summary-writing-概要写作-优质课件.ppt

1、Summary Writing高考新题型之高考新题型之Summary Writing高考新题型之高考新题型之SummaryI helped an old man in rags who had lost his way.I helped an old mandetailsmain pointSummary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details牛津高阶英汉双解词典牛津高阶英汉双解词典读者在正确理解文章的基础上读者在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想、在不改

2、变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，体裁和结构的前提下，省去细节省去细节，用简明、精练的语句高，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点主要内容和观点。How to write a good summary?Steps&Tips Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscle

3、s-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of

4、time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these ex

5、tra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda.People who skip breakfast often feel so h

6、ungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish

7、you have a good figure.1.2.3.4.5.6.(350words)Read for topic,structure(明确主题及结构)2.Find out the key information of each paragraph(划出每段主题句,或关键词)3.Rewrite by using your own words(改写)4.Polish the passage(改良)Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic：Weight lossStructure:Para1.Para2.Para.6Topic weight lossWay

8、s of losing weightConclusionPara4.Para3.Para2.1、我们的市场行为主要的导向因素，第一个是市场需求的导向，第二个是技术进步的导向，第三大导向是竞争对手的行为导向。2、市场销售中最重要的字就是“问”。3、现今，每个人都在谈论着创意，坦白讲，我害怕我们会假创意之名犯下一切过失。4、在购买时，你可以用任何语言；但在销售时，你必须使用购买者的语言。5、市场营销观念：目标市场，顾客需求，协调市场营销，通过满足消费者需求来创造利润。2022年7月30日星期六2022-7-302022-7-302022-7-306、我就像一个厨师，喜欢品尝食物。如果不好吃，我就不

9、要它。2022年7月2022-7-302022-7-302022-7-307/30/20227、我总是站在顾客的角度看待即将推出的产品或服务，因为我就是顾客。2022-7-302022-7-30July 30,20228、利人为利已的根基，市场营销上老是为自己着想，而不顾及到他人，他人也不会顾及你。2022-7-302022-7-302022-7-302022-7-30概要写作难点概要写作难点 1 How to get the main points quickly and correctly?(如何快速、准确地捕捉各段要点如何快速、准确地捕捉各段要点)抓住主题句或关键词，忽略细节和例子Ste

10、p2 Read for main idea of each paragraghTopic sentence or key wordsStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 1.Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several waysto make that happen.Tip1:The key sentence is usually the first sentenceStep2 Read for main i

11、dea of each paragragh 2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Tip2:Ignore the examp

12、les or detailsExamples&detailsStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 3.One reason people get less exercise these days Is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at thecomputer,or playing video games.Limit recreationalscreen time to less than 2 hours pe

13、r day.When youreally get away from“screens”,such as TV,IPad,computers,or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Tip3:Pick out the key words in different sentenceStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 4.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,andthese extra calories contribute to obesi

14、ty.Anotherkey factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary beverages,such as sodas,juice drinks,andsports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or sharerestaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Tip4:pay attention to the logical connectives(逻辑连词)So,therefore,as a resu

15、lt,thusStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 5.People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.They get more caloriesthan they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMsthan people who eat breakfast.Step2 Read for main

16、idea of each paragragh6.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Regular physical activity b

17、urns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase

18、 in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Portion sizes are bigger th

19、an they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda.People who

20、 skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce

21、your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.1.2.3.4.5.6.Step3 rewrite by using your own words概要写作难点概要写作难点 2 How to express the main points by using your own words properly?(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)Step3 rewrite by using your own words1.Weight loss is most likely to be successfulwhen p

22、eople change their habits.Losing weight Tip1:Use words or phrases of similar meaning（同义替换）ifget into new habitsPeople will succeed in losing weight if they get into new habitsChanging some habits may be a good way to lose weightTip2:Use different sentence structure(改变句子结构，尤其是改变主语)Step3 rewrite by us

23、ing your own words2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Tip3:Turn complex sentences into simple ones （压缩长句）Leave out unnecessary partsTaking more physical exercise will help you keep healthy.Keep healthyStep3 rewri

