.不得出现真实的校名和人名，可用不得出现真实的校名和人名，可用第一人称或第二人称第一人称或第二人称描述；描述；3.词数词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审审人称：第一或第二人称人称：第一或第二人称审审要点：游泳时、发生火灾时、过马路时要点：游泳时、发生火灾时、过马路时等如何保证安全等如何保证安全 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章 Almost every summer vacation,quite a few students are reported

4、 to have accidents.Its important to know how to keep safe._一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1角度角度如何保护自身安全如何保护自身安全好句范例好句范例1.We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger.2.A woman next to him was asking for help.3.She said that the man had a heart problem and should go to hospital.4.Thanks to Mr.Wan

5、g and the passengers,the man was saved by the doctors in time.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章5.The driver didnt think about himself.He only thought about saving a life.6.I think you should see a doctor and get an Xray.7.I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive.Im worried about your safety.一阶 审好题

6、二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 1.作为中学生，我们应该了解危险并学会保护自己。作为中学生，我们应该了解危险并学会保护自己。_2.我认为如果我们在路上有危险可以向警察求救。我认为如果我们在路上有危险可以向警察求救。_As middle school students,we should know about the danger and learn to protect ourselves.I think we can ask the police for help if we are in danger on the way.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.我

7、们在网上冲浪时，应该当心网上交友。我们在网上冲浪时，应该当心网上交友。_4.多亏了王老师，受伤的学生被及时送到了医院。多亏了王老师，受伤的学生被及时送到了医院。_When we are surfing on the Internet,we should be careful to make friends online.Thanks to Mr.Wang,the student who was hurt was sent to the hospital in time.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章5.无论徒步还是坐公交车去学校，我们都必须考虑交通安全。无论徒步还是坐公交车去学校，我

8、们都必须考虑交通安全。_6.我认为你不可以独自去河里游泳，那可能有危险。我认为你不可以独自去河里游泳，那可能有危险。_Whether we walk or take a bus to school,we must think about the traffic safety.I dont think you can go swimming alone in a river.It may be dangerous.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章2角度角度介绍安全规则介绍安全规则好句范例好句范例8.When walking across the road,we must be caref

9、ul.9.Remember to walk on the crosswalk.10.We must cross the street only when we see the green“walk”sign.11.Dont listen to music while riding.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章12.Its easy to slip and fall on a wet floor.Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after you have a shower or bath.13.If you are outside,ge

10、t to an open area as fast as you can.Stay away from buildings and trees.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 7.骑自行车时，我们不能骑得太快。骑自行车时，我们不能骑得太快。_8.当遇到红色交通信号灯时，请等待。当遇到红色交通信号灯时，请等待。_9.我们骑自行车时必须戴自行车头盔。我们骑自行车时必须戴自行车头盔。_When riding a bicycle,we cant ride too fast.Wait for a while when the traffic light is red.We

11、 must wear bicycle helmets when riding.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章10.不要在街道上玩耍或翻越栅栏。不要在街道上玩耍或翻越栅栏。_11.确保必要时我们能够联系到你。确保必要时我们能够联系到你。_Dont play on the street or climb over the fence.Be sure that we can reach you when necessary.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1 1如何保护自我如何保护自我 As teenage

12、rs,we know it is important to keep safe on our way to school and home.Id like to share my advice about keeping safe.Above all，_(建议建议1).Second,_(建议建议2).And whats more,its necessary to be careful when we make new friends it is wise to go to school or return home together with classmates一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章

13、二阶写好句_(建议建议3).Then，_(建议建议4).wed better not stay outside for a long timewe are supposed to know some basic ways to keep ourselves safe一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2介绍安全规则介绍安全规则 We are asked to _(规则规则1).It is dangerous to play with fire,for _(原因原因).We should _(规则规则2).Besides,_(规则规则3)be careful with

14、 electricity when we are using it make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave we are not allowed to swim alone,especially in deep rivers or lakes it may cause terrible accidents一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章（针对（针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文）的优秀范文）Almost every summer vacation,quite a few students are report

15、ed to have accidents.Its important to know how to keep safe.Its said that many people got hurt or lost their lives in traffic accidents in China.So I think its important for us to obey the traffic rules.Before we cross the road,we must stop and look both ways.When we cross the street,we must pay att

16、ention to the 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句traffic lights.We must wait until the lights turn green.Whats more,dont play on the street.Its quite dangerous.In short,we should value our lives and keep away from the danger.写作练兵写作练兵 (2019安徽改编安徽改编)假如你是李华，你的英国笔友假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封减退而感到不安，请你

17、用英文给他写封100词左右的电子邮件，谈词左右的电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：要点如下：1.经常做户外活动；经常做户外活动；2.很少用电子产品；很少用电子产品；3.坚持做眼保健操。坚持做眼保健操。写作练兵写作练兵注意：注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；2.文文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名；中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名；3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。写作练兵写作练兵Dear Mike，Im sorry to learn that y

18、our eyesight is getting weaker._ Id like to share some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life with you.At school,I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time,I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.You know,the light they give off is harmful to our eyes.Besides,doing eye 写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵_Yours，Li Huaexercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly,I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope youll find my ways helpful.写作练兵