2020年北京中考英语复习课件专题十三　书面表达.pptx

1、A组 北京中考题组,Writing 1(2019北京) 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目 假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交 换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报 的一些想法。 提示词语 design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture 提示问题 When should you hand in the

2、poster? What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your email. If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua,题目 自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。 某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了 增强自律意识,你做过什

3、么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。 提示词语 self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve 提示问题 What did you do to be self-disciplined? What benefits have you got from doing so? Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.,答案 写作提示 题目 1.人称:以第一人称为主。 2.时态:以一般现在时为主。 3.要点:1)海报上交的时间; 2)分享设计海报的想法。 题目 1.人称:以第一人称为主。 2.时

4、态:以一般过去时为主。 3.要点:1)列出你为了增强自律意识做过的事情; 2)自己已经获得的益处。,参考范文 题目 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the poster by next Monday. Now, Id like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster. The main part is about safety rules for traffic. For example, be careful when crossing t

5、he street. Wait till the traf- fic lights turn green. To make my poster more attractive, I plan to add several pictures to it. Hope my ideas will be helpful. If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours, Li Hua,题目 Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be

6、 self-disciplined, I started from doing simple things. I tried to form the habits of getting up early and reading books for 30 minutes every day. Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. After about three weeks, I got into the habits. By doing so, I have improved myself. I am now m

7、ore energetic and have a wider understanding of the world through reading.,精彩语句 题目 1.精美词汇: hand in上交;share v.分享;attractive adj.好看的,美观的 2.出彩结构 Now, Id like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.(how引导宾语从句) 题目 1.精美词汇: try to do sth.尽力做某事;push oneself hard逼迫自己;energetic adj.精力充沛的 2.出彩结构 Th

8、ough it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. (though引导让步状语从句),Writing 2(2018北京) 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目 假如你是李华,你们学校将要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写 一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座的时间和地点,以及需要做什么准备。 提示词语 lecture(讲座),invite,information,question,o

9、nline 提示问题 When and where will you have the lecture? What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?,Dear Peter, How is it going? Therell be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua,题目 “静以修身,俭以养德”,勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节约,杜绝

10、浪费。 某英文网站正在开展以“节约是美德”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈 谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义。 提示词语 thrifty(节约的),save,turn off,food,money,virtue(美德) 提示问题 What do you do in your daily life? Why do you do so? Its one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty.,答案 写作提示 题目 1.本文是一篇应用文体裁的文章,要求以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告诉交换生关于京剧讲座的相关内容, 主体时态是一

11、般将来时和一般现在时。 2.内容要点 介绍讲座开始的时间和地点; 建议Peter需要做的准备。 题目 1.本篇写作的话题是关于勤俭节约的。要求考生写一篇英文短文投稿,谈谈在生活中自己是怎么做的。主 体时态是一般现在时态。 2.内容要点 介绍如何在日常生活中做到勤俭节约;,介绍为什么要这样做。 参考范文 题目 Dear Peter, How is it going? Therell be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. Id like to invite you to attend it. Heres the information for it

12、. The place will be the lecture hall. The time is from 9:00 to 11:00 this Friday morn- ing. The speaker is Mr. Li, an expert on Peking Opera. You may ask questions at the end of the lecture. If you like, you can read online articles on the topic and get ready for your questions. If there is anything

13、 that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua,题目 Its one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. As a middle school student, I have been very thrifty in my daily life. I turn off the lights when leaving a room, and take shorter showers. Besides, I dont waste food, and I sel- dom spend money on

14、 things that I dont need. I think all such small things are beneficial to the environment and help me to become a person with good virtues.,Writing 3(2017北京) 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目 假如你是李华,正在美国参加一个交换生项目。今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim一家外出,请用英语给接待家庭 的妈妈Mrs. Smi

15、th写一个留言条,告诉她你们要去哪里,去做什么,以及你回家的时间和方式。 提示词语 park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie 提示问题 Where are you going? What are you going to do? When and how will you get home?,Dear Mrs. Smith, My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. Li Hua 题目 宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,

16、生活就会多一缕阳光。 某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈 谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之 后的感受。,提示词语 hurt, realize, forgive(原谅), happy 提示问题 What happened between you and him/her? Why did you decide to forgive him/her? How did you feel after forgiving him/her? I still remember what h

