2020年山东中考英语复习课件专题二十一　书面表达.pptx

1、A组 20152019年山东中考题组,Writing 1(2019青岛) 人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次 。请根据提示,就你的第一次写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1.第一次的整个过程; 2.你的感受。 要求: 1.词数:80100(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。,As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time,答案 写作要点 1.本文为夹叙夹议文,介绍第一次做某事的经历用一般

2、过去时,谈感受时用一般现在时。本文主要使用 第一人称。 2.叙述过程完整,避免语法错误,注意时态转换。 参考范文 As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I won the English com- petition. When I was a child, I was not good at English and I hated English class, so that I often lost my thought when I was learn

3、ing English. However, my warm-hearted English teacher always encouraged me to study harder. Be- sides, she also taught me some ways of learning English, such as talking with native speakers, writing as often as possible and listening to English songs and so on. From then on, with her help and my eff

4、orts, I started to be in- terested in English and learn English actively in my class.,Finally, I entered the English competition and won the first prize. When you have trouble in studying subjects or something else, do not give up. I believe you will find the way to solve problems successfully. Only

5、 in this way can we achieve our dreams. Thats all! Thank you! 精彩语句 1.精美词汇:be good at擅长;so that 因此;encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事;as.as possible 尽可能; from then on 从那以后 2.出彩结构:Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.(倒装句),Writing 2(2019东营) Sunday Mail青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动,这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱 你”,或许

6、是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢你”,或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say ”补充完整,并以此为题写一篇英语短文,如:I want to say thank you等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以 及发生在那句话背后的故事,并说说你的感受。 要求: 1.认真审题,把握要点; 2.行文连贯,条理清晰,不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息; 3.100词左右。 I want to say,答案 写作要点 1.本题为半命题作文,首先应该把题目补充完整,再根据题目进行写作。 2.需要交代想说那句话的原因和其背后的故事,用一般过去时。谈感受用一般现在时。注意动词形式的变化。 参考范文 I w

7、ant to say thank you I want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out. Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what

8、 Lucy said was helpful to me.With my mothers help, I didnt lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends. She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇:not only.but. 不但而且;point out ones shortcomings 指出某人的不

9、足;with ones help 在某人的帮助下 2.出彩结构:I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me.(found之后为省略that的宾语从句,从句中 what引导主语从句) She does all that she can do for me.(that引导定语从句),Writing 3(2019烟台) 假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina,收到Li Wei 同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,并向你 寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。 要求:1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺、意思连贯;,2.词

10、数:100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇:laugh at; care about; high-fat food; the more., the healthier. Dear Li Wei, Ive received your letter and I can understand you. Yours, Rina,答案 写作要点 1.这是一封信,注意书信格式。 2.这封信的主题为提建议。时态用一般现在时,人称用第二人称。 3.必须包括所有要点提示,并且每一要点至少有一条补充建议。 参考范文 Dear Li Wei, Ive recei

11、ved your letter and I can understand you.You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, there is no need to care about how others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have the courage t

12、o face and overcome your diffculities. Secondly, try to eat healthilykeep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A bal- anced diet is very important for losing weight.,Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. Youd better get up early in the morning and do so

13、me sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier youll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Rina 精彩语句 1.精美词汇:laugh at 嘲笑;keep away from 远离;advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事 2.出彩结构:You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity.(when引导时 间状语从句),W

14、riting 4(2019枣庄) Write a review(评论)of the following story of about 120 words. The review has to include the following points. (阅读下面的故事,请根据下面的提示,写出一篇约120词的评论)。 1.The title of your review.(你的评论的标题。) 2.Your ideas, examples and the reasons for unhappiness and happiness in the story.(关于故事中幸福和不幸福 的观点,并举例说

15、明。) 3.Your ideas of happiness, examples for happiness in your daily life.(你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点,并举例 说明。) 4.Your conclusion about happiness.(关于幸福的结论。) 5.The words you may use:(你可能用到的词:)be satisfied with.对满意 desire n.欲望 contentment n.知足 the key to happiness幸福的关键 A long time ago, in a rich and beautiful count

16、ry, there lived an unhappy king. He slept badly and didnt feel like,eating. He often cried for no reason. This made the queen and his people worried. So they called a doctor to ex- amine him. But the doctor found nothing wrong with the kings body.He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy

17、 person to wear. That would make him happy. The prime minister was called to the palace. But when they explained the kings situation to him, he said,“Al- though I have a lot of power, it doesnt make me happy.Im always worried about losing my power.”Then the kings banker came to say,“Im afraid Im not

18、 happy either. I have a lot of wealth, but Im always worried about losing money.Someone tries to steal my money.” Next, the palace singer was called to say,“Im famous but I m not happy because Im worried about being followed by others. I cant be free.” Finally, the top general was told to go out to

19、find a happy man. He searched and searched but couldnt find any- one. Everyone seemed to have their own problems, and no one was truly happy. Just as he wanted to give up, he saw a poor man on the street. The man was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself. The general went to him and s

20、aid,“What makes you so happy? You have no power,money, or fame.”The man said,“I have everything I want, and I dont want what I cant have. So Im happy, and my song comes from the happiness,in my heart.”“Can you give your shirt to me? I need it,”said the general.“What shirt? I dont have any shirts,”an

21、swered the man.,答案 写作要点 1.这是一篇评论,需要先读懂故事,再从提示的四个方面入手进行写作。这种书面表达题型不多见。 2.归纳故事中的观点时用一般过去时,归纳自己日常生活中的观点和下结论时用一般现在时,应注意时态的 转换。 参考范文 My Thoughts about Happiness/Happiness Power,wealth and fame cant always make people happy. For example, the important people were unhappy,be- cause they were afraid of losi

22、ng what they had, while the poor man was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have. What can always make me happy?Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have, for instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a

23、 glass of water from Mother,when Im studying, getting help from my friends when Im in trouble and so on. There are the moments when I am happy. All in all,dont want what you cant have. Contentment is the key to happiness. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇:be satisfied with. 对感到满意;pay attention to 注意;for instance 例如;all i

24、n all 总之 2.出彩结构:Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have.(if引导 条件状语从句,what引导宾语从句) All in all, dont want what you cant have. (dont want what you cant have为祈使句的否定形式,what引导宾 语从句),Writing 5(2019聊城) 假如你叫陈伟,2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末,请你制订一个周末活动计划,并用英语给你 的英国

25、笔友Alan写一封电子邮件,说明你的活动安排。 主要活动内容包括: 1.6月22日上午在家读书;下午与家人和朋友外出活动。 2.6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾。 3.你对本次活动的期待。 注意: 1.邮件词数:80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件不能出现真实的人名和地名。 3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Alan, Im going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.,Yours, Chen Wei,答案 写作要点 1.这是一封邮件,要求向笔友介绍你的周末活动计划,应该用一般将来时和第一人称。 2.

26、根据提示内容从三个方面写,并注意适当增加细节,使文章内容充实。 参考范文 Dear Alan, Im going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.On the morning of 22nd June. Im going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon, Im going out with my family and friends. Were go- ing to take a walk in the count

27、ry near our home. And on 23rd June were going to collect litter in the park near my friends house. I think its going to be a great weekendbusy but fun! Yours, Chen Wei,Writing 6(2018青岛) 现在,中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量,但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一 篇短文,谈谈你的看法。内容包括: 1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因; 2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响; 3.针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议

28、。 要求:1.词数:80100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇:be short of 缺少 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.,答案 写作要点 1.体裁:议论文。 2.时态:一般现在时。 3.人称:第三人称为主。 4.要点:(1)此现状的原因;(2)此现状的影响;(3)提出合理建议。 参考范文 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. They spend too much time

29、 on the school homework every day.Many kinds of after-school classes take up their spare time.In addition,most students are lost in mobile phones and computer games,which makes them have no time to take exercise. Lack of exercise may make students unhealthier and cause kinds of diseases.It can also

30、affect the brain develop- ment. Besides, it can make skeletal development defective. I think we must change this current situation.We can choose the sports we are interested in,so that we can insist,well.We should make plans in order that we can arrange our time reasonably for exercise.We can look f

31、or the friends we do exercise along with. Lets go into action immediately. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇:spend too much time on在上花费太多时间;defective adj.有缺陷的;go into action 行动起来 2.出彩结构:In addition,most students are lost in mobile phones and computer games,which makes them have no time to take exercise. which 引导非限制性定语从句,

32、which指代前面整个主句所表达的内容。,Writing 7(2018德州) 树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年 编写的青少年自我保护、健康成长手册的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:陈述 你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。,要求: 1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3.80100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Self-protection is one of the most important skills f

33、or teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you. First, I always obey the traffic rules In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.,答案 写作要点 本文应使用一般现在时和第一人称。写作要点包括:1.交通规则:禁止闯红灯、要走斑

34、马线。2.关于食物:多 吃蔬菜和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。3.关于交朋友:不要单独见陌生人、互相帮助。4.写一条自己的建议。 参考范文 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you. First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red l

35、ight. When the traffic light is red, I wont go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because its safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. Its important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, espec

36、ially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other. Whats more, Id like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, its dangerous for us to swim alone, es-,pecially in deep lakes or rivers. So dont do that. In short, if we obey the rules a

37、nd take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇:not.until.直到才;whats more 而且;in short 总之 2.出彩结构:Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet.(who引导定语从 句,修饰先行词friends),Writing 8(2018威海) “照镜子”是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mir

38、ror”为题, 写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点,重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如 何扬长避短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。 要求:1.题目已给出,不计入总词数; 2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅; 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。,答案 写作要点 本题是一篇话题作文,要求根据所给的材料介绍一下镜子里的“我”。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人 称。写作要点包括:1.介绍自己的最突出的一至两个优点和缺点;2.谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避 短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。 参考范文 Me in the mirror Looking at myself in

39、 the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and Im always ready to help them. So Im very popular in my school. But I have a big problem. Im less interested in my lessons and I cant concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don t get go

40、od grades which make my parents disappointed. When I go to senior high school, I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go,for it. I decide to have a healt

41、hier lifestyle. Ill spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. Whats more, I will read more books and master good learning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇

42、:be less interested in 不太感兴趣;concentrate v.专注,集中注意力 2.出彩结构:In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I dont get good grades which make my parents disappointed.(which make my parents disappointed是由which引导的定语从句),Writing 9(2018潍坊) 人总要慢慢长大,那些曾经的过往成就了未来的你。根据图表提示,请你也用英语分享一下学校生活 中让你受益的人或

43、事。 内容包括: 1.具体是什么; 2.学到了什么。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.文中不要出现考生本人的真实信息。,答案 写作要点 本题要求分享学校生活中让你受益的人或事,为记叙文。应使用一般过去时和第一人称。写作要点包括:1. 要分享的事是什么;2.你从中学到了什么。 参考范文 I hated running because it often made me feel hot all over and have a stomachache. My PE teacher advised me to walk first and then try running. So I did it e

44、very day after school. I continued doing it for more than two years. Thanks to my PE teacher, last month I passed the running test successfully. From this I learn that we should start everything with the easiest and make progress little by little. And of course, we must keep trying our best. 精美词汇 al

45、l over浑身,到处;advise sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事;little by little逐渐地;try our best尽我们最大的努力,Writing 10(2017聊城) 假定你是张华,你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语 给他回封电子邮件。 内容包括: 1.看英语电影、听英语歌曲,猜测生词意思。 2.与外教交谈。 3.把单词写在纸条上,利用纸条记忆单词。 注意: 1.词数:80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Wei, I received your

46、email yesterday. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now Id like to give,you some advice. These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you. Yours, Zhang Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文用书信格式,内容为介绍如何学好英语; 2.主体时态用一般现在时; 3.提示的3点内容都要包含,可以适当扩展。 参考范文 Dear Wang Wei, I received your email yesterd

47、ay. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now Id like to give you some advice. Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English!Watch and listen several times, and guess the meanings of the new words. Having a conversation with a foreign teacher

48、 is also a good way. Youd better start it with greetings or a ques- tion. Also, smile before you speak and do not feel shy.,Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them, and try to use them. These are my suggestions. I hope they are

49、useful to you. Yours, Zhang Hua 深度解析 关于如何学好英语是一个常见的话题。遇到这样的题目,学生有话可说。但是要注意使用题目给出的提示 要点,“看英语电影,听英语歌曲,猜测生词意思、与外教交谈、利用纸条记单词”,而且不能有遗漏。另外 学生还可根据自己的经验,提出其他的有利于学英语的做法。,Writing 11(2017莱芜) 学校网站“英语论坛”栏目向你约稿,要求结合初中学习生活,为即将入校的新生提几点建议。请根据表 中信息完成此稿件。,要求:1)包含全部要点,可适当发挥; 2)不能出现真实的校名及姓名; 3)开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; 4)词数控制在80100左右。 Dear friends, Im glad to give you some advice about your new school life.,I believe you will have a