[外语学习]基础写作课件.ppt

1、English Writing about Characters 高考英语基础写作中的人物的介绍，可以用第一人高考英语基础写作中的人物的介绍，可以用第一人称称(如写求职信如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：问题：1人物写作通常需要介绍人物的人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长

2、、事迹、性格等多个等多个方面，需要严格按照写作要求来写；方面，需要严格按照写作要求来写；要点可以重组要点可以重组。2介绍自己的老师、朋友等要介绍自己的老师、朋友等要突出他们的特点突出他们的特点。3正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。4注意注意运用正确的时态运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。经历、事迹常用一般过去时。基础写作：介绍我国短道速滑女运动员周洋基础写作：介绍我国短道速滑女运动员周洋姓名姓名周洋周洋出生年月出生年

3、月1991年年6月月出生地出生地 吉林省长春市吉林省长春市从小喜欢滑冰，希望获得奥运金牌以使父母从小喜欢滑冰，希望获得奥运金牌以使父母过上好日子过上好日子2010年温哥华（年温哥华（Vancouver)冬奥会获得冬奥会获得1500米短道速滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬米短道速滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬奥会冠军奥会冠军2010年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子3000米团米团体接力冠军，实现自己的梦想体接力冠军，实现自己的梦想当选长春市当选长春市“十大杰出女性十大杰出女性”，并因表现突，并因表现突出而受到市政府表彰和奖励出而受到市政府表彰和奖励最近在为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备最近在

4、为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备个人情况写作步骤：写作步骤：1 1 内容内容2 2 可能出现的可能出现的人称、时态人称、时态3 3 信息点的整信息点的整合和排列合和排列4 4 难点难点第第1 1步步 审题审题介绍介绍短道速滑女运动员周洋短道速滑女运动员周洋第三人称第三人称;一般过去时、现在完一般过去时、现在完成时、现在进行时成时、现在进行时4 4项项获得奥运金牌；成为冠军；获得奥运金牌；成为冠军；3000米团体接力；当选米团体接力；当选“十十大杰出女性大杰出女性”；表彰和奖励；表彰和奖励；难点难点:1.获得奥运金牌获得奥运金牌2.成为冠军成为冠军3.3000米团体接力米团体接力4.当选当选“十大杰出

5、女性十大杰出女性”5.表彰和奖励表彰和奖励win an Olympic gold medalbecome the champion;take the first place;get the first prize;take the gold3000-metre relaybe elected as one of Ten Outstanding Womenbe praised and rewarded第第2步步 整合信息整合信息,译成英语。译成英语。1)人物背景介绍人物背景介绍周洋：周洋：1991年年6月出生于吉林省长春市月出生于吉林省长春市,从小喜欢滑从小喜欢滑冰，希望获得奥运金牌以使父母过上

6、好日子。冰，希望获得奥运金牌以使父母过上好日子。Zhou Yang,(who was)born in Changchun,Jilin Province in June,1991,has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic gold medal to let her parents live/lead a better life.2)个人情况个人情况22010年温哥华（年温哥华（Vancouver)冬奥会获得冬奥会获得1500米短道速米短道速滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬奥

7、会冠军。滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬奥会冠军。a.During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating,which made her the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.b.During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-mete

8、r short track speed skating,becoming the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.3)个人情况个人情况32010年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子3000米团体接力冠米团体接力冠军，实现自己的梦想。军，实现自己的梦想。a.She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,which turned her dream into reali

9、ty.b.She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,making her dream come true.c.She realized her dream by winning the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010 with her teammates.4)个人情况个人情况4当选长春市当选长春市“十大杰出女性十大杰出女性”，并因表

10、现突出而受到，并因表现突出而受到市政府表彰和奖励。市政府表彰和奖励。She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government for her outstanding performances.She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and because of her outstanding performances,she wa

11、s praised and rewarded by the Changchun government.5)个人情况个人情况5最近在为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备最近在为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备a.Recently she is actively preparing for the next Winter Olympic Games.b.Recently she is making preparations for the next Winter Olympic Games actively.第第3 3步步 连句成篇连句成篇 Zhou Yang,(who was)born in Changchun,

