Unit 6Summary Writing ppt课件(2022)高中英语新外研版必修第一册 .pptx

1、Unit 6 At one with nature Summary WritingLesson 1Starting out&vocabulary威尼斯环境问题及解决方法，自然对人的影响Lesson 2Reading中国龙脊梯田开垦原因及运作原理Lesson 3Using language天然染料Lesson 4Speaking&listening地貌特征，不同气候区的人类生活Lesson 5Reading英国人对园艺的热爱Lesson 6Writing英国果茶草茶文化的概要写概要写作作Lesson 7Presenting&reflection自选理想居住地，展示展示课时设计与衔接深入理解深入理

2、解人与自然的相关性，辩辩证证看待问题，树树立立人与自然和谐共处的意识。大观念：通过了解和思考大观念：通过了解和思考不同不同自然环境对人类自然环境对人类生活的生活的影响，影响，从而理解人与自然的关系，从而理解人与自然的关系，培养共情能力，培养共情能力，提升人与自然和提升人与自然和谐共处的意识谐共处的意识不同不同地貌和气候对人类生活方式的影响地貌和气候对人类生活方式的影响人类对自然的合理运用和改造人类对自然的合理运用和改造引导引导学生联系实际，讲述讲述环境对自己生活的影响，为整个单元做铺垫铺垫Review01The Blessings of NatureThe Great Barrier Reef

3、大堡礁The Blessings of NatureThe North Pole 北极The Blessings of NatureThe Grand Canyon科罗拉多大峡谷The Wisdom of MankindTerrace fields梯田The Wisdom of MankindBritish GardeningThe Blessings of Nature 合一The Wisdom of Mankind天人Read&Analyze02any parts of a plant,like leaves and roots,can all be considered as herbs

4、Flowers(herbs 草药)teaThis is the other way the British have found to utilize natureScan and choose the best topic for the passage (textbook p71)A.TeaB.Fruit and Herbal TeaC.Fruit and Herbal Tea in Britain2 mins to finishPay attention to pictures and words of high frequency(高频词高频词)Lemongrass Tea香茅茶香茅茶

5、/柠檬草茶柠檬草茶Mint Tea薄荷茶薄荷茶Apple TeaMango TeaStrawberry TeaHerbalTeaFruitTeaRefer to the tips on p70Task 5 on p71:Underline the topic sentences and fill in the blanks2.5 minsMany people grow their very own tea gardens with easy-to-grow herbs.Mango,strawberry,apple,pear,blackberry leaf and dandelionRelax

6、,beneficial for the immune systems,good for digestionCheck your answers o(_)o (Task 5 on p71)British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.Herbal tea has various health benefits.(first sentence)Para 1Para 2Para

7、 3(first sentence)Topic sentences o(_)o (Task 5 on p71)表转折表转折(in the middle)British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.Herbal tea has various health benefits.Para 1Para 2Para 3Read the topic sentences again,

8、and find out the key words that can summarize the main idea of each paragraph1 minThe StructureFruit and Herbal Tea in BritainBritishs love of teaUnusual flavours of teaHealth benefits that tea brings03What should a good summary be like?1 min to summarize the tipsp71Tips for writing a summary1.Rewri

9、te and use your own words2.Contain only the main ideas(usually from topic sentences)3.Keep it short(only one paragraph)4.Make use of linking wordsCan we add our own opinions,using phrases like“I think”or“in my opinion”?How to reconstruct/rewrite a sentence?1.Use the synonyms or change the parts of s

10、peech(同义替换，词性转换同义替换，词性转换)2.Restructure the sentences(句型转换句型转换)30s to thinkA typical afternoon tea is usually loose tea in a teapot and you can add milk and sugar to it.Rewrite:An afternoon tea is typically loose tea in a teapot with milk and sugar.=with milk and sugartypically(词性转换词性转换 a.adv.)Recons

11、truct/rewrite a sentence(example)(句型转换句型转换)Restructure the Sentence(句型转换)I like different kinds of English tea.Unlike Chinese tea,we often add sugar and milk to English tea.合并为一个定从1AnswerI like different kinds of English tea which unlike Chinese tea,we often add sugar and milk to.2Not only前置的倒装句It w

12、as an expensive habit to uphold.Not only was the tea itself costly,but(also)it was served only in porcelain cups,following the Chinese tradition.3Among all types of tea,I think the black tea tastes the best.The black tea was brewed in boiling water.句2变成done形式引导的非谓语，加入句1要求It was an expensive habit to

13、 uphold.The tea itself was not only costly,but also served only in porcelain cups(瓷杯瓷杯),following the Chinese tradition.Among all types of tea,I think the black tea brewed in boiling water tastes the best.differentvarious/a variety of/diversedifficultnot easy/hard/challenging/demandingcorrectright/p

14、roper/suitablewaymethod/meansbenefitadvantage/be of benefit to sb/to ones benefit/have a beneficial effect on sth.Useful Synonyms(同义词)2 mins to take notes表因果so,therefore,thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,as a result表条件As(so)long as,on condition that,if,unless表并列First,second,third.;firstly,secondly

