专题十六-读后续写.pptx课件.ppt

1、see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed

2、slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and

3、the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Par

4、agraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.答案答案写作提示根据续写第一段所给的段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.可知,本段应该主要描写突然出现一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受惊。故本段应该描写马受惊后发生的事。从第二段的段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.可以看出,作者和父亲迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根据迷路之后的情况展开。本段的主要内容应该是从迷路到回家的故

5、事。写作时一定要注意以下两点:第一,从本故事的发展来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事,而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描写。第二,注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句之间的衔接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计。One possible version:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.This unexpected appearance frightened my horse,which made it run wildly.I

6、tried my best to control it,but in vain.Frightened as I was,I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off.Fortunately,minutes later,the horse stopped before a river,out of breath,and so did I.At that moment,my dad also came up.Seeing I was OK,he was quite relieved.But it was clear th

7、at we got lost.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We didnt know where the farm house was.What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation.Just as we were at the point of desperation,we heard a faint voic

8、e from the distance.“It must be Uncle Paul,”I said.So we cried back with excitement.Finally,Uncle Paul safely brought us back home.What an amazing ride!精彩语句精彩语句1.精美词汇in vain 白费力气previous adj.之前的at the point of desperation 将要绝望之际a faint voice 微弱的声音2.出彩结构Frightened as I was,I tried to keep my balance

9、to prevent myself from falling off.(部分倒装)What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.(what引导主语从句)Writing2(2017浙江11月)阅读下面短文.根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements,all because of my mother-loving,sw

10、eet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of o

11、ur trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if wed ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drov

12、e off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and trav-elers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go,and Ill stand outside t

13、he door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.”We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble findin

14、g a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections(

15、反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后.请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next day

16、we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.答案答案Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we brought with us.We decided to camp along the river.The views there were surpassingly beautif

17、ulthe warm sunshine,the fresh air,the clean water.We sat on the grass,enjoying the splendid nature.However,when Dad was about to put up our tent,he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel.Well,Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.Paragraph 2：We drove through sev

18、eral states and saw lots of sights along the way.Every time we got to a new place,Mom would cheer up like a child.She would get off the car excitedly,laughing and dancing around.Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities,the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scener

19、y in nature.When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit,Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces.How sweet she was!Absent-minded and forgetful as she was,she never forgot to express her love to us.Writing3(2017浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright,warm July afternoo

20、n,Mac Hollan,a primary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行)a-long alone,he thought fondly of his wife and two young

21、daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man,thats a big dog!”he thought.But when he looked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all,but a wolf,quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found out h

22、is can of bear spray.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Macs relief,it fell back,shak-ing its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a

23、second time,and again,it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill,hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing

24、into his flesh.At this moment,Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer

25、,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front

26、of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later,the other cyclists arrived.答案答案Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the peo-ple inside the car for help.Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb in-to the car,in spite of t

27、he danger that the fierce wolf was running near.They quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible,legs trembling and breathless.Seeing this,the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later,the other cyclis

28、ts arrived.Macs friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple.Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he in-troduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life.During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways

29、 to deal with such dangerous situations.Writing4(2016浙江10月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they r

30、eached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but fo

31、rest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tir

32、ed that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed

33、 the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jan

34、e heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortu-nately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右

35、;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.答案答案Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.She had to stay alone in the forest

36、for another cold night.Jane was so tired and disappointed,but she didnt lose heart.She knew Tom must be trying his best to search for her.She believed that the helicopter must have been called by Tom and was sure it would come back again tomorrow.She found a place near thestream and slept.Paragraph

37、2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Shewalkedalong the stream,hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her.She was so lucky that before long a big rock appeared,which was high above the trees.There she climbed and waited with heryellow blouse in hand for the heli-copter to c

38、ome again.To her great joy,she didnt wait long before she saw the helicopter in the sky.She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helicopter quickly found her.She was right and it was Tom who called the helicopter and saved her.Writing1(2018浙江宁波5月模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jenny was the on

39、ly child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scold-ing from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to e

40、at.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she gave a sigh and had to leave.The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”“Oh,yes,but I dont have money on me,”she

41、 replied.“Thats nothing.Ill treat you today,”said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,the smell so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.“What is it?”asked the man kindly.三年模拟A A组组 2016201820162018年高考模拟年高考模拟 基础题组基础题组“Nothing.Actually I was just touched by your kind

42、ness!”said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”Hearing the words,the seller smiled,“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bow

43、l of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered her mothers familiar face and weathered hands.“Why

44、didnt I think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted.Why havent I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?”On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写

45、部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway,.Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.答案答案写作提示本文是一篇充满教育意义的故事。Jenny因和母亲争吵而负气离家,在街上得到陌生的面店老板赠予的面条而心生感激,在面店老板的提醒下,她终于认识到了母亲的伟大。原文最后一段提到Jenny决定回家向母亲道歉,那么后文的续写一定要围绕这一线索展开。续写第一段的提示句告诉我们这一段是Jenny到家门口后的情景,

46、而又根据第二段的提示句“一个在她头发上的温柔的抚摸拉回了她的思绪”可知上一段最后一定要出现Jenny沉思的语境。充分利用这些信息并结合自己的想象应该可以构思出合理的结尾。本文原文的基调暗示整个故事是一个内容健康向上,具有很好的教育意义的故事。所以续写一定要延续这个主题。One possible version:Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house.“Where might my mother be?”she won

47、dered.“Is she really so angry with me that she doesnt want to show any care for me?”Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother,and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about h

48、er.Tears rolled down her cheeks.Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head to see the familiar face and the worried eyes.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you,”came the tired voice.Jenny couldnt help but throw herself into her mothers arms.“Im sorry and thank y

49、ou for all you have done for me.”She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude.Then she felt the hug tightened.Writing2(2018浙江六校协作体)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was Christmas Day.Robin was working alone fixing an old lantern in the back room when he heard the ringing of his bell on t

50、he shop door.The bell,which produced a uniquely pleasant sound,had been in Robins family for over a hundred years.He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop.Although the bell was hung on the inside of the main door,Robin had tied a wire to the screen door so that