高中英语新高考写作新题型三合一练习（二年级专用）（附参考答案和详解）.doc

1、新高考英语写作新题型三合一练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 一、应用文写作假设你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音 (TikTok) 而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.表示理解和关心；2.沉迷抖音的影响:花费大量时间观看和分享视频，影响学习。3.提出具体建议:1）开始一些其他的爱好，如阅读，听音乐或下棋。2）通过面对面的交流来结交更多的朋友要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John, Yours,Li Hua二、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I was s

2、o excited to take a vacation in Florida for the first time.My sister had invited my daughters and me to go with her family and she even lent me her new, expensive bathing suit (泳衣).It was so comfortable.The first morning we were there, I put on that bathing suit and we headed to the beach.We played

3、in the water, enjoying the views and sounds of the ocean: the waves, the wind, fish, white sand, seashells, and whatever else drew our attention.I was excited by it all while I was swimming in the cool ocean water.Suddenly, I felt a deep pain (疼痛) in my right arm.My sister saw my face and rushed to

4、my side.I lifted my arm to find huge blisters (水泡) that circled the entire length of my arm.I had been bitten by a jellyfish (水母).My sister said, “We have to head back to our room now.I will put some ointment (药膏) on the blisters so that we dont have to rush to the hospital.”I didnt want to frighten

5、 anyone, so I came out of the water quietly with my arm hanging at my side.We had forgotten our towels that morning in a hurry to get to the ocean, so I shook as we walked in silence.I began to notice people looking at me and pointing me out.It seemed as if the entire beach was laughing at me.Then I

6、 looked down and saw why.That beautiful, expensive bathing suit was completely transparent (透明的) now that it was wet.I became the center of the beach.However, I had no towel for the long travel back to the room!注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式作答。To get back to the room, I had to walk past a swimming pool. W

7、ell, good and bad news came in._三、概要写作阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Pollutions serious effects on the environment have become more obvious in recent years.Most scientists agree that efforts are necessary to protect our environment from further harm.As we know, the construction industry consumes a large

8、quantity of energy and resources and creates a huge amount of pollution.So green buildings are in great need.The environmental benefits of green buildings includes the protection of ecosystems and biodiversity(生物多样性)，improved air and water quality, less waste flowing into streams and the protection

9、of natural resources.Green buildings can also result in lower operating costs because they typically use less energy and fewer materials and improve indoor air quality, improving the health of people who live there.The process of building green houses includes technical and artistic planning with na

10、ture protection in mind.Building designs often reflect the surrounding environment and natural resources and use renewable building materials such as bamboo and straw.In addition, recycled resources found locally are used for green buildings, reducing the cost and air pollution associated with trans

11、porting materials long distances.Care site selection is important to minimize human effects on the surrounding environment.For example, placing a structure in an area that allows it to take advantage of cool breezes and sunlight can reduce energy use and expenses.More energy and expenses are needed

12、for large buildings as well? so it is important to build the small ones.Green roofs are another feature of green houses that reduce energy use and costs.These roofs are partially or completely covered with plants? which helps to keep heating and cooling costs low? prevent water running off and deal

13、with pollutants.Other features of green buildings often include energy and water protection, recycling and waste reduction.In addition, renewable energy sources such as solar power, water power and wind power are used for heat and electricity, which greatly reduces costs and decreases the influence

14、on the environment. 附：参考答案和解析一、应用文写作【答案】Dear John,I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.Th

15、erefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it.You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess.Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.Best wishes!Yo

16、urs,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。朋友John沉迷抖音而无法自拔，要求考生给朋友John回封邮件，表示理解并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累诚挚的：sincere genuine专注：pay attention to focus on采取措施：take measures take action/take steps不能做某事：cant do something make sb unable to do2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about

17、 TikTok.They spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online.It makes them unable to focus on study.拓展句：Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.【点睛】【

18、高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.（hear后跟that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句

19、）二、读后续写【答案】To get back to the room, I had to walk past a swimming pool.Like everyone else, those in and around the swimming pool all looked at me with a very strange expression.All I could do was keep my head down.Finally, I made it to the room, where my sister lovingly took care of my blisters.When

20、 she saw I was going to be okay, she couldnt help laughing.She said that she had never worn the suit before and didnt know it would be transparent when wet.Well, good and bad news came in.The good news was that I didnt have to go to the hospital.The blisters disappeared in the afternoon.I no longer

21、felt any pain.The bad news was that I had to walk past all those people again later that day to get back to the beach.Im sure those beach lovers would never forget the day.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者第一次到佛罗里达度假，妹妹借给作者她新的昂贵的泳衣，作者穿着舒服的泳衣在海水中嬉戏时被水母咬了，作者必须回房间涂药膏（未带浴巾），发现那件漂亮、昂贵的泳衣因为湿透了，变得完全透明，海滩上的人都盯着作者看。【详解】1.

22、段落续写：由第一段首句内容“为了回到房间，我不得不走过一个游泳池。”可知，第一段可描写当游泳池里和周围的人看着作者时，作者的反应和妹妹也不知道泳衣湿了会透明的这件事。由第二段首句内容“好消息和坏消息都传来了。”可知，第二段可描写好消息是作者不必去医院，坏消息是作者不得不再次从那些人身边走过，回到海滩，真令人尴尬。2.续写线索：走过泳池低头走路忍俊不禁好消息坏消息尴尬3.词汇激活行为类看着：look at /have a look at /watch照顾：take care of /look after/care for消失：disappear/vanish/die away情绪类奇怪的：str

23、ange/weird亲切地：lovingly/benignly/kindly【点睛】高分句型1.Finally, I made it to the room, where my sister lovingly took care of my blisters.(由关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2.The good news was that I didnt have to go to the hospital.(由that引导的表语从句)三、概要写作【答案】Pollution has brought serious effect on the environment in

24、recent years, so efforts are necessarily made to protect it from further harm.Green buildings are in great need.The process of building green house includes technical and artistic planning with nature protection in mind.The following aspects should be under consideration: careful site selection, gre

25、en roofs, energy and water protection, recycling and waste reduction.【分析】这是一篇说明文。近年来，污染给环境带来了严重的影响，为了保护环境不受进一步的损害,绿色建筑非常需要。建造温室的过程包括技术和艺术规划，并考虑到自然保护。应考虑以下几个方面：精心的选址，绿色屋顶，能源和水的保护，回收和减少浪费。【详解】1.要点摘录Pollutions serious effects on the environment have become more obvious in recent years.Most scientists a

26、gree that efforts are necessary to protect our environment from further harm.green buildings are in great need.The process of building green houses includes technical and artistic planning with nature protection in mind.Care site selection is important to minimize human effects on the surrounding en

27、vironment.Green roofs are another feature of green houses that reduce energy use and costs.Other features of green buildings often include energy and water protection, recycling and waste reduction.2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第4、5、6三个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Pollution has brought serious effect on the environment in r

28、ecent years, so efforts are necessarily made to protect it from further harm.The process of building green house includes technical and artistic planning with nature protection in mind.The following aspects should be under consideration: careful site selection, green roofs, energy and water protecti

29、on, recycling and waste reduction.【点睛】高分句型1 Pollution has brought serious effect on the environment in recent years, so efforts are necessarily made to protect it from further harm.运用一个复杂的复合句对第一段进行了概括。其中so引导的结果状语从句、are made 的被动形式等表达高级。高分句型2：The following aspects should be under consideration: careful site selection, green roofs, energy and water protection, recycling and waste reduction.用一个复杂的主从复合句概括了第五到七段内容，用and 的多级并列结构比较高级。5