12、Jilin Province in June,1991,has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic gold medal to let her parents live/lead a better life.During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating,which made her

13、 the youngest champion of Winter Games in China._,she and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010,which turned her dream into reality.Besides_,she was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and,because of her outstanding performances,

14、she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government.Recently she is actively preparing for the next Winter Olympic Games.As a result写作点拨：写作点拨：B.在写好简单句在写好简单句(五种基本句型五种基本句型)的基础上做到句式灵活的基础上做到句式灵活1)并列句并列句2)复合句复合句(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句)3)强调句型强调句型4)非谓语动词非谓语动词5)倒装句倒装句6)其他句型及结构其他句型及结构A.背景介绍往往作为文

15、章第一句：背景介绍往往作为文章第一句：sb be born on/in+日期日期+in+地点地点1.写作前：写作前：2.写作中：写作中：确定时态、整合句子、解决难点确定时态、整合句子、解决难点C.使用适当连词将句子串成连贯的文章。使用适当连词将句子串成连贯的文章。姓名姓名巴拉克巴拉克奥巴马奥巴马（Barack Obama）出生时间出生时间1961年年8 月月4 日日出生地点出生地点夏威夷檀香山夏威夷檀香山(Honolulu,Hawaii)家庭家庭父亲是肯尼亚父亲是肯尼亚(Kenya)黑人，母亲是美国黑人，母亲是美国白人白人小时梦想小时梦想当总统当总统教育教育哈佛法学院哈佛法学院(Harvard

16、 Law School),博士博士职业职业毕业后一直从政。毕业后一直从政。2008年年11用用4日，在大日，在大选（选（the general election）中击败麦凯恩）中击败麦凯恩（John McCain），成为美国第），成为美国第44任总统任总统,首位非裔总统。首位非裔总统。意义意义激励全世界人民，努力工作实现梦想激励全世界人民，努力工作实现梦想写作步骤：写作步骤：1 1 内容内容2 2 可能出现的可能出现的人称、时态人称、时态3 3 信息点的整信息点的整合和排列合和排列4 4 难点难点第第1 1步步 审题审题介绍介绍美国总统奥巴马美国总统奥巴马第三人称第三人称;一般过去时、现在完一

17、般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时成时、一般现在时8 8项项肯尼亚黑人；博士学位；一肯尼亚黑人；博士学位；一直从政；非裔总统直从政；非裔总统1.肯尼亚黑人肯尼亚黑人2.博士学位博士学位3.一直从政一直从政4.非裔总统非裔总统a black man from Kenyawith a doctors degree,get a doctors degreehas been engaged inAfrican-American President基础写作 Barack Obama,the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American moth

18、er,was born in Honolulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961.When he was only a small boy,he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.Since he graduated from Harvard Law School with a doctors degree,he has been struggling for success in politics.On November 4th,2008,he defeated John McCain in the

19、general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States,making him the first African-American President of the country.The success of Obama greatly inspired people form all over the world,especially black people to work hard to achieve their goals.姓名Ashrita Furman身份运动员国籍美国爱好喜欢挑战吉尼斯（

20、Guinness)纪录经历小时候身体不健康，对运动不感兴趣；十多岁时，成了印度静坐功(meditation)导师Sri Chinmoy的学生并在他的鼓励下积极参加各项体育比赛尝试打破吉尼斯纪录成就过去25年中，大约打破93项吉尼斯世界纪录，到现在还保持其中20多项纪录。信念身体是精神的工具，人能用自己的精神力量去完成任何事情。Ashrita Furman was born in America and is a sportsman who likes to challenge the Guinness records.As a child,he was unfit and didnt have

21、 any interest in sports at all.In his teen,he became a student of Sri Chinmoy,an Indian meditation teacher,and encouraged by his teacher,Ashrita was active in different sports games,trying breaking the Guinness records.Over the last 25 years,he has broken about 93 Guinness records,over 20 of which he still holds.Ashrita believes that ones body is just an instrument of the spirit and one can use his spirit to accomplish anything.