专题03求助信2020年高考英语书面表达真题变形冲分练(版)课件.pptx

1、12 求助信求助信是是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决或理解的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。书写时应注意：语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。考点综述考点综述3 1.【题目要求题目要求】（2016年新课标全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。真题再现真题再现42.【品读范文】5Dear MS Jenkins,Im Li Hua.I plan to take a part-time job in

2、a foreign company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However,I am not sure about the words and format.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.Would you please spare some time to read through the materials

3、 attached?Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format?Besides,Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua6Dear MS Jenkins,Im Li Hua.I plan to take

4、a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However,I am not sure about the words and format.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.7 Would you please spare some time to read

5、through the materials attached?Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format?Besides,Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua8 1.【求助信结构以及实例说明求助信结构

6、以及实例说明】求助信通常包括三部分内容：1.点明求助内容；2.具体说明求助内容；3.再次表示期望和感谢。要点总结要点总结9（说明求助内容）（说明求助内容）Im Li Hua.I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However,I am not sure about the words and format.Therefore

7、,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.10 （具体说明求助内容）（具体说明求助内容）Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached?Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format?Besides,Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format

8、.11 （再次表示感谢和期望）（再次表示感谢和期望）I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.122.【求助信常用词汇】131.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth.做.有困难2.do sb.a favor/give sb.a hand 给某人帮助3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题5.be busy/occupied/engage

9、d in doing sth.忙于做某事7.make preparations for.为某事做准备149.put.in use 学以致用10.let sb.down 让某人失望11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事1513.take the trouble to do sth.费心地去做某事14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因

10、某事感激某人 163.【求助求助信常用句型结构】信常用句型结构】1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。2.I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.我希望你能帮我一个忙。173.I wonder if you could do me a fvour,this is the first time that my uncle visits us.我想知道你是否

11、能帮我一个忙，因为这是.。4.Would you like to do me a favor to.你是否能够帮个.I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.我遇到了使我困惑的问题。187.To begin with,Whats more,What troubles me most is 8.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with.不幸的是，我发现很难处理/对待.9.I have trouble/difficulty/pro

12、blems(in)doing sth.我在.遇到了困难1910.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help.面对困难，我渴望得到你的帮助。11.I wonder if can help me with these difficulties.我很想知道，你是否能够帮助我解决这些困难。12.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable ad

13、vice)如你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助，我会很感激。20 Im Li Hua.I plan to take a part-time job _1_a foreign company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the _2_(apply)form and _3_(have)my resume ready for it.However,I am not sure _4_ the words and format.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help and _5_(

14、profession)advice.题型变化之语法填空题型变化之语法填空21 Would you please spare some time to read through the materials _6_(attach)?Would you mind _7_(find)out the mistakes in terms of words _8_format?Besides,Id like you to correct the mistakes _9_(find)in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it_10_ you c

15、ould do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.22【Check your answer】1.in 2.application 3.had 4.about 5.professional 6.attached 7.finding 8.and 9.found 10.if23 Im Li Hua.I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I had already filled in the application form and

16、 had your resume ready for it.However,I am not sure about the words or format.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices.题型变化之短文改错题型变化之短文改错24 Would you please to spare some time to read through the materials attached?Would you mind to find out the mistakes in terms about wo

17、rds and format?Beside,Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate that if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.25【Check your answer】（加粗划线之处即为答案）Im Li Hua.I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holi

18、day.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However,I am not sure about the words and format.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice.26 Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached?Would you mind finding out

19、the mistakes in terms of words and format?Besides,Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I am looking forward to your reply.27 【Writing 1】假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了-些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:1.作业

20、多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。注意:词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。模拟强化模拟强化28 【Writing 2】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意:1.词数:120-150;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。模拟强化模拟强化29【Check your answer】模拟强

21、化之范文【Writing 1】30 Dear Kate,I am Li Hua,a Senior 3 student.Recently,Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam,but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.So Im writing to ask you for help.31 Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.First,I have to spend s

22、o much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.Moreover,the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down.What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night.32 Faced with the above pro

23、blems,Im anxious to get your help.Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?Yours sincerely,Li Hua 33【Check your answer】模拟强化之范文【Writing 2】34 Dear Tom，How is it going these days?I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in

24、 China?Are you enjoying your life?I hope you are.35 Let me tell you a piece of good news:Im going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So Im busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and

25、using proper English words to express my thoughts.36 Besides,I really want to improve my spoken English,especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调).Of course,as a native English speaker,you can give me some suggestions.In addition,Im going to visit you after the contest.37 Im sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua38