2020年福建中考英语复习课件专题十七　书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019福建) 假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回 复。词数80左右。,A组 20152019年福建中考题组,参考词汇:congratulation祝贺 注意事项: 1.回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。,答案 写作提示 1.要求根据收到的电子邮件回复邮件。 2.注意人称的使用。 3.主要内容: (1)祝贺Harry获奖。 (2)回答对方提出的问题:对机器人有什么看法;是否想拥有自己的机器人;为什么。 4.时

2、态:以一般现在时为主。,参考范文 Dear Harry, Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news! I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future theyll play more important roles in our daily life. In fact, Im dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not

3、at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on. Hoping youll make greater progress. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇: in many ways 在许多方面 take care of照顾 such as 例如 make greater progress取得更大进步 2.出彩结构: How glad

4、 I am to share your good news!(感叹句:How+adj.+主谓+谓语!) I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home.(have sth. do结构;when引导时间状语从 句),Writing 2(2018福建) 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,邀 请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节,感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。,注意事项: 1.必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达

5、通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 参考词汇:practice wushu练武,答案 写作提示 本题要求学生写一封电子邮件,邮件的格式已给出。写作内容主要包括两方面: (一)邀请Henry参加学校举办的首届武术节,告知武术节的时间和活动。(二)介绍中国武术的历史及练武的 好处。在写作人称上较灵活,可能运用到第一人称、第二人称,介绍中华武术部分还要运用到第三人称。 写作时态上:介绍武术节会用到一般将来时;介绍武术历史和益处主要用一般现在时。本题人称、时态要 灵活转换,句型上的选用范围较广。,参考范文 Dear Henry, I am glad t

6、hat you are interested in wushu. Here Ive got good news for you. The first wushu festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. Id like to invite you to the festival. You can watch many wushu competitions and enjoy wonderful shows. Chinese wushu has a history of thousands of year

7、s. Practicing wushu is a good way to improve our health. Be- sides, it helps us to develop strong wills. Most of us like it very much. I hope you will come and experience Chi- nese wushu culture. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇: a history of thousands of years几千年的历史 a g

8、ood way to.的好方法 2.出彩结构: Looking forward to seeing yon soon.(seeing.为动名词短语作介词to的宾语),Writing 3(2017福建) 你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示,用英语在QQ中给他留言,介绍并推荐你 的家乡福建,词数80左右。,要求: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。,答案 写作提示 这是一篇图表类作文。按照图表中的提示具体介绍家乡福建,包括位置、省会、人口、环境、名胜

9、等,时 态用一般现在时。,参考范文 Hi, John, Im glad to hear that youre planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. Id like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit. Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Be- cause of the

10、nice environment, its known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Beside

11、s, you can taste var- ious kinds of delicious food. Im looking forward to meeting you!,Writing 4(2016福州) 你的学校正在开展“诚信”教育,英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示的 要点,写一篇演讲稿。,要求:1)短文应包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥; 2)词数90左右,不包含已给出句子的词数; 3)演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇:cheat in the exam; fall behind(落后),答案 写作提示 本文为一篇关于诚信的演讲稿,在演讲稿中用

12、朋友李雷来举例,并要表明你对他的行为的观点看法。文中 主要使用第三人称和第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。,参考范文 Hello, everyone!Its a great honor to give a speech here.Id like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exams. As a result, he gradua

13、lly falls behind other students. Whats worse, he isnt trusted by others. So I think we should be honest in the exams. And its important to do homework by ourselves. We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, wed better try our best to keep the promise. Thats al

14、l. Thank you for listening!,Writing 5(2016泉州) 暑假快到了,学校倡导同学们多读书、读好书、以阅读为乐,过一个有意义的假期。请你以“Ill Enjoy Reading in the Summer Vacation”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文与大家分享。 内容要点: 1.阅读的好处:了解世界;带来快乐; 2.读书计划:寻找好书;用好时间; 写作要求:必须根据内容要点进行写作,并适当发挥。 温馨提示:短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。,答案 写作提示 本文为提纲式作文,带有一定的开放性,写作时首先描述阅读的好处,可以适当发挥。其次描述读书计

15、划。 注意在写作时,表达要准确,适当使用高级词汇。,参考范文 Ill Enjoy Reading in the Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming. And I plan to make full use of the time to read some books. I think reading has a lot of benefits. First, reading can let me know more about the world. Besides, I can get a lot of pleasure from rea

16、ding. Finally, I can gain a lot of knowledge from books. I need to make a reading plan to make reading more effective. What is the most important is that I should find some good books to read. Whats more, I need to make a schedule to manage my time well. To understand the books better, I want to joi

