初中英语2022中考热点书面表达练习（共十篇附参考范文和写作指导）.doc

1、2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 一、食品安全现如今，很多人喜欢在网上点餐。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）左右的英语短文向英语杂志食品安全栏目投稿，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的观点。可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Ordering food onlineAdvantages:方便便捷，节约时间；品种多样，美味可口；减少外出，规避风险；.Disadvantages:塑料包装污染环境；饮食习惯不够健康；食品安全令人担忧；Your opinion.参考词汇：减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑

2、料包装plastic packagesNowadays, many people prefer ordering food online._.二、保护视力假期同学们都进行了视力检测，发现很多同学视力下降严重，开学又增加了很多戴眼镜的同学。学校英文广播正发起卫生与健康为主题的英语征文，假设你是李华，请你针对这一情况，向同学们介绍一下你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：1.坚持做眼保健操。2.很少使用电子产品( electronic products)。3.经常做户外活动。4.要求: 1.需适当增加细节，使文章更加完整和连贯。2.书写工整，80词左右。Dear classmates:Im sor

3、ry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker these days.2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 三、手机进校园Writing.（作文）Write at least 80 words about the topic My views on mobile phones，（以 手机之我见为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：随着时代的发展，手机的普及率越来越高，然而，也有越来越多的人反对中学生携带手机进入校园，请你结合自己的生活和学习，谈谈你的看法, 向学校英文报刊投稿。Use the following

4、 points as a reference （以下问题仅供参考）1.Is it a good idea to own a mobile phone for a middle school student？2.Why do you think so？（give at least three reasons）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）四、劳动教育日前，中共中央、国务院印发了关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见（A guideline on hardworking spirit education)，提出了中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大

5、、劳动最美丽的劳动精神。英语报纸以此为主题举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向其投稿，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，并提出建议。写作要点：1.Your opinion about the Guideline.List at least two reasons.2.Activities:a.What housework do you usually do at home?b.What out-of-class activities do you take part in at school?3.Your advice to students about how to develop

6、hardworking spirit.要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 五、心理健康假如你是心理咨询员Sigmund Friend，近期你收到初三学生Jac

7、k的英文来信，请针对Jack的问题，给他提些建议。Dear Sigmund Friend,I have just entered Grade 9, but we have so many exams.And every subject is even harder than before.I have a lot of homework every day.Sometimes I find it difficult to finish it.So I often stay up late.In the daytime.I always feel tired and sleepy.Also, I

8、 am often in a bad mood these days.Whenever my parents ask me about my school life, I just feel very unhappy and angry.What should I do? Can you offer me some advice?Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Jack要求：1.意思连贯，符合逻辑，书写工整。2.词数80字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Thank you for your lette

9、r.I know as a student in Grade 9, you have some problems.I hope I can help you.Yours sincerely,Sigmund Friend2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 六、研学旅行旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。诸多旅行中，你最难忘的是哪次呢？请以“Thetrip I will never forget”为题，用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：(1）哪次旅行让你难忘；(2）该旅行的经历(3）该旅行的感受。2.要求：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；(2) 词数80左右The trip I wil

10、l never forget七、课后延时服务请以“My ideal school”为题，根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的短文向21世纪英文报投稿。要点如下：1.我理想中的学校是一所混合学校，男女生一起上课。2.我的学校生活丰富多彩，也很有趣。3.在我的所有学科中，我最喜欢的科目是电脑，因为可以在电脑上做很多事情。4.放学后我有很多空闲时间进行课外活动，我每周练习打两次羽毛球。5.我们学校每个月有一次旅行，我们每个人都过得很愉快。My ideal school.2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 八、加强体育教育据报道，由于缺乏锻炼，中学生的身体素质有所下降这一情况已经引起社会

11、的关注和教育部门的高度重视。近年来，我市继续开展初中毕业生升学体育考试工作，旨在切实贯彻党的教育方针，全面提高学生身体素质。同学们刚刚参加过初中毕业生升学体育考试，你有何感想？请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇90词左右的英语短文向学校英文微刊投稿。提示：1锻炼身体的好处：strong，healthy, energetic：2锻炼身体的方式：ball games，running, swimmingfavorite sport；3请你谈谈对体育锻炼的看法和建议。要求：1内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；2开头已给出，不计人总词数；3语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；Exercise one

