高考英语作文：真实高分学生作文整理好词好句好段（八）（word版课堂讲解超好用）.doc

1、高考英语作文之真实高分学生作文整理好词好句好段（八） 作文题目：假定你是李华，你刚参加完本市组织的一场国际马拉松比赛，赛后应邀给组委会写一封邮件反馈自己比赛的感受并提出一些个人建议。内容包括：1. 此次比赛办得好的方面；2. 此次比赛待改进的方面以及你的相应建议。好句：Racing track + City transportation1. With many historical sites and modern buildings included, the racing track is a reasonable one, along which not only can I enjoy

2、 the fascinating and breath-taking city scenery, but also get more knowledge about the development and prosperity of our city.2. So thoughtful and caring was the committee that they arranged a reasonable racing track, along which red flags and signs were set every 500 meters, enabling competitors to

3、 know how long they had run and got encouraged.3. It was the reasonable racing track with charming city scenery that made the marathon particularly impressive.4. Had it not been for the reasonable racing track, I wouldnt have had the chance to explore my city and see so much wonderful scenery, which

4、 was ignored and unnoticed in my busy daily life.5. However, some participants were not satisfied with the racing tracking, explaining that the inconvenience it caused was out of proportion to the benefits it brought because they had to make turns frequently. 6. The reasonable racing track allows pa

5、rticipants to enjoy the beautiful scenery while skipping busy main roads so as to avoid messing up the city transportation.Audience1. Difficult as running a marathon is, I finally managed to achieve the goal I set with the encouragement of the enthusiastic audience.2. Nothing was comparable to the c

6、heers of the enthusiastic audience, which filled me with confidence and encouraged me to run fearlessly.3. The audience being too enthusiastic, with some breaking the rules and crossing the line, the situation became a bit in disorder.Supply1. Given that the marathon is a long distance running, adeq

7、uate supply such as salty water is a must, with which participants can get sufficient energy to move on.2. This marathon will be better with adequate supply on account of a large number of participants and long competing hours, for which I suggest that you set up some fixed areas offering food and d

8、rinks.Other aspects1. However, some disadvantages need to be addressed. 2. Nevertheless, there remain unsettled problems that shouldnt be neglected -3. In addition, this marathon being an international race with lots of foreign participants, bilingual volunteers should be there to offer help.4. Had

9、it not been for it, I wouldnt have met with people sharing the same interest from different walks of life. As a result, I believe everyone has benefited from their enlarged interpersonal circle.好段：1. Filled with excitement and joy, Id like to convey my sincere congratulations on the accomplishment o

10、f the marathon, which is one of the most marvelous ones Ive attended, owing to the reasonably-designed racing track and the enthusiastic audience. Running on the track along with the spectacular city scenery provided us with a feast for eyes while cheers of the crowd motivated us to move on with hig

11、h spirits.优秀学生作文1：Running in free spirits, Im deeply impressed by the sponsored marathon this year. With reasonable racing tracks and adequate supply, the marathon was amazingly well-organized, enabling the city transportation to work smoothly. The thrilling race undoubtedly provided us with spectac

12、ular city scenery, adding to a lively and energetic atmosphere.However, to promote activity, I also want to offer my personal opinions and humble suggestions. Initially, more health care stations should be set up along the tracks just in case any emergency would arise. In addition, we should promote

13、 the advertisement, appealing to people from all walks of life to participate in the marathon, which is of far-reaching significance to physical and psychological health, and equally to the tourism industry in the city. 优秀学生作文2Overwhelmed by the joy of attending the international marathon organized

14、by our city, I am really grateful for all your efforts. Initially, I should give the marathon credit for the broad city scenery alongside, without which we wouldnt have relieved our physical tiredness and refreshed ourselves during the race. Additionally, the coordination between the city transporta

15、tion and reasonable racing track made it comprehensively fit for marathon. What is the well worth mentioning is that the enthusiastic cheering audience undeniably made me appreciative, which inherited marathon spirits and appealed to more people. On balance, its a second to none successful activity.

16、Moreover, Id like to share a few points that are supposed to be improved. This marathon would be better with a more adequate supply on account of its large number of participants and long competing hours, for which I suggest that you set up more fixed areas supplying food and drinks. The competition

17、 is highly appreciated by all people, and sets a role model for the next years competition. 优秀学生作文3First and foremost, the reasonable racing track has received wide praise among the competitors, which allows people to experience the exciting sports and enjoy the breath-taking city scenery to the ful

18、lest at the same time. What is also worth mentioning is the adequate supply of food and water. It is equally impossible to imagine a marathon without food and water supply. Thanks to your considerate support, all competitors have attained adequate energy to finish the marathon. Furthermore, nothing

19、is comparable to the cheers from the enthusiastic audience, which made me brim with confidence and ran ahead fearlessly. All above makes the marathon almost brilliant. While the only flaw is the busy city transportation, for which citizens has suffered a lot during rush hours. I consider it desirable to arrange specific routes for drivers during the marathon.By and large, so impressive is the marathon that I would cherish it from the bottom of my heart. 3