牛津译林版howtobetteryourwriting(共20张)课件.ppt

1、How to better your writing1.To learn to express ideas correctly.2.To learn to use different ways to express ideas.3.To improve our writing ability by editing(修修改改)our drafts(草稿草稿).rich content sentence patterns words and phrases What makes a good article?lead-inclear structure good handwriting What

2、do you like best about your school life?task 1My school is very beautiful.There are many trees near our classroom buildings and there is a big playground too.But I love the Reading Week best.与问题无关与问题无关 I like playing basketball and I have been a member of the school basketball club for one year.I am

3、 interested in having History lessons.重点不突出重点不突出 What do you like best about your school life?task 1My school life is very colourful.We have after-school activities and club activities.I like the club activities best.I am a member of the school basketball team.All of the members are friendly and goo

4、d at playing basketball.content What do you think of your school life?colourful/wonderful/fantastic.What activities do you have?We have after-school activities likeand so on.There are many after-school activities,such as.For example,we have.What do you like best about your school life?task 1My schoo

5、l life is very colourful.We have after-school activities and club activities.I like the club activities best.I am a member of the school basketball team.All of the members are friendly and good at playing basketball.content Which do you like best?Among/Of all the activities,I like.best.However,My fa

6、vourite is./.is my favourite.What can you do?Its a good chance to learn.Students can improve their.skills.What can we learn?tip:添加过渡词添加过渡词 How do you feel?task 1What do you like best about your school life?What do you think of your school life?What activities do you have?Which do you like best?What

7、can you do?What can we learn?How do you feel?task 1colourful/wonderful/fantastic.and so on/such as./for exampleamong/of all the.We can.It is a good chance to.feel happy/enjoy myselves.time seems to go faster.What do you like best about your school life?Modify your writing 修改作文修改作文Whats the biggest p

8、roblem as a junior student?task 2What do you like best about your school life?different ideas tip:添加转折词添加转折词 however,but,sadly,It is a pity that.There are too many homework.Its difficult to get a high score.My biggest problem is homework is too much.is too muchhigh scores/high marksMy biggest proble

9、m is that I have too much homework.Whats the biggest problem as a junior student?correct words and phrases The biggest problem is the exam/homework.too many examstoo much homework强调强调task 2My biggest problem is that I have too much homework every day.As a junior student,tip:添加过渡词添加过渡词 There is no do

10、ubt that For most students,task 2tip:reason 阐述理由阐述理由Why do you think homework is the biggest problem?conjunctions 连接词连接词There is too much homework.I have no time for my hobbies.There is too much homework.As a result,I have no time for my hobbies.Because of too much homework,I have no time for my hob

11、bies.The more homework I have,the less time I have for my hobbies.I cant get enough sleep.I feel tired the next day.task 2Whats the biggest problem as a junior student?tip:reason 阐述理由阐述理由Why cant you get high marks?tip:conjunctions 连接词连接词How do you feel about it?sad,unhappy,worried,stressed(有压力的有压力的

12、).I am not good at I am not interested inI find it is really task 2Whats the biggest problem as a junior student?task 2Whats the biggest problem as a junior student?too many exams/too much homeworkas a result/because/because of/the more.the less./the more.the less.Im not iterested in.Im not good at.

13、I find it is really.feel sad/unhappy/worried.Modify your writing task 3Whats the biggest problem as a junior student?Who has helped you most?And why?I am lucky that.Luckily,tip:添加过渡词添加过渡词 Who has helped you most?And why?tenseMy teacher has helped me most.is the person who has helped me most.The pers

14、on who has helped me most is task 3Who has helped you most?And why?task 3My Maths teacher has helped me a lot.I often ask him for help when I meet some Maths problems and he is always patient enough to work out the problems for me.WhoHow?How do your teachers/parents/friends help you?teachersfriendsp

15、arentsgive us advice on how to learn bettershare my sadnessaccompany(陪伴陪伴)me encourage me not to give upgive me a lot confidencehelp me with my homeworkchat with me task 3Who has helped you most?And why?When do they.?When.If.Whenever.tip:使用从句使用从句Modify your writing Do you enjoy your school life?Why

16、or why not?sentence patternsI enjoy my school life.I feel at school.It is full ofTo be creativeWhat/How!task 4Modify your writing a simple reasonI enjoy my school life very much.The students and teachers are kind and friendly here.They are always there to help me.anyway,in a word,above all?I enjoy my school life very much.The students and teachers are kind and friendly here.They are always there to help me.Share your writing task 5Homework：Continue to edit your draft and share your articles with classmates.