2020年江苏中考英语写作指导-话题8人物介绍课件.pptx

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧8巧变句首句式巧变句首句式 分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书年中考真题的书面表达可知，与面表达可知，与“人物介绍人物介绍”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：介绍自己周围人的优秀品质，如题角度：介绍自己周围人的优秀品质，如2015宿迁；介绍自宿迁；介绍自己。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：介绍名己。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：介绍名人人(一般会介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好、优势、特殊之处或者一般

2、会介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好、优势、特殊之处或者不足之处；若是名人介绍，多会介绍其事迹对自己的影响不足之处；若是名人介绍，多会介绍其事迹对自己的影响)。命题探索教材链接 (2019南通改编南通改编)本学期就要结束了，假如你是李明，请你本学期就要结束了，假如你是李明，请你对对自己本学期的表现进行总结自己本学期的表现进行总结，并针对自己，并针对自己做得不足的地方提做得不足的地方提出出改进措施改进措施，写一份英文的自评小结。，写一份英文的自评小结。典例剖析典例剖析一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审主题：自我总结审文体：记叙文审主题：自我总结审文体：记叙文审时态：一般过去时审时态：一般过去时审

3、时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时要点要点：1.努力学习，在学习上取得了进步；努力学习，在学习上取得了进步；2.重视保持健康，每天跑步半个小时；重视保持健康，每天跑步半个小时；3.积极参加学校活动，得到了很多机会和同学交流；积极参加学校活动，得到了很多机会和同学交流；4.自己仍然有做得不好的地方需要提升自己仍然有做得不好的地方需要提升(自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)。审要点：短文包含两个方面，一方面是本学期表现好的地审要点：短文包含两个方面，一方面是本学期表现好的地方，另一方面是自己的不足之处及改进计划，且不足之处方，另一方面是自己的不足之处及改进计划，且不足之处及改进计划需要至少自由

4、发挥及改进计划需要至少自由发挥2点，如：习惯于追随别人，点，如：习惯于追随别人，自己缺乏创造力。为了提升自己，将会读更多的书自己缺乏创造力。为了提升自己，将会读更多的书一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句参考词汇：参考词汇：weakness弱势弱势注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Im Li Ming,a student in Class 8,Grade 9.I think its necessary for me to find out

5、 my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term._一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.Im good at English,so itll be an advantage for me to teach children English.2.He has the ability to organize the company,and everything is in great order.3.I took an active part in school activities,so I got more chances to

6、communicate with others.4.My sister has more experience on how to play the piano well.介绍个人优势介绍个人优势一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句角度角度1 1好句范例好句范例1.我擅长唱歌和跳舞，并且经常在比赛中获奖。我擅长唱歌和跳舞，并且经常在比赛中获奖。_ _2.她有能力照顾好自己，不让父母担心。她有能力照顾好自己，不让父母担心。_I am good at singing and dancing and I often win prizes in the competition.She has th

7、e ability to take good care of herself and let her parents not worry about her.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.我积极地参加小组活动，所以我有很多机会分享想法。我积极地参加小组活动，所以我有很多机会分享想法。_ _4.她在如何与他人相处方面有更多的经验。她在如何与他人相处方面有更多的经验。_I took an active part in group activities,so I got more chances to share ideas.She has more experi

8、ence on how to get on well with others.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.I am used to following others,so I should think more by myself and have my own opinions.6.He seldom communicates with others in the class.As a result,he hardly has friends.7.You spend too much time on your study but pay little attention to

9、 physical exercise.介绍不足之处及改进措施介绍不足之处及改进措施角度角度2 2好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.我习惯依靠他人，所以我应该开始自己做自己的事情。我习惯依靠他人，所以我应该开始自己做自己的事情。_ _6.我妹妹很少参加社会活动，所以她缺乏社交经验。我妹妹很少参加社会活动，所以她缺乏社交经验。_ _7.我每天花太多时间在电脑游戏上，却忽略了我的学习。我每天花太多时间在电脑游戏上，却忽略了我的学习。_ _I am used to depending on others,so I should start to do things by my

