2020年广西中考英语复习课件4-专题二十　书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019北部湾经济区) 暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你 根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 写作要点: 1.学习计划; 2.运动计划; 3.娱乐计划; 4.你的愿望。 写作要求: 1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;,A组 20152019年广西中考题组,2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分; 4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Plan for Summer Holiday T

2、he summer holiday is coming.,答案 写作要点 本文可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为主。为了 使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。 参考范文 My Plan for Summer Holiday The summer holiday is coming. I cant wait to make a good plan for it. First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing w

3、ill be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sports with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. Whats more, to experience different cultures i

4、n other places will be the most important part of my plan. All of these will be helpful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday.,Writing 2(2019桂林) 假如你是小玲,上周日,你和你的美国朋友Betty在西山公园玩得很开心,现在请你根据下列表格的信息,以 “A Happy Day”为题写一篇英语短文。,写作要求1.文中应包括以上信息,可适当发挥,行文连贯,书写规范。 2.文章词数在70词左右,开头已经给出,

5、不计入总词数。 3.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。 A Happy Day Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.,答案 写作要点 学生审题时一定要注意到题目所给的限定时间是上周日,所以应以一般过去时为主。题目所给的要点以英 文的形式给出,学生只需按照时间顺序将题目的要点进行整合,写出完整的句子即可。 参考范文 A Happy Day Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.In the morning, we

6、 get up early to catch the bus to Xishan Park. We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing. On the way up to the top, we saw lots of beauti- ful flowers and lovely monkeys. When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. So we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we

7、listened to music, feeling relaxed. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake and fed fish. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 lots of许多;have a picnic野餐 2.出彩结构 When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. After that, we listened to music, f

8、eeling relaxed. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.,Writing 3(2019玉林) 每周星期一的升旗仪式(Flag-raising ceremony)是你们学校的常规活动。你的英国笔友Bob对你校的升旗 仪式很感兴趣。假定你是张华,请你给Bob写一封电子邮件,介绍一下你校升旗仪式的情况。,1.升旗的时间和地点; 2.参加升旗的人员; 3.升旗活动的意义; 4.你的感想。 参考词汇:(仅供参考) 要求: 1.包括所有的内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥; 2.80词左右,语法正确;(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总

9、词数),内容要点:,3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。 Dear Bob, Hearing that you are interested in the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. I am glad to tell you something about it. Hope you can experience the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. Yours, Zhang Hua,答案 写作要点 本书面表达的审题应确定好写作的时态,以一般现在时为主。内容要点应该包括时间、地点、人员、

10、意义 以及自己对于升旗仪式的感想,其中前三项内容可简要写明,后面两项需着重说明。写作人称应以第一人 称为主。 参考范文 Dear Bob, Hearing that you are interested in the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. I am glad to tell you something about it.Every Monday morning, the Flag-raising ceremony is held on the square in front of the teaching building. All the

11、teachers and the students must attend it. We stand there seriously and sing the national anthem. It is educa- tional to take part in such a ceremony, because the national flag is a symbol of a country. To admire it means to admire our motherland. When I hear the national anthem, a sense of pride wil

12、l rise in my heart. I am so proud of my country. I must,study hard, so that I can serve our country better in the future. Hope you can experience the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. Yours, Zhang Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 in front of在前面; take part in参加; a sense of pride自豪感;be proud of对感到自豪 2.出彩结构 It is ed

13、ucational to take part in such a ceremony, because the national flag is a symbol of a country. To admire it means to admire our motherland. When I hear the national anthem, a sense of pride will rise in my heart.,Writing 4(2019百色) 假设李华是你的同班同学,请根据以下提示及要求,用英语写一篇题为“My Classmate”的短文。 提示:1.他个子高,长相英俊,成绩优秀

14、,擅长运动;2.他乐于助人(举一个例子);3.对他的评价。 要求:1.文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名; 2.词数80左右。 My Classmate,答案 写作要点 本书面表达的题材接近学生的日常生活,写作的难度不大,而且题目所给的提示也比较清晰,学生只需按照 题目的提示正确组织语言,运用正确的句子结构即可完成本篇写作。时态应以一般现在时为主,在描述他 乐于助人的具体例子时可适当使用一般过去时。 参考范文 My Classmate I have a good friend and he is also my classmate,whose name is LiHua. He is not onl

15、y a tall and handsome boy but also good at study. Besides, he does well in sports. The thing that makes him different is that he is always ready to help others. Once upon a time, I cant understand what the teacher said in math class, and he spent his spare time helping me. He is such a boy that can

16、make people around him happy. I am very glad to be his classmate and friend.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 not only.but also.不仅而且;once upon a time 曾经 2.出彩结构 He is not only a tall and handsome boy but also good at study. The thing that makes him different is that he is always ready to help others.,Writing 5(2019贺州) 梦想

17、有多大,舞台就有多大。人人都有自己的梦想,你的梦想是什么?请根据下面提示,以“My Dream”为 题,写一篇英语短文。 提示:1.你的梦想是什么?(如:成为一名记者、医生或者科学家等) 2.你为什么有这样的梦想? 3.你打算怎样实现自己的梦想? 参考词汇:grow up study hard come true 要求:1.根据所给提示内容,展开思路,可适当发挥; 2.不能出现真实的校名和人名; 3.80词左右。,答案 写作要点 本文在审题时应该注意时态,既然谈的是梦想,那这一部分用的就应该是一般将来时,人称以第一人称为 主。写作内容方面,应该把重点放在描述怎样实现自己的梦想上,写出一些具体的

18、措施。 参考范文 My Dream Im a middle school student now. When I grow up, Im going to be a reporter. Because being a reporter is cool. Besides, my favorite subject is Chinese and Im good at it, too. How can I make my dream come true? Firstly, Im going to study Chinese harder by taking writing lessons and pr

19、acticing writing articles. Secondly, if my articles are great, I will send them to magazines and newspapers. Lastly, I will never give up when I meet difficulties. Where there is a will, there is a way. Im sure my dream will come true one day.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 come true实现;give up放弃 2.出彩结构 Besides, my fav

20、orite subject is Chinese and Im good at it, too. Lastly, I will never give up when I meet difficulties. Where there is a will, there is a way.,Writing 6(2019贵港) 假如你是林涛,你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾。现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相 处和自我保护的建议。请根据下面表格提示,用英文给他写一封回信。,写作要求:1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥; 2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范; 3.文中不能出现考生的真实

21、姓名、校名和地名; 4.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 参考词汇:respect尊重 Dear Sam, Hows it going? Im happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves. Best wishes! Yours, Lin Tao,答案 写作要点 本文为提纲式作文,题目列出了写作所需的要点,内容较为贴近学生的校园生活。写作时应注意人称以第 二人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。另外注意,在写一些提建议类的文章时,我们应多选用适当的情态动 词进行写作。 参考范文 Dear

22、Sam, Hows it going? Im happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves. On the one hand, you should learn how to get along well with others. You should try to be a good listener and try your best to help others. Besides, you should be careful when you want to make friends on t

23、he Internet. On the other hand, you should know how to protect yourself. Whenever you meet difficulties, you should talk with your classmates or ask your teachers or parents for help. If you cannot deal with these problems correctly, they will affect your study and life. You may lose your friends an

24、d you may fall behind others.,I hope my suggestions can help you! Best wishes! Yours, Lin Tao 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 on the one hand.on the other hand.一方面另一方面;get along well with与相处; make friends 交朋友; deal with处理;fall behind落后 2.出彩结构 You should try to be a good listener and try your best to help others.,Writin

25、g 7(2019河池) “人生没有彩排,生命没有重来”,你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举 办一场以“Keep away from the danger!”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学,大家推选你参加这 次比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。 写作提示:,写作要求:1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名; 2.所有的提示词都需用上,包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯; 3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚; 4.词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。),答案 写作要点 本文的难度在于题目以英文的形式给出要点

26、,学生要先读懂题目所给的图示的意思,才能进行写作。时态 应以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称。 参考范文 Keep away from the danger! Hello! Everyone. Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us.So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission.When we swim in the water,we must wear life

27、jackets. Second, its important for us to follow the traffic rules.We mustnt go across the street when the traffic light is red.While crossing the street, never use mobile phones.We must walk on the pavement. Third,we have to be careful when we make friends, especially online.We mustnt meet net frien

28、ds alone.Fourth, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health.Remember to wash hands before meals.Whats more, we have to follow the school rules.Dont run in the hallways,or well,be hurt easily. We should get on well with our classmates.Dont fi

29、ght with them.If we are threatened,we should call the police for help in time.Last but not least,we must say no to the drugs.Never try them.When you see someone sell drugs,remember to call 110. In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger! Thats all. Thank you for listening! 精彩语句 1.精

30、美词汇 keep away from 远离;follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则; be supposed to应该;do harm to 对有害; get on well with与相处 2.出彩结构 Second, its important for us to follow the traffic rules. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. If we are threatened,we should call the police for help in time.,Writ

31、ing 8(2019梧州) 为配合学校开展“争当新时代好学生”活动,校英语社团将举办以“How to Be a Good Student”为题的征 文比赛。请你根据以下内容要点,写一篇参赛短文。 内容要点:1.认真听课,努力学习; 2.礼貌待人,遵守规则; 3.助人为乐,关爱他人; 4.保护环境,节约能源; 5. 要 点:1.文中必包括所给内容要点15项,可展开思路,适当发挥; 2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息; 3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。,How to Be a Good Students As a teenager, we should be have

32、well and try to be a good student.,答案 写作要点 本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般现在时。短文结构为总分总。写作时可使用first、second等词体现 文章的层次性,同时要灵活运用一些情态动词及提建议的句型。 参考范文 How to Be a Good Student As a teenager, we should behave well and try to be a good student. But how to be a good student? Here are my opinions. First, we should listen to t

33、he teacher carefully in calss; we must study hard and get good grades. Next, we should be polite. It is good manners to greet others politely. We should obey the rules and queue for our turns. Third, we should be willing to help others. For example, we can help the elderly clean their rooms in our s

34、pare time; we can save our pocket money to help those who are in need. Fourth, wed better live a green life. We can save wa-,ter by taking short showers, and save enerrgy by turning off lights when necessary. But we cant drop litter ev- erywhere. Moreover, we should take more exercise. It is importa

35、nt to keep healgthy. All in all, being a good student is good for our society, and behaving well can also improve our personal quali- ties.,Writing 9(2018北部湾经济区) 假如你是李华,是向阳中学九年级(1)班的一名学生,你的初中生活即将结束,请你以“My Sugges- tions”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,在学习、生活、校园活动、同学关系这几方面给七年级的新生提几点 建议,并提出你的希望和祝愿。 写作要求: 1.内容必须包含所给的信息,可

36、适当发挥,使行文连贯; 2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息,否则一律不予评分; 4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Suggestions My name is Li Hua. Im a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School.,答案 写作要点 本文要求学生以“My Suggestions”为题写一篇文章。写作过程中注意时态的选用。全篇应以一般现在 时为主,在最后表达希望和祝愿时可用一般将来时。 参考范文 My Suggestions My name is Li Hua. I

37、m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Welcome to our school. When you come to the middle school, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is important to have good learn- ing habits first. Besides, reading more books is also helpful for your study. At the same time, youd bet

38、ter do some exercise to keep healthy. And in order to make the school life more colorful, I suggest you should take part in more activities. Its necessary to get on well with your classmates. I hope that you will make great progress and have a wonderful life.,Writing 10(2018玉林) 假如你叫李涛,是一名初中学生。你的英国笔友

