[学习计划]CET-4作文讲解1包括要求趋势评分样板顺序高分词汇句型课件.ppt

1、CET-4 作文讲解n评分标准评分标准n四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式n四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In today,many women have a work.They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories.There are many women in govener also.Th

2、ey lead other people comtral,and make out plans.There are many women scientist also.They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role,womens position in the family has been improved as well.In ancient,womens position in family is pity.They had to looks after their child

3、ren,did every how husband ordered her to do.But now it is changed.They are equal to her husband.They have the right of speaking of idea,discussion things with her husband,do what she wants to do.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.We also should realize

4、,womens likerty are limited.For example,many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.Im sure,the liberation of women would be increased.评分样卷(1)5 5分分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Women ar

5、e playing an increasing important part in society today.More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children.Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field.As we know,many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as

6、 Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role,womans position in the family has been improved as well.Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places.Husbands and wife are equal now.They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.In spite of these changes

7、,the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Also in some places,women are considered being“things”belong to men.They have little chance to find jobs.They dont get equal pay for equal job.This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.Women in the Mode

8、rn World评分样卷(2)11 11分分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误量其他语言方面的错误 Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before.For example,some women are not se

9、cretary in the office,instead,they become manager of a company.With the changes in their social role,womans position in the family has been improved as well.In the world today,more and more women have their own jobs.They get their own salary,and become more independent from their husband.With the ec

10、onomic situation improved,their family position is improving.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home,and do some works or do some shopping.They only want their wife to be a housewife,but not a manager of a co

11、mpany.Women in the Modern World评分样卷(3)8 8分分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In many countries,more and more women are acting as workers,farmers,scientists and even leaders.We can say that

12、 almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role,womens position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together,and

13、share happiness with each other.Also,you can hardly find out that in todays families,women are being busy with dinners,whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs,reading newspapers.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.We also should realize that wo

14、mens liberty is limited.For example,many factories want men as their employees and the chance of women is slimer than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.Im sure the liberation of women would be reached.Women in the Modern World评分样卷(4)14 14分分切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适切题，文章通顺，语言规

15、范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式 1表示原因表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obvious 4）The reason for this is not far to seek 5）The reason for this is that 6）We have good reason to believe that

16、 例如：例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life Firstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用

17、率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式2表示好处表示好处 1）It has the following advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us quite a lot 4）It is beneficial to us 5）It is of great benefit to us 例如：例如：Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizonsTherefore，r

18、eading extensively is of great benefit to us 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式 3表示坏处表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages 2）It does us much harm 3）It is harmful to us 例如：例如：However，everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us It can do harm to our health and make us laz

19、y if we spend too much time watching television.四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式4表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sbto do sth 2）We think it necessary to do sth 3）It plays an important role in our life 例如：Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in

20、 the government，in schools or in businessSoon，computers will be found in every home，too We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式5表示措施表示措施 1）We should take some effective

21、 measures 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with 例如：例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious Therefore，we must take some effectiv

22、e measures to solve it 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式6表示变化表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education 例如：例如：Some changes have taken place in peoples d

23、iet in the past five years The major reasons for these changes are not far to seekNowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式7表示事实、现状表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that 2）No one can

24、deny the fact that 3）There is no denying the fact that 4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in 5）However，thats not the case 例如：例如：We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution To solve these problems，we can start by educating the public a

25、bout the hazards of pollution The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式8表示比较表示比较 1）Compared with A，B 2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV 3）There is a striking contrast between them 例如：例如：Compared with cars，bicycl

26、es have several advantages besides being affordableFirstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleumSecondly，they do not cause the pollution problemLast but not least，they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise 四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式 9表示数量表示数量1）It has in

27、creased（decreased）fromto 2）The population in this city has now increased（decreased）to 800，000 3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January 例如：例如：With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that s

28、pent on education has increased From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式n10.表示看法表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards s