24、te by using your own words“screen time”benefit a lot.limitTip4:Combine the key words logically into a sentence （连词组句）3.We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Limiting“screen time”will benefit us a lot.Step3 rewrite by using your own words Choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go f

25、or water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.Step3 Rewrite by using your own words5.skip breakfastPeople should avoid skipping breakfast.get more calorieStep3 rewrite by using your own words6.If you really put the above in

26、to practicePeople will have a good figure if they take the above suggestionshave a good figuretake/follow the above suggestions Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Stick

27、ing to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.People should avoid skipping breakfast.People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions.(58W)First,Meanwhile,Besides FinallyStep4 Polish by using connectivesTip:Polish with connectives to make it coherent.R

28、ead for topic,structure(明确主题及结构)2.Find out the key information of each paragraph (划出每段主题句,找关键信息)3.Rewrite by using your own words(改写)4.Polish the passage(改良)Tips The topic sentence is usually the first sentenceIgnore the examples or detailsPick out the key words in different sentencesUse words or ph

29、rases of similar meaning（同义替换）Use different sentence structure(改变句子结构，尤其是改变主语)Turn complex sentences into simple ones （压缩长句）ExerciseRead and write with the steps and tips You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁).Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necssary

30、to do adequate(充足)research about the illness.You may access anumber of resources to gain a deep understanding of this emotional condition.You can also find books or magazines in the library.If you still have some questions,you can see a doctor.In the end,you should havea good idea of what is affecti

31、ng your friend.People with depression are often very afraid of talking to someone except their doctors.They can easily be ashamed of their condition and consequently they try to hide it.You shouldnt be surprised if a depressed friend wont open up to you.However,when he or she does,you should let the

32、 words flow.Dont be judgemental and never interrupt!Listening is not an easy skill,as its likely that you cant help voicing your opinion.If your friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling of worthlessness,a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying,you should cont

33、act a doctor,scheduel an appointment andaccompany him or her on the first visit.If he or she refuses,let several days go by before making another suggestion.You should be able to identify moments when he or she seems to have better moods.These moments could be the right time to ask him or her to see

34、 the doctor.Over time,your friend begins to cooperate and see the doctor.At last,as a caregiver,you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group so you can meet other caregivers.You shouldnt sacrifice your own physical and mental condition when helping people with depression

35、.There are cases when caregivers become depressed.If it happens,there is no shame in seeing a doctor yourself.(320words)Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic：Helping a friend with depressionStructure:Para1.Para2.Para3.Para4.忽略具体事例和细节忽略具体事例和细节Step2 Read for main idea of each paragraghPara.1:Para.2:

36、Para.3:Para.4:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁).Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necessary to do adequate(充足)research about the illness.be afraid of talking(划主题句划主题句,找关键信息找关键信息)However,when he or she does(talk)Listening is a helpful skill If your

37、friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling of worthlessness,a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying,you should contact a doctor,scheduel an appointment and accompany him or her on the first visit.As a caregiver,you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you

38、may join a support group to keep healthy.Learn muchStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.1:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁).it is necessary to do adequate research about the illness.Important,helpfulYou need to learn more about depression if you want to assist

39、a friend with depression.Doing enough research about depression is helpful for you to help your depressed friend feels depressesStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.2:be afraid of talkingHowever,when he or she does(talk to you)ListeningPeople with depression tend to keep silent.Once they speak

40、to you,be a good listener.avoid talking/keep silentStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.3:If your friend shows likely signs of depression,you should encourage him or her to seek professional help.If your friend shows likely signs of depression,such as the feeling of worthlessness,a lack of inte

41、rest in daily activities and uncontrolledcrying,you should contact a doctor,scheduel an appointment and accompany him or her on the first visit.see the doctorIf your friend seems to have depression,you should told him to see the doctor Step3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.4:As a caregiver,you a

42、lso need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group to keep healthy.When you help a friend with depression,dont forget you own health.You need to learn more about depression if you want to assist a friend with depression.People with depression tend to keep silent.Once they speak to

43、you,be a good listener.If your friend shows likely signs of depression,you should encourage him or her to seek pprofessional help.When you help a friend with depression,dont forget you own health.One possible version:Checking points Cover the main points using your own words No details No copy No personal opinions About 60 words Use connectives if possibleThank you!