17、appened between,答案 写作提示 题目 本篇写作的体裁属于应用文。题目中已经明确给出了三个问题: 1.你们准备去哪儿? 2.你们将要做什么? 3.何时以何种方式回家? 题目 本篇写作的体裁属于记叙文,需要考生写出谅解他人的经历,具体内容围绕以下三个问题: 1.你和他/她之间发生了什么? 2.你为什么决定原谅他/她? 3.原谅他/她后你感觉如何?,参考范文 题目 Dear Mrs. Smith, My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. We are going to the movie thea

18、ter to watch a movie. After that, we will eat out in a nearby restaurant, so please dont wait for me for dinner. The restaurant is not far from home, and I will come back on foot. I will get home by 8:00 pm. Li Hua 题目 I still remember what happened between my friend Song Yang and me. One day, I had

19、an argument with him. We were both angry with each other. What he said hurt me. Later on, I realized he didnt mean it. So I talked to him and decided to forgive him. He said he also regretted hurting me. We became good friends again and I felt very happy.,精彩语句 题目 1.精美词汇:eat out在外面吃;far from.离远 2.出彩结

20、构:After that, we will eat out in a nearby restaurant, so please dont wait for me for dinner.(so连接两 个并列分句) 题目 1.精美词汇:regret doing sth.后悔做某事;later on 之后;be angry with sb.生某人的气;forgive sb.原谅某人 2.出彩结构:What he said hurt me. (What引导主语从句) Later on, I realized he didnt mean it.(realized后为省略了that的宾语从句),Writi

21、ng 4(2016北京) 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目 假如你是李华,你们学校将要举办长跑接力赛,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封 电子邮件,告诉他比赛的时间和地点,报名方式,以及需要做什么准备。 提示词语 sign up(报名), on the school website, sports shoes 提示问题 When and where will you have the race? How can Peter sign up for

22、the race? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the race?,Dear Peter, How is it going? Im writing to invite you to take part in the long-distance relay race. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,题目 假如你是李华,为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关,你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献 爱心捐赠活动。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿,谈谈你在这次活动中捐

23、赠了什么,为什么捐赠 这些物品,以及你的感受。 提示词语 donate(捐赠), book, schoolbag, clothes, toy, help, proud 提示问题 What did you donate? Why did you donate the things? How do you feel? At my school, we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week.,答案 题目 写作提示 该题要求写邀请信。邀请你们班的交换生Peter参加学校的接力赛。题目中给出了三个英文问题。应在读 懂问题后,组

24、织好语言进行写作。注意不要遗漏要点。三个问题分别如下: 1.什么时间在什么地方举行比赛? 2.Peter如何报名参加比赛? 3.你建议他为比赛准备些什么? 参考范文 Dear Peter, How is it going? Im writing to invite you to take part in the long-distance relay race. The race will be held in the playground of our school next Monday afternoon. If you want to join us, you have to sign

25、 up. You can fill up the form on our,school website before this Friday. Perhaps you need to wear a pair of sports shoes and bring some drinking water with you. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,深度解析 本题需要书写一封邀请信,要注意邀请信应使用的语言。另外,还要注意使用一般将来时和运 用情态动词can,have to等。,题目 写作提示 该题的话题是献爱心。以帮

26、助灾区小朋友渡过难关为素材,写一篇稿件,要围绕所给三个问题进行写作。 三个问题分别是: 1.你捐赠了什么? 2.为什么要捐赠这些东西? 3.你的感受如何? 参考范文 At my school, we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week. Almost all my schoolmates and teachers took part in the donation. I donated some used textbooks, a schoolbag, some clothes and many toys. I d

27、id this because I wanted to help the children out of their difficulties, and show my love to them. Im very proud of what I have done.,深度解析 写作时应注意运用准确的时态。在介绍自己的行为时,注意要用一般过去时。在表达感受时应 用一般现在时。写作时不要遗漏写作要点。,Writing 5(2015北京) 根据中文和英文提示,用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给 出,不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

28、假如你叫李华,你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会,倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示,给你的英 国笔友Peter写一封邮件,告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的,你通常是怎么做的,以及你的感受。 提示词语 think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happy,Dear Peter, How is it going?At my school were talking about what we should do to be a good student. Anything new at your school? Yours,

