高考英语新题型-续写技巧课件（共22张PPT）.ppt

1、teacherfriendsupermanheroWho:What:a couple of lovers,God,the doctor _ couple of lovers led an _(envy)life in a town._(fortunate),the man had an accident and was severely _(injure).The woman _(attend)himday and night._ her lover was still sleeping,_(hope),she made a deal _God:to be a butterfly for th

2、ree years in exchange for the mans _(recover),_ was a hard choice but easy to make to a willing heart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattended toButhopelesslywithrecoverywhichDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮高潮)A.The man was badly injured and showed no signs of recovery.B.The woman dealt with God to

3、save her lover but another girl appeared between them.C.The man and the woman had an enviable love.*structures（结构）（结构）*sentence patterns（句式）（句式）*words&phrases（词和短语）（词和短语）1 *theme：negative/positive *interpretation（解意）（解意）n *key words（关键词）（关键词）*clues（线索）（线索）Step3 Step3 polish（润色）（润色）Step 2 Step 2 draf

4、t（拟稿）（拟稿）Step 1 Step 1compose(构思）构思）underlined wordsenjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousnessthe church God tearslove regret becamethe butterfly fly sweetheart-stricken underlined words（选（选5个以上）个以上）who(人物）：人物）：God the butterfly where（地点）：（地点）：the church event（事件）：（事件）：enjoying the sunrise the su

5、nset consciousness tears love regret becamefly sweet heart-stricken clues “I can help youfor three years”“Yes,I do!i wont regret doing that!”God also felt sad “Do you regret for what you have done?”e.b.The man and the doctor married,and the woman remained to be a butterfly.a.The man and the doctor m

6、arried,and the woman left.c.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion.d.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma.Finally,the man left.1.目睹；见证目睹；见证 (2(2分分)vt._2.他说过的最

7、甜蜜的话他说过的最甜蜜的话 (2(2分分)（提示词（提示词sweetsweet）_3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(4(4分分)（提示词（提示词tearstears）_see/witnessThe sweetest words he has ever saidThe butterfly couldnt help shedding her tears sadly./The butterfly could no longer hold back the tears./Tears filled her eyes and the butterfly could no longe

8、r calm down.2.第三年的最后一天第三年的最后一天 (2(2分分)_On the last day of the third year1.变深；使加深变深；使加深 (2(2分分)vt./vi._deepen3.他们的爱已成为回忆。他们的爱已成为回忆。(4(4分分)_Their love has become memories./Their love has turned into memories./Their love has become a past.2.揭露真相揭露真相 (2(2分分)_1.被打动的；受感动的被打动的；受感动的 (2(2分分)adj.be_ bytouched

9、uncover the truth/expose the truth/reveal the truth/moved/impressed3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。(4(4分分)（提示词（提示词regret,regret,用倒装句式）用倒装句式）_Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.1.唤醒唤醒 (2(2分分)vt._awaken/rouse2.遭受许多挫折遭受许多挫折 (2(2分分)_go through many obstacles/suffer many struggles

10、3.男人震惊了，男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚越发觉得后悔和内疚(4(4分分)（提示词（提示词regrets/guiltregrets/guilt）_The man was shocked,and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.Paragraphy1:The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans

11、 shoulder off and on._Paragraphy2:God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly,“Do you regret for what you have done?”_四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role 1：Theme controllerRole 2：Structure builderRole 3：Grammar checkerRole 4：Coherence(连贯）连贯）master（每人至少写两句）（每人至少写两句）Version CVersion C

12、The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion.Paragraphy1:The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on._ It was

13、heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day.Time went by quickly.On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over,the man proposed to his girlfriend.He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said.Hearing this,the butterfly

14、couldnt breathe.Her darken eyes were full of tears.she flew away silently in great grief and despair.At that moment,she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.Paragraphy2:God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly,“Do you regret for what you have done?”_ The

15、 butterfly said,“No.Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.”moved by her words,God was lost in thought:she had gone through so many struggles and she shouldnt deserve that.So,the day before the man and the doctors wedding,God uncovered the whole truth to him.Obviously,the man was shocke

16、d and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.The love deep inside was awakened.He rushed to the church to beg for the womans forgiveness.And he determined that this time he wont let her go.He will take her to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset for a lifetime.Paragraphy1:The butterfly knew that

17、 all these should have belonged To her,but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on._Witnessing their love deepen with each passing days was extremely hard for her.Time slipped by quickly.On the last day of the third year when the deal between

18、God and the butterfly was almost over,the man proposed to his girlfriend with a beautiful ring,swearing the sweetest words he has ever said.The butterfly could no longer hold back tears.She was trembling and could not feel her heart beating.With deep grief and great despair,she flew away.At that mom

19、ent,she completely realized that time has buried everything as well as her sacrifices,and their love has turned into dusty memories.Paragraphy2:God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly,“Do you regret for what you have done?”_ The butterfly cleaned her teary eyes and said,“No.I never feel sorry

20、for anything I do for him.”Struck by her reply,God was lost in thought:the woman who suffered so many struggles shouldnt deserve such a tragedy.And he had other plans.The day before their wedding,God revealed the whole truth to the man,which left him speechless,as he thought she was just scared and

21、left.Apparently,the man was shocked and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.The love deep inside was awakened,and he rushed to the church with a determined heart:this time,he wont let her go.He owed her a lifetime to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset.Effective phrases and various sentence

22、patterns make your passage vivid and attractive.Appropriate conjunctions and adjectives make the passage colorful and coherent(连贯的).A well-organized structure can highlight the theme based on the event.Choose one of the following theme to write two paragraphysfor the story based on the given underlined words.a.The man and the doctor married,and the woman left.b.The man and the doctor married,and the woman remained to be a butterfly.c.The man proposed to the doctor,but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma.Finally,the man left.