10、self.My sister seldom takes part in social activities.As a result,she is short of social experience.句句 子子 仿仿 写写I spend too much time on computer games but pay little attention to my study.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.Im shy.Its not easy for me to make friends.Its not easy for me to make friends because Im

11、shy.9.He is kind and always helps others.He is so kind that he always helps others.10.My teacher is very strict with us.She cares about every student.My teacher who cares about every student is very strict with us.介绍性格介绍性格角度角度3 3升格范例升格范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.David is very confident.He is not afraid

12、of making a speech in front of many people.(用原因状语从句升格用原因状语从句升格)_ _9.Helen is nice and friendly.All the teachers and classmates like her very much.(用用so.that升格升格)_ _David is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people because he is very confident.Helen is so nice and friendly that all the t

13、eachers and classmates like her very much.句句 子子 升升 格格一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句10.Our English teacher is very patient.She always explains the text to us carefully.(用定语从句升格用定语从句升格)_ _ Our English teacher who always explains the text to us carefully is very patient.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句11.I love fruit.(扩写看法扩

14、写看法)I love fruit.I think its healthy.12.My favorite subject is science.(扩写原因扩写原因)My favorite subject is science because its interesting.13.Im serious about running.(扩写好处扩写好处)Im serious about running.Its a way to make us keep fit.介绍爱好介绍爱好角度角度4 4扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句11.Id like to join the Music

15、 Club.(扩写看法扩写看法)_12.I like collecting stamps.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ _13.I am interested in drawing pictures.(扩写好处扩写好处)_ _ Id like to join the Music Club.I think it makes me more active.I like collecting stamps because I can learn something from them.句句 子子 扩扩 写写I am interested in drawing pictures.Its a way to c

16、alm myself down.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句速记速记14.Friends are like booksyou dont need a lot of them as long as theyre good.朋友就像书，你不需要太多，只要他们是好的。朋友就像书，你不需要太多，只要他们是好的。15.A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.真正真正 的朋友可以向你伸出援手并触动你的心灵。的朋友可以向你伸出援手并触动你的心灵。16.A good friend is like a mirror.好朋友

17、就像一面镜子。好朋友就像一面镜子。17.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。患难见真情。18.Friendship is love with understanding.友谊是爱与理解。友谊是爱与理解。19.A friend is a second self.朋友就是另一个自己。朋友就是另一个自己。20.Everyone has his price.天生我材必有用。天生我材必有用。俗语谚语俗语谚语一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段个人优势个人优势study well/do well in my schoolwork/.语段练习语

18、段练习1 1 not only _(个人优势个人优势1)but also _(个人优势个人优势2).Besides,I _ _(个人优势个人优势3)speak English very well/have a good voice,so I ever got the first prize in the competition/.am good at playing musical instruments/communicating with others/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句However,he/she also has some weaknesses.He/She _

19、(不足之处不足之处1).So I hope _(改进措改进措施施1).He/She also _(不足之处不足之处2),so he/she needs 不足之处及改进措施不足之处及改进措施is careless sometimes,so he/she may leave his/her homework at home/is easy to get angry with others,so he/she has few friends/.he/she can be careful in the daily life/patient enough to talk with others and

20、make more friends/.does badly in math/English/seldom takes part in school activities/.语段练习语段练习2 2一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句_(改进措施改进措施2).I really hope he/she can have a change and become more perfect.to study math/English hard/to take an active part in school activities/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句My _(人物关系人物关系)i

21、s _(外貌外貌1).He/She has _(外貌外貌2).Generally speaking,he/she is _(性格性格1)and _(性格性格2).He/She _(性格的具体性格的具体表现表现).介绍外貌、性格、爱好、优秀品质等介绍外貌、性格、爱好、优秀品质等best friend/English teacher/.tall/short/thin/fat/.a round face/big eyes/.warmhearted/kind/.outgoing/helpful/.often helps others without asking for anything in ret

22、urn/can get on well with teachers and classmates/.语段练习语段练习3 3一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句In his/her spare time,he/she likes _(爱好爱好1)and _(爱爱好好2)He/She is _(优秀品质优秀品质),so we all like him/her.reading books/watching movies/.listening to music/taking exercise/.always ready to help others/honest and never tells l