12、hour a day, keep illness away! As we know, . 九、双减政策去年九月，中国正式开始实施（carry out）了“双减政策”（the double reduce policy）来减少学生的学习负担（burden），请根据以下要求向某英文杂志写一篇文章，解读双减政策，并分享自己的见解，80词左右。1.双减是哪双减？你如何看待双减？2.双减后我们的学习和生活各发生了哪些变化？（各两点变化） 3.在减负的大环境下，我们如何成为一个优秀的学习者？请提出三条有效的建议。.2022中考英语热点书面表达练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 十、家庭作业量与睡眠管理教育部正在制定

13、作业管理办法，初中生每天作业量平均不超过90分钟。对初中生来说，适当的课后作业是对所学知识的巩固和深化。优质高效地完成作业还可以培养学生良好的学习习惯和独立思考的能力。与同学一起调查，小组讨论或参加社会实践活动，有利于学生创新能力培养和综合素养提升。英文杂志正发起作业意见的征文, 请你谈谈对作业的认识，根据图片(从略)提示或你的生活实际，讲述一次你觉得有意义的作业体验，以及它对你的影响或启示。要求：1.词数不少于80词。2.首句已给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。Whether homework is an angle (天使) or a devil (恶魔), it de

14、pends on what you will get from it.附：参考范文和写作指导一【范文】Nowadays, many people prefer ordering food online. Some people think its good to order food online. It is more convenient and faster than we cook at home, so we can save much time to do other things. Besides, there are many kinds of take-away food a

15、nd most of them are delicious. Whats more, ordering food online can reduce going out and avoid risks.However, other people hold a different opinion. They say some restaurants may have food safety problems and plastic packages are bad for our environment and health. In addition, this kind of eating h

16、abit is unhealthy.In my opinion, we can order food online sometimes, but for the sake of our health, wed better cook it by ourselves.【详解】1. 题干解读：本题让我们就网上点餐谈谈其利弊，并发表自己对此的看法。本题内容要点包括三部分：网上点餐的好处、网上点餐的坏处、我们对此的观点，我们可以把这三部分分成三段进行写作，最后一段发表自己看法的同时也可以总结下文章内容。2. 写作指导：本题主要是观点看法类的写作，时态主要采用一般现在时。题目给出的内容要点较多但是言简意

17、赅，我们可以围绕内容要点自我发挥以符合字数要求；要点之间可以使用连接词（Besides、Whats more等）来连接，这样既层次清晰又行文连贯。最后再注意检查要点在写作时是否有遗漏，英文表达是否符合英文的习惯与规则。二【范文】Dear classmates:Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker these days. Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.At school, I often go out o

18、f the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using electronic products. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly,

19、 I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you will find my ways helpful.【详解】1. 题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求作者根据给出的内容，写一篇关于保护视力的文章。文章给出三个方面，还需要作者进行补充。2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称为主书写，时态是一般现在时。可分为三段，第一段总体介绍，引出下文，第二段介绍具体方法、建议，第三段表愿望。注意主谓一致和固定句式的使用。三【范文】My views on mobile phonesDiffe

20、rent people have different opinions on whether its a good idea to use mobile phones. When it comes to me, its unnecessary to do so.First of all, It does no good to our study. Since mobile phones have a lot functions, we can be easily distracted from our study.Second, Its harmful to our health. For e

21、xample , like all the electronic products, mobile phones have radiation which may cause serious diseases.Finally, paying for mobile phones can be expensive. Nowadays , many people like to show off themselves by taking out the latest phones. And this can be a great waste of money.As far as I am conce

22、rned, I hold the opinion that its not a good idea to use mobile phones.【详解】题干解读：根据文中给出的提示可知，这是一篇开放性的文章，作者可以写同意的观点也可以写反对的观点，只要说说自己的看法，合理即可。并且文中给出参考问题，中学生是不是应该有自己的手机；为什么你这么认为？分析看法观点的时候，注意条理清晰，分段和连词的使用。例文点评：本例文作者是对中学生持有手机持反对观点，并且分三条叙述理由，用First of all、Second和Finally条理清晰。最后一段做总结。本文观点明确，理由充分。高分亮点：whether引