17、n a reading club to share with others.,Writing 6(2016龙岩) 新的暑假即将到来,鉴于以往假期中各种事故频发,同学们,请你以“How to keep safe”为主题,用英语写一 篇短文。 要求:1.根据一幅或多幅图片提示,自主立意构思,要切合图意,可适当发挥; 2.不得出现真实的校名和人名,可用第一人称或第二人称描述; 3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。,答案 写作提示 1.本文为图画类作文。 2.写作时要包含以下要点中的一个或多个: 游泳注意安全,要有同伴; 远离烟火; 遵守交通规则; 注意饮食安全; 注意旅行安全。 3.本文时态

18、以一般现在时为主。,参考范文 (一) Almost every summer vacation, quite a few students are reported to have accidents. Its important to know how to keep safe.First, when you go swimming, you should go with your friends or parents. Dont swim in the river or in the sea. Second, you must keep away from the fire. Third,

19、 its important for you to obey the traffic rules, or youll be in danger. Fourth, you ought to eat healthy food. Last but not least, when you go travelling, you had better not go alone. In a word, if everyone can realize the importance of safety, we can spend a healthy and safe holiday.,(二) Almost ev

20、ery summer vacation, quite a few students are reported to have accidents. Its important to know how to keep safe.Its said that many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents in China. So I think its im- portant for us to obey the traffic rules. Before we cross the road, we must stop a

21、nd look both ways. When we cross the street, we must pay attention to the traffic lights. We must wait until the light turns green. Whats more, dont play on the street. Its quite dangerous. In short, we should value our lives and keep away from danger.,Writing 7(2015漳州) 学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请

22、根据图示内容,结合自身的一次经历,写 一篇短文,并阐述分享的意义。,要求: 1.要点齐全,并适当发挥; 2.词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。,答案 写作提示 1.本文是关于分享的开放式作文。 2.时态:文章可以主要用一般现在时来描述。 注意:1.不要遗漏题目中要求的要点。2.为了使行文流畅,可以用表示顺序的词来连接,如first,next等。,参考范文 Sharing Its very important to learn to share with each other. I have many things to share in dif

23、ferent ways. For example, I can share some beautiful pictures, favorite music, different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, e-mail which are widely used. Now Id like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you. Emily was lonely and unhappy. I hoped to cheer her up. So I shared my fav

24、orite books and chatted with her after class. As time went by, she became used to sharing her feelings with me. Now were good friends. In a word, sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up. We can learn a lot from shar- ing and enjoy our lives more.,Writing 8(2015莆田) 最近

25、,我们对某中学1000名学生进行了一次问卷调查,了解他们对未来梦想职业的选择情况。请你根据以 下图示内容及写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。 要点:1.描述图示调查结果; 2.阐述你的梦想职业及原因; 3.简述你将如何去实现梦想。,注意:1.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校; 3.词数90左右。 参考词汇:percent百分比 Recently, a survey of 1000 students dream jobs has been made in a school.,答案 写作提示 1.本题为图表类作文。2.写作步骤:第一、按照题目要求描述图表反映的情况;第二

26、、对数字进行比较,然后 进行分析,归纳;第三、写出自己的梦想职业及原因;第四、简述自己将如何实现梦想。3.注意事项:准确表 述图表所反映的情况,然后把自己的想法也表达出来。在写作中,要层次分明,注意分段。,参考范文 Recently, a survey of 1000 students dream jobs has been made in a school. The students have different dreams. Nearly half of them dream of becoming doctors. Thirty percent of the students are

27、interested in teaching, and fif- teen percent of them want to be office workers. Besides, a few of them have other choices. As for me, Id like to be a doctor. Its the duty of doctors to treat people who are ill and save their lives. Whats more, doctors are highly respected. At present, Ill try my be

28、st to study well and help others when necessary. Im sure Ill achieve my dream as long as I keep on working hard.,Writing 1(2019河北) 文明礼貌从我做起,从现在做起,从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求,以“When to Say Thank You”为题,写一篇短文。 提示:(1)When should we say “thank you” at home? (2)When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?

29、(3). 要求:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 参考词汇:wash, encourage, open,B组 20152019年全国中考题组,When to Say Thank You Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.,答案 B)书面表达 写作提示 1.文体:议论文。 2.注意人称和时态的使用。 3.时态:一般现在时。,参考范文 When to Say

30、 Thank You Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us. For example, when Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say“thank you”to them. At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, its nice to say “thank you”.

