高中英语读后续写微技能指导PPT.pptx

1、表达的精准性和丰富性表达的精准性和丰富性人物内心世界（人物内心世界（2 2）Using adjectives to describe the picture.读后续写第五档评分原则读后续写第五档评分原则 档档 次次 描描 述述 第五档（2125）与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开 头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的 关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能 有些许错误，但完全不会影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续 写短文结构紧凑。rich&accurateB3 sadness,weep,curiosity,glare,sign,stare,rude,sc

2、ream,cheer up,terrify,terrified,pleasedB6 melt,bad-tempered,tough,breathless,desperate,disappointed,ashamed,embarrassed,awkward,unconscious,tremble,anxious,anxiety,panic,He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.Our mouths dropped open in surprise.She folded her arms and stared at him.She jumped to her

3、feet at the news.She picked her way carefully along the stream.He paced back and forth.She screamed that there was a snake.tiredsurprisedangryexcitedcautiousupset/uneasyfrightenedUsing actions to describe the feelingsscratch her head skrt hang/drop/lower ones head翻译练习1:Tony感到很绝望。概括描述Tony felt hopele

4、ss/desperate.1)As the result of an accident,Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.(被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)2)Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness.(感觉被遗忘、忽视)3)Tonys beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.(被信念抛弃

5、)(主语问题)翻译练习2:Sheldon感到非常生气。概括描述Sheldon felt very angry.1)Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room,slamming(砰地关上)the door furiously behind him.(冲出房间；狠狠摔门)2)Filled with angre/fury(狂怒),Sheldon was unable to utter a single word.(充满愤怒；说不出话)3)Boiling with rage(愤怒),Sheldon shook his fist at me

6、.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)翻译练习3:当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。概括描述When his mother kissed him on the cheek,the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.1)When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world.(非常开心)3)When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,he danced with joy and sweetness.(

7、欢欣雀跃)2)When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,his face beamed(堆满笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)Micro-writingPara.1:But no more helicopters came and it was dark.How did Jane feel then?How did Jane struggle through the night?Did she fall asleep?_Assignment 1.Polish your story.