39、Tom很想了解中国优秀传统文化,恰好你校暑假将举 办中国传统文化展(The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。请你给Tom写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。 内容要点:,1.展会目的:使更多人了解中国传统文化; 2.展会时间:2018年7月15日; 3.展会地点:学校艺术中心; 4.参会人员:全体师生、家长以及其他有兴趣的人; 5.展出内容:相关书籍、图片、录像。 参考词汇:(仅供参考),要求:1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥。 2.80词左右,语句通顺,语法正确。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) 3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名

40、称。 Dear Tom, Hows it going?,Looking forward to your coming! Yours, Li Tao,答案 写作要点 本文要求写一封电子邮件邀请朋友来参加展会。文章时态以一般将来时为主,人称为第一人称。写作的要 点应包含题目列出来的五点,但是不要逐条翻译,考生可根据要点内容进行描写,并适当发挥。 参考范文 Dear Tom, Hows it going? I would like to invite you to take part in The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair which will be held

41、 on 15th July in our school this summer holiday. The Fair will be held in our school Art Center. And the purpose of this activity is to make more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture. All the teachers, students, parents and people who are interested in Chinese culture are all welcomed

42、to join in. You will enjoy some books, pictures and videos that are related to Chinese culture. If you can come, I will be very happy. Looking forward to your coming!,Yours, Li Tao 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 invite sb. to.邀请某人;be interested in 对感兴趣;be related to 与有关系 2. 出彩结构 And the purpose of this activity is to

43、make more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture.,Writing 11(2018 梧州) 阳光中学校报的英语专刊就“中学生能否在学校使用智能手机(smartphone)的问题”向学生征稿。请 你根据同学们的不同观点,写一篇征文,谈谈自己的看法。 要点提示:,要求:1.文中必须包括上表的内容,可展开思路,适当发挥; 2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息; 3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 Nowadays, smartphones are popular among students. Shoul

44、d they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions.,答案 写作要点 本篇写作要点应该包含对于中学生能否在学校使用智能手机的这个问题,赞成的观点有哪些,反对的观点 有哪些,并提出你自己的观点和建议,这三方面缺一不可。时态应该以一般现在时为主。 参考范文 Nowadays, smartphones are popular among students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or no

45、t? Our students have different opinions. Some students think they should use smartphones at school, because it is easy for them to keep in touch with their family members. Besides, they can use the phone to search for some useful information. And they can also use the phone to look up English words.

46、 However, other students dont agree with them. They think some stu- dents may use the phones to play games and it is not good for their study. Whats worse, it is bad for their bod- ies, if they use the phone for a long time.,In my opinion, I dont think students should use smartphones at school. We s

47、hould put all our heart into study. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 keep in touch with 和某人保持联系;search for 查找;agree with 同意;in my opinion 在我看来 2. 出彩结构 Whats worse, it is bad for their bodies, if they use the phone for a long time. We should put all our heart into study.,Writing 12(2017梧州) 时间去哪了?这是一些中学生的烦恼。事实上,时间就在我们手里,关

48、键是能否合理利用。 请根据所给内容要点,以“How to spend our time properly”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。 内容要点: 1.时间在自己的掌控中; 2.花充足时间在学习上(如:订学习计划、听课和完成作业等); 3.有个人爱好,但不能花太多时间; 4.适当交流,适当锻炼; 5. 要求: 1.文中必须包括所给内容要点的15项,可展开思路,适当发挥; 2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息; 3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。,提示词: How to spend our time properly Where has our time gone?

49、,答案 写作要点 本篇为提纲式作文,要求学生以“How to spend our time properly”为题写一篇文章。文章时态以一般现在 时为主,人称为第一人称。写作的要点为题目列出来的15项要点。学生可根据要点内容进行描写,并适 当发挥。 参考范文 How to spend our time properly Where has our time gone?We will say we are in control of time. But how can we spend our time properly? First, we should spend enough time on study, such as