23、ies/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章 Im Li Ming,a student in Class 8,Grade 9.I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.This term,besides studying hard and making progress in my study,I also paid more attention to keeping healthy and I always ran for half

24、 an hour in the morning.Whats more,I took an active part in different activities at school.It helps me learn the spirit of team work and I have got more chances to communicate with my classmates.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Developing a good relationship with them certainly makes my school life more enjoyabl

25、e.I also find some weaknesses that need to be improved.I am used to following others and I am not creative enough.So，being creative is the ability I should develop.So I will read more books to improve it.I hope I can become more and more excellent.I believe as long as I know my strengths and weaknes

26、ses clearly and try to improve my weaknesses,I can find a better me in the future.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句(2019吉林改编吉林改编)假如你是李华，想参加假如你是李华，想参加China Daily举办的以举办的以“梦想职业体验梦想职业体验”为主题的为主题的2020年夏令营活动，请你根据以下要点，年夏令营活动，请你根据以下要点，给主办人给主办人Mr Smith写一封介绍个人情况的英文邮件。写一封介绍个人情况的英文邮件。要点：要点：1.性格：外向，乐于助人；性格：外向，乐于助人；2.爱好：读书；爱好：

27、读书；3.梦想职业：成为医生；梦想职业：成为医生；4.个人计划个人计划(自主发挥自主发挥)。注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵Dear Mr Smith，Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you._写作练兵写作练兵 My friends say Im an outgoing and helpful girl,and its easy for me to get on we

28、ll with others.As for my hobby,reading is what I like best.In my spare time,I spend much time reading books especially on medicine.Actually my parents are both doctors.They influence me a lot,so to be a 写作练兵写作练兵_I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours since

29、rely，Li Huagood doctor is my dream.I have been studying hard to enter a good medical university.Besides,Im going to take more volunteer work to help sick people.Those experiences may help me become an excellent doctor.写作练兵巧变句首句式写作技巧写作技巧 8 8巧变句首句式巧变句首句式 变化句首句式，如以一个介词短语、形容词短语、变化句首句式，如以一个介词短语、形容词短语、不定式

30、短语或副词作为句子的开头，而不一定要采用固不定式短语或副词作为句子的开头，而不一定要采用固定的主谓结构作为开头，以避免造成读者的阅读疲劳。定的主谓结构作为开头，以避免造成读者的阅读疲劳。句句 式式 连连 接接 范范 例例 1.介词短语开头：介词短语开头：A village lies at the foot of the mountain.At the foot of the mountain lies a village.2.不定式短语开头：不定式短语开头：The students worked hard to pass the exam.To pass the exam,the studen

31、ts worked hard.3.形容词短语开头：形容词短语开头：He was confused about the problem,so he went to ask his teacher for help.Confused about the problem,he went to ask his teacher for help.写作练兵巧变句首句式4.副词开头：副词开头：This dream came true again like the dreams before.Again,like the dreams before,this dream came true.5.用分词、分词短

32、语开头：用分词、分词短语开头：We climbed to the top of the tower and we saw a beautiful view.Climbing to the top of the tower,we saw a beautiful view.写作练兵巧变句首句式写作练兵巧变句首句式小试牛刀小试牛刀1.A tall tree stands just in front of our house.It has a history of 1，000 years.(用介词短语开头用介词短语开头)_2.We held a party to celebrate the arriv

33、al of the winner vacation.(用用 不定式短语开头不定式短语开头)_ Just in front of our house stands a tall tree with a history of 1，000 years.To celebrate the arrival of the winter vacation,we held a party.写作练兵巧变句首句式教材链接 3.I was worried about the exam,so I didnt fall asleep last night.(用形容词短语开头用形容词短语开头)_ 4.Snowflakes

34、were falling down from the sky slowly and gently.(用副词开头用副词开头)_Slowly and gently,snowflakes were falling down from the sky.Worried about the exam,I didnt fall asleep last night.5.He is a hardworking young man,so he is praised by his boss.(用用现在分词开头现在分词开头)_ 6.I study harder if I am compared with my sister.(用过去分词短语用过去分词短语开头开头)_ Being a hardworking young man,he is praised by his boss.Compared with my sister,I study harder.写作练兵巧变句首句式