（2022）新人教版(2019新版)高中英语必修第三册-高一英语读后续写训练-ppt课件-2021-2022学年高一英语读后续写训练-ppt课件.pptx

1、CONTINUATION WRITINGCONTINUATION WRITING 读后续写之given passagecontinuation writingOur problems in continuation writingThe creative plot is not consistent with the authors writing purpose.谋篇布局谋篇布局与原与原文叙述意图不文叙述意图不一致一致The advanced expressions are not fit for the given passage.语言风格与原语言风格与原文不一致文不一致The detai

2、ls are contradictory to the given passage.细节内容与原细节内容与原文不一致文不一致梳理情节的3种方式1.时空顺序2.叙述结构3.文本线索梳理情节或主旨的2种思维1.完整叙述的思维模板何时何地何人做了何事“何事”有时包括了“原因、经过、结果”2.主人物角度叙述的思维模板主人物开始做了什么？然后做了什么？接着做了什么？读后续写的情感表达方式：叙述、描写、说明、抒情、议论方法：叙述抒情、描写抒情、托物借景抒情、语言抒情、修辞抒情 It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like ne

3、ver before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious di

4、nner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm he said.After breakfast,I

5、 went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horse.They looked really cool In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went wit

6、h me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper.”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“Ok!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul a

7、nd his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pipe trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us Example Paragraph one:Suddenly a l

8、ittle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._ Paragraph two:We had no idea where we were and it got dark._Requirement:根据情节和情感，续写150词左右的短文。时空顺序时空顺序Time Time Place Place Plots Plots Feelings Feelings One summer dayAt home Dad decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.Excited In the late afternoon

9、At Albuquerque airport Uncle Paul picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in PecoscomfortableThe first night on the farmIn the guestroom of the farm houselistening to the frogs and water rolling down the riverRelaxedjoyfulEarly in the net morningAt Uncle Pauls farm houseI went to h

10、elp Aunt Tina feed the chickens,dad and Uncle Paul took the sheep out to graze on horsebackenviousIn the afternoonIn the mountainsI got the permission and rode a horse with my fathers company.delightedSuddenly In the wildA little rabbit jumped out in front of my horsesurprisedGot dark In the wildWe

11、had no idea where we areworried叙述结构Structure Structure Plots Plots Feelings Feelings Beginning(开端）Dad decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.Excited Development（发展）Uncle Paul picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecoscomfortablelistening to the frogs and water rolling

12、down the riverRelaxedjoyfulI went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,dad and Uncle Paul took the sheep out to graze on horsebackenviousI got the permission and rode a horse with my fathers company.delightedA little rabbit jumped out in front of my horsesurprisedClimax(高潮）We had no idea where we are

13、worriedEnding(结局）？根据续写方向和段首句构思框架第一步：由续写大方向、所给段首句拟定一个积极正能量的结局第二步：根据续写第一段的首句和第二段的首句构思出第一段的框架第三步：根据第二段的首句和拟定的结局构思出第二段的框架。微技能一微技能一Paragraph one:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._ Paragraph two:We had no idea where we were and it got dark._根据情节和情感，续写150词左右的短文。推测故事发展方向:Group work(5

14、 min)1.Discuss with your partners and design the plot together.小组讨论设计续写剧情。2.List some key verbs or adjectives to get your ideas into shape.罗列关键的动词或形容词来理清思路3.Consider the theme and language features as well while plotting.主题和语言也要考虑到。4.Choose one member of your group to explain your outcome.选一成员来向大家解释你们的续写设计。Task 3 Design the plot范文THANK YOU