29、th 2）People have different opinions on this problem 3）People take different views of（on）the question 4）Some people believe thatOthers argue that 例如：例如：People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater ch

30、ance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式11表示结论表示结论1）In short，it can be said that 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can com

31、e to the conclusion that 例如：例如：From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.注：例句注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句；例句可用于任何一个段落的结论句；例句3则多用文章则多用文章结论段的第一句。结论段的第一句。四级作文使用率最高的四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式个基本句式12套语套语 1）Its well known to us that 2

32、）As is known to us，3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that 5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way 例如：例如：As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus The reason for

33、 this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an“ivory tower.再如：再如：Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配经济的快速发展经济的快速发展 the rapid developmen

34、t of economy 人民生活水平的显著提高人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长稳步增长 the remarkable improvement/steady growth of peoples living standard先进的科学技术先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology 面临新的机遇和挑战面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配人们普遍认为人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/recognized that社会发展的必

35、然结果社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development 引起了广泛的公众关注引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/draw public attention 不可否认不可否认 It is undeniable that/There is no denying that四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配热烈的讨论热烈的讨论/争论争论 a heated discussion/debate有争议性的问题有争议性的问题 a controversial issue 完全不同的观点完全不同的观点 a tota

36、lly different argument有充分的理由支持有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons发挥着日益重要的作用发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配正如谚语所说正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes对对产生有利产生有利/不利的影响不利的影响 exert positive/negative effects on利远远大于弊利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages导致，引起导致，引

37、起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to/result in 四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配复杂的社会现象复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon 责任感责任感/成就感成就感 sense of responsibility/sense of achievement竞争与合作精神竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 开阔眼界开阔眼界 widen ones horizon/broaden ones vision四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配学习知识和技能学习知识和技

38、能 acquire knowledge and skills经济经济/心理负担心理负担 financial burden/psychological burden考虑到诸多因素考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/consideration 从另一个角度从另一个角度 from another perspective 四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配做出共同努力做出共同努力 make joint efforts为社会做贡献为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 打下坚实的基础打下坚实的基础 lay a soli

39、d foundation for 综合素质综合素质 comprehensive quality致力于致力于/投身于投身于 be committed/devoted to四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配不可推卸的义务不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty满足需求满足需求 satisfy/meet the needs of.可靠的信息源可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information宝贵的自然资源宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 方便快捷方便快捷 convenient and efficient四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分

40、的词汇搭配在人类生活的方方面面在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life 社会进步的体现社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress对这一问题持有不同态度对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue支持前支持前/后种观点的人后种观点的人 people/those in favor of the former/latter opinion四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配在一定程度上在一定程度上 to some extent/degree/in some way理论

41、和实践相结合理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice 日益激烈的社会竞争日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition 眼前利益眼前利益 immediate interest/short-term interest 长远利益长远利益 interest in the long run四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配有其自身的优缺点有其自身的优缺点 has its merits and demerits/advantages and disadvantages对对有害有害 do harm to/be

42、 harmful to交流思想交流思想/情感情感/信息信息 exchange ideas/emotions/information跟上跟上的最新发展的最新发展 keep pace with/catch up with/keep abreast with the latest development of 四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配采取有效措施来采取有效措施来 take effective measures to do sth.的健康发展的健康发展 the healthy development of 对对观点因人而异观点因人而异 Views on vary from person t

43、o person.重视重视 attach great importance to 社会地位社会地位 social status 四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配把时间和精力放在把时间和精力放在上上 focus time and energy on 扩大知识面扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge 身心两方面身心两方面 both physically and mentally有直接有直接/间接关系间接关系 be directly/indirectly related to 提出折中提议提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposa

44、l四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配保障社会的稳定和繁荣保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society更多地强调更多地强调 put more emphasis on适应社会发展适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society 实现梦想实现梦想 make ones dream come true四级高分的词汇搭配四级高分的词汇搭配主要理由列举如下主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows 我们还有很长的路要走我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go