15、,thirdly;First,next,then.;in the first place,in the second place.;for one thing,for another thing.表转折however,nevertheless,nonetheless,though,yet,otherwise表对比on the contrary，in contrast，by contrast，in comparison，by comparison表层递also，further，furthermore，likewise，similarly，moreover，in addition，whats mo

16、re解释举例for example，for instance，in fact，actually总结说明in conclusion，in short，to sum up，to conclude，in a wordCan you come up with more?Accordingly/Consequently(因此因此),tea drinking became popular in England.然而Make use of linking words and phrases(连词连词/词组词组)Fill in the blanksBrewed tea(泡制茶泡制茶)doesnt contai

17、n much caffeine(咖啡因咖啡因).Someone still cannot fall asleep after drinking it.Relations转折1Linking Wordshowever,but 2I enjoy drinking English black tea Earl Grey.I often order Earl Grey during my tea break.因果therefore,so,thus3There are various kinds of English tea.English breakfast tea,Green tea,Earl Gr

18、ey,etc.解释举例for example,for instance04Attention:1.Use your own words2.After writing,read it again and make sure theres no grammar or spelling errorWrite your own summary(within 80 words)10 mins(write it either on paper or computer)05Student Answer 1 British people love to make tea with fruit and herb

19、s.They like mint and lemon grass herb,lemon and ginger.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market,mango,strawberry,apple and pear,blackberry leaf and dandelion.And herbal tea has various health benefits.It can help people relax.It can help peoples immune syste

20、ms.It can be good for digestion.Good:Few spelling&grammar errors.Include all major points1 minStudent Answer 1 British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.They like mint and lemon grass herb,lemon and ginger.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market,

21、mango,strawberry,apple and pear,blackberry leaf and dandelion.And herbal tea has various health benefits.It can help people relax.It can help peoples immune systems.It can be good for digestion.To improve:Rewriting is not enough Be more authentic(地道地道)课文原句，未进行足够改写重复herb与前面的mint,lemongrass 重复Lemon gr

22、ass一般写成一个单词 British people love fruit and herbal teas and many even grow their own tea gardens.Apart from the traditional flavours,distinctive flavours such as mango and dandelion are growing popular in recent years.In addition to the enjoyable flavours,herbal tea also has various health benefits.No

23、t only can it bring people relaxation but also is beneficial to the immune system and digestion.Linking words Word upgrading Sentence restructuring句式变形倒装句Sample Writing(a possible version)Type your answer on or 批改网批改网(pigai.org)3 mins for self-assessmentRating Scale123ContentDid you include all the

24、major points?3:I did it.2:I partly did it.1:I failed to achieve it this time.GrammarWere there any grammar errors?CoherenceDid you use the linking words properly?LanguageDid you use your own words?Self-assessmenttotalmilk&sugarVSEnglish TeaChinese TeaSimilarity High social class people from all walk

25、s of life Consider drinking tea as a traditional way to relaxDifferencefruits&herbalsChinese people like pure teadesserts&pastriesConclusion1.Write a summary of a passage on British tea Read and analyze:Grasp the main idea;find the topic sentences and key words;outline the structure Writing skills:R

26、estructure the topic sentences and use linking words to write a summary2.Analyze a peer answer and a sample,learn to self assess 3.Compare British tea with Chinese tea06Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher:Mount Fuji is a worldfamous mountain in Japan.It is one of Japans“Three

27、 Holy Mountains”along with Mount Tate and Mount Haku.Mount Fuji is 3,776 meters high,and its perfect beautiful shape can be seen from all around.Mount Fuji presents different faces in different seasons.In Japan,people describe the mountain as“Diamond Fuji”when it is at dawn or dusk and as“Red Fuji”w

28、hen the mountain is lit by the early morning sun.Mount Fuji is one of the worlds classic examples of a strato volcano(层状火山),meaning that it is formed from many layers(层)of hardened lava(硬化熔岩)that has spread to produce a huge base.The last eruption(爆发)of Mount Fuji was in 1707.take a screenshot1Write

29、 a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher:There is a collection of hot springs and lakes nestled around Mount Fuji.The views over the springs are wonderful,with endless blue water,fresh green water plants and fish swimming lazily.You can soak(浸泡)in outdoor hot springs while admiring the

30、 view of Mount Fuji and have Japanese food,such as fresh sweet fish.At the northern foot of the mountain,about 1,000 meters above sea level,is the Fuji Five Lake area.The shores of the lakes are decorated with seasonal flowers.The image of Mount Fuji reflected on a lake surface is called“UpsideDown

31、Fuji”in Japan.The Japanese used to believe that God lived on Mount Fuji.Japans highest mountain and highest volcano is closely woven(编织)into the countrys legends and art,and is drawing thousands of tourists.take a screenshot21.Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher2.Review the words and phrases youve learned3.Preview textbook p72THANK YOU