31、 If a teacher says“well done”to encourage us, were supposed to say “thank you”. Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say“thank you”. Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”!,精彩语句 1.精美词汇: say “thank you” to sb. 感谢某人 be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 2.出彩结构: If a teacher say

32、s “well done”to encourage us, were supposed to say “thank you”.(本句含有if 引导的条件 状语从句),Writing 2(2019黑龙江齐齐哈尔,B) 初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合 以下提示谈谈你的感悟。 提示:1.初中阶段你有哪些收获; 2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望; 3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。 要求:1.80100词,首句已给出,不计入总词数; 2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。 The life of my junior high

33、 school is coming to an end.,答案 写作提示 1.特别注意时态。本篇文章既回忆过去,又展望未来,所以既要用到一般过去时、现在完成时,又要用到一 般将来时态。 2.写作要点分解:(1)收获;(2)遗憾或未实现的愿望;(3)计划或打算。 3.注意行文连贯,表达清晰,语法正确。,参考范文 The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, Ive gained confi- dence and happiness. With the h

34、elp of our teachers, Ive learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. Ive also made some good friends. However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldnt keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I q

35、uarreled with my parents. In the future, Ill try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, Ill get on well with my parents. I believe Ill have a happy and colorful life.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇:come to an end 结束 with the help of 在的帮助下 as well as 也,还 be busy with 忙于 keep on doin

36、g 坚持做 once in a while 偶尔 quarrel with sb.和某人争吵 make good use of 好好利用 meanwhile adv.同时 get on well with sb. 和某人相处融洽 2.出彩结构:Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.(本句是一个主从复合 句。so.that.引导结果状语从句),Writing 3(2019广西北部湾经济区) 暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan fo

37、r Summer Holiday”。请你 根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 写作要点: 1.学习计划; 2.运动计划; 3.娱乐计划; 4.你的愿望。 写作要求: 1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯; 2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分; 4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。,My Plan for Summer Holiday The summer holiday is coming.,答案 写作提示 本书面表达可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为 主。为

38、了使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。,参考范文 My Plan for Summer Holiday The summer holiday is coming. I cant wait to make a good plan for it. First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing will be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sp

39、orts with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. Whats more, to experience different cultures in other places will be the most important part of my plan. All of these will be hel

40、pful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday.,精彩语句 精美词汇:cant wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 spend.on.在上花费(时间/金钱) in order to do sth.为 了做某事 such as例如 plan to do sth.计划做某事 whats more更为重要的是 look forward to期待,评析 本书面表达的话题为学生所熟悉,贴近学生生活实际,使得学生有话可写。从命题的形式上来看,属 于“提纲式”作文,即让学生根据题目所给的要点提示来进行写作。

41、,Writing 4(2019广东) 假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化 产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的学校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会 上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。 内容包括: 1.推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。 2.介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容) 参考活动:欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera),体验功夫(kung fu),参加广东历史讲座等 作文要求: 1.不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾

42、已经给出,不计入总词数。,Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. I hope youll enjoy your stay here!,答案 写作提示 1.所写文章属于发言稿,所以考生应注意发言稿的特殊表达方式; 2.注意人称和时态; 3.内容涵盖所有要点; 4.语言表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。,参考范文 Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of

43、the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. Weve prepared some traditional food for you, such as shrimp dumplings, steamed pork ribs. I wish youll like them. As for the schedule of your activities, youll watch a Cantonese opera in the music hall on the first day. I believe you

44、 will be attracted by its beauty. And you are sure to get more excited on the second day, as you will learn kung fu from a master in the gym. From these activities, I think you will have a better understanding of the cul- ture of Guangdong. I hope youll enjoy your stay here!,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 such as 比如;a

45、s for至于;be attracted by 被吸引;be sure to 一定;learn from 向学习。 2.出彩结构 From these activities, I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong.(本句是一个主 从复合句,动词think后是一个省略了引导词that的宾语从句),Writing 5(2019江苏南京) 假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封

46、电子邮件。,注意: 1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam,答案 写作提示 1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。 2.人称:第一人称等。 3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。 4.确定要点: 1)这个app的名称; 2)这个app解决什么问题; 3)这个app应有的具体功能。,参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. Id like to shar

47、e my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”? Many of us have difficulty in writing. We dont know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems. Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we rea

48、d, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. I hope my advice is worth taking. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇:have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难 and so o

49、n等等 correct mistakes纠错 offer sugges- tions提供建议 2.出彩结构:The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越, 就越 ”) Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. (so that引导目的状语 从句) Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. (who引导定语从句,修饰 先行词an e-teacher),Writing 6(2019江苏连云港) 减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大 家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示