现象解释类作文课件.ppt

1、现象解释性作文现象解释性作文现象解释类作文现象解释类作文 现象解释类作文的立意在于阐述某一现象现象解释类作文的立意在于阐述某一现象或观点，已成为近年来四级作文的热点题或观点，已成为近年来四级作文的热点题型。这类题型在写作形式上较为灵活，可型。这类题型在写作形式上较为灵活，可以以一般议论文的形式出现，也可以以书以以一般议论文的形式出现，也可以以书信的形式出现，在考试时需根据题目要求信的形式出现，在考试时需根据题目要求灵活处理。灵活处理。 现象解释类作文的基本提纲结构为：现象解释类作文的基本提纲结构为：首先描述某一现象或某一观点，其次首先描述某一现象或某一观点，其次阐述人们对于该现象或问题的不同看

2、阐述人们对于该现象或问题的不同看法，或解释造成该现象的原因，或分法，或解释造成该现象的原因，或分析该现象导致的利与弊；最后提出解析该现象导致的利与弊；最后提出解决问题的办法或阐述个人见解，表明决问题的办法或阐述个人见解，表明自己的态度。自己的态度。模板一模板一 In modern society, _ (总体描述现总体描述现象或趋势）象或趋势）. On the one hand, _ _ (该现象或趋势的表现一）该现象或趋势的表现一）. On the other hand, _ _ (该现在或趋势的表现二）该现在或趋势的表现二）. The reasons for this phenomenon

3、 can be listed as follows. Firstly, _ (原因一）原因一）. Secondly, _ (原因二）原因二）. Finally, _ (原因三）原因三）. As a matter of fact, _ (我对该现我对该现象的整体评价）象的整体评价）.For one thing, _ (我的看法一）我的看法一）. For another, _(我的看我的看法二）法二）. All in all, _ (总结全文）总结全文）.模板套用范文一模板套用范文一 Craze for National Civil Servant Test 1. 1. 当前，越来越多的人参加公务

4、员考当前，越来越多的人参加公务员考试；试； 2. 2. 产生这一现象的原因；产生这一现象的原因； 3. 3. 我对该现象的看法。我对该现象的看法。 In modern society, the number of people taking part in the national servant test has increased dramatically. On the one hand, college graduates are busy in preparing for such examinations. On the other hand, some people who ha

5、ve already worked for a couple of years also join the stream. The reasons for this phenomenon can be listed as follows. Firstly, in recent years, it is hard for college students to find satisfactory jobs after graduation due to the enrollment expansion of universities and global economic recession.

6、Secondly, public servant is a comparatively stable profession in China, with high social position and such potential profits as social security and retirement benefits. Thirdly, it seems that a few people consider the examination as a springboard to greater power and a short-cut to success in career

7、. As a matter of fact, this practice reflects many social problems, which we must respond to in a thoughtful and productive way. For one thing, our government should take some feasible actions to ease the situation. For another, students may be encouraged to strike off on their own to have more cont

8、rol over their careers. All in all, only by every fields joint efforts can we reduce the negative effects.模板二模板二 Para1： 1）Believe it or not/Like it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in/a popularity (resurgence /worsening/crisis/ decline/growth/revival/spread ) ofin our society/on the Chinese

9、 campus. 2) According to, people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in 3) To get a better sense of it, it is necessary for us to find out its causes. Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis/study/ observation of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our c

10、oncern/should call for more of our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of, for which(原因原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among, as an ideal way of, since (原因原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of(原因原因III) 8) While, in fact,Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our s

11、ocial/college life are positive/ negative/a mixed one. 10) On the one hand,.(分析分析I) 11) On the other,.(分析分析II) 12) With more and moreadded / attached to the trend, I am fully convinced / I am deeply worried, it will certainly / is bound toin the time to come.模板套用范文二模板套用范文二What Causes a Boom in Celeb

12、rating Foreign Festivals1.1. 近几年大学校园出现了一股过洋节热。近几年大学校园出现了一股过洋节热。2.2. 阐明导致该现象的原因。阐明导致该现象的原因。3.3. 分析该现象的社会影响。分析该现象的社会影响。Para. 1: 1) Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus. 2) According to an official report/survey, young people, espec

13、ially college students, are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentines Day, April Fools Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. 3) To get a better sense of the boom, it is necessary for us to find out its causes. Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that thre

14、e main factors are well worth our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of students seeking after individuality and novelty, for which the college campus offers an ideal climate. (原因原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among the students, as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress f

15、or the time being, since most college students, single child of each family, are subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth. (原因原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern

16、cultures. (原因原因III) 8) While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals, in fact, the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays.Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our college life are posit

17、ive. 10) On the one hand, it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures. (分析分析I) 11) On the other, it has enriched the college life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on. (分析分析II) 12) With more and more health and color added to the trend, I

18、 firmly believe, it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come.历年相似真题汇总历年相似真题汇总 20112011年年6 6月月 1. 1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚现在网购已经成为一种时尚2. 2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3. 3. 我的建议我的建议 20102010年年6 6月作文真题：月作文真题： Due Attention Should Be Given to Due Attention Should Be Given

19、 to SpellingSpelling 1.1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.2. 出现这种现象的原因出现这种现象的原因 3.3. 我认为我认为(措施）措施） 20082008年年1212月作文真题月作文真题 1.1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.2. 造成的问题造成的问题 3.3. 限制使用的意义限制使用的意义 历年真题回顾历年真题回顾 20052005年年1212月月 1.1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2.2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3.3

20、. 我认为我认为Writing Assignment On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude 1. 1. 现在的年轻人普遍缺乏感恩之心；现在的年轻人普遍缺乏感恩之心； 2. 2. 出现这种现象的原因；出现这种现象的原因； 3. 3. 我认为我认为Sample On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the se

21、nse of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth. P

22、ersonally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we sh

23、ould make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.