29、Li Hua,答案 写作提示 1.本文的话题是校园生活,学生比较熟悉。写作内容充分体现了社会主义核心价值观文明、和谐。主 体时态是一般现在时。 2.内容要点:提出自己的观点,做文明中学生什么样的品德行为最为重要;(一般现在时) 说出自己平时的礼貌行为;(一般现在时) 表达自己对做文明中学生,具有良好品德的感受。(一般现在时) 3.词句亮点 I think it is important to be polite to others.本句不仅用宾语从句丰富了句式而且含有It is+adj.+to do sth.句 型。 I feel happy for doing all these becau

30、se it is right for a student to do so.本句含有because引导的原因状语从 句,丰富了句式。,参考范文 Dear Peter, How is it going?At my school were talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite to others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to.Following

31、rules is al- so important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time.I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so. Anything new at your school? Yours, Li Hua,题组一,B组 20152019年全国中考题组,Writing 1(2019福建) 假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回 复。词数80左右。

32、,参考词汇:congratulation祝贺 注意事项: 1.回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Harry, Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作提示 1.要求根据收到的电子邮件回复邮件。 2.注意人称的使用。 3.主要内容: (1)祝贺Harry获奖。 (2)回答对方提出的问题:对机器人有什么看法;是否想拥有自己的机器人;为什么。 4.时态:以一般现在时为主。,参考范文 Dear Harry, Congratulations! How glad I am to share

33、 your good news! I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future theyll play more important roles in our daily life. In fact, Im dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It

34、 can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on. Hoping youll make greater progress. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇: in many ways 在许多方面 take care of照顾 such as 例如 make greater progress取得更大进步 2.出彩结构: How glad I am to share your good news!(感叹句:How+adj.+主谓+谓语!) I can have it ta

35、ke care of my grandparents when we are not at home.(have sth. do结构;when引导时间状语从 句),Writing 2(2019河北) 文明礼貌从我做起,从现在做起,从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求,以“When to Say Thank You”为题,写一篇短文。 提示:(1)When should we say “thank you” at home? (2)When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school? (3). 要求:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点

36、,可适当发挥。 (2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 参考词汇:wash, encourage, open,When to Say Thank You Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.,答案 写作提示 1.文体:议论文。 2.注意人称和时态的使用。 3.时态:一般现在时。 参考范文 When to Say Thank You Its polite to say“thank you”when others help u

37、s or say something kind to us. For example, when Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say“thank you”to them. At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, its nice to say “thank you”. If a teacher says“well done”to encourage us, were suppos

38、ed to say “thank you”. Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say“thank you”. Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”!,精彩语句 1.精美词汇: say “thank you” to sb. 感谢某人 be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 2.出彩结构: If a teacher says “well done”to encourage us, were supposed to say “thank

39、 you”.(本句含有if 引导的条件 状语从句),Writing 3(2019安徽) 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你 在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下: 1.经常做户外活动; 2.很少用电子产品; 3.坚持做眼保健操; 4. 注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear Mike, Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Yours, Li Hua,答

40、案 写作提示 1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成 伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。 2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。,参考范文 Dear Mike, Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eye- sight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play w

41、ith my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have

42、my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope youll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇:do physical exercise进行体育锻炼 avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机 2.出彩结构:Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure.为动词不定式短语

43、,作目的状语),Writing 4(2019天津) 假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁 回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。 (1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。 (2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。 (3)你认为 参考词汇:开始呕吐 begin to vomit 挤向座位 push towards the seat 争吵 have a quarrel 要求: (1)词数:80100个。 (2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。,We

44、dnesday When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed,答案 写作提示 1.时态以一般过去时为主。 2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。 3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。 参考范文 Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him jus

45、t looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much. When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldnt get off, and some people had a quarrel about it. After seeing this,

46、 I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will our world become better and better.,Writing 5(2019江苏南京) 假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners wi

47、th their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed! Heres what to do: Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative! Please let us know: Whats the name of the app? What problem does the app solve? What does the app do?

48、Contact us at appdesignB,注意: 1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作提示 1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。 2.人称:第一人称等。 3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。 4.确定要点: 1)这个app的名称; 2)这个app解决什么问题; 3)这个app应有的具体功能。,参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. Id like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”? Many of us have diffic