23、导的从句；被动语态；be harmful to；for example；情态动词使用；as far as；do good to；first of all。四【范文】A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a midle school student, I welcome it warmly. The hardworking spirit education is

24、necessary and it helps to build us up.I usually do housework at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. I also take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich my real-world work experience.In order to develop hardworking spirit, w

25、e should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. We should try to form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见中提出的劳动精神为主题，写短文谈谈自己对劳动教育的看法，并提出自己的建议。2. 写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一

26、般现在时。要包含所有写作要点，发表自己的观点并介绍自己在家常做的家务、在学校参加的课外活动及自己对学生们如何培养劳动精神的意见。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。五【范文】Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter. I know as a student in Grade 9, you have some problems. I hope I can help you.You said you have many exams and every subject is harder than before. You have a lot of homework. Plan

27、 your day carefully. Try to manage your time better. You had better choose some hobbies when you are free because hobbies are very important to you. Before the exams, you should go over what you have learnt as often as possible. Your parents always care about you, so you can talk to them about your

28、problems. Sometimes they can offer you some valuable suggestions. Try your best in your study and enjoy your school life.You also said that you are often in a bad mood. Making friends and doing sports may be a good idea to help you solve your problems. So just take action and you will be better and

29、better.Yours sincerely,Sigmund Friend【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据Jack来信中的问题，写一封回信，给他一些处理问题的建议，属于书信类写作。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第二人称和一般现在时为主，以第一人称和一般过去时为辅来叙述。写作时承接开头，要针对他信中“考试多、作业多”和“心情不好”这个两个问题给出具体的建议，最后给以鼓励。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。六【范文】Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the

30、 southwestern part of our country. It is really a very good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed

31、 the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. It was such an interesting trip that I will never forget it.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文。话题是The trip I will never forget（我永远不会忘记的旅行）。时态主要为一般过去时，注意时态的转换。人称主要为第一、三人称。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题和所给要点列出提纲，可适当发挥。但短文必须包含有要点

32、。字数应在80词左右。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点（1）哪次旅行让你难忘；（2）该旅行的经历（3）该旅行的感受。），列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：去年暑假，我和家人去云南旅行。云南位于我国西南部。这真是一个很好的地方，拥有美丽山川，清澈的河流，善良的人民。到处都能看到树和花。那里的水果很新鲜。我们在那里呆了大约一个星期。我们去了昆明、大理和丽江老城。我们喜欢当地的食物。我们还去爬山，拍了很多照片。我们都玩得很开心。这是一次非常有趣的旅行，我永远不会忘记。【点睛】写作时可

33、以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和高分句式，语言要规范，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步要检查单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等，有无重复、啰嗦的语

34、言，注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。七【范文】My ideal schoolMy ideal school is a mixed school where boys and girls have classes together. My school life is colorful and interesting. Of all my subjects, my favorite subject is computer, because I can do a lot of things on computer. I have a lot of f

35、ree time for extra-curricular activities after school. I practice playing badminton twice a week. Our school has a trip every month, and we all have a good time.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍我理想的学校。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2. 写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；根据要点提示具体介绍我理想的学校是什么样的；文中一定要

36、包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。八 【范文】As we know, taking sports will keep one healthy. It can help us keep strong. The more the young students exercise, the more energetic they will be. As a middle school student, I am busy with study. I have little time to t

37、ake exercise, but I still do sports as often as I can. I play ball games，running, swimming and so on. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I often watch basketball matches. Whats more, I think outdoor activities are sports, too. I also take an active part in other kinds of activities. At weekend

38、 I often go for a picnic with my family. I also like climbing mountains, flying kites , boating and so on. I enjoy colorful sports .Lets take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late.【解析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题是有关身体锻炼的内容，具体内容包括目前中学生的身体状况和锻炼状况，提出锻炼的好处，锻炼的方式，以及个人对于体育锻炼的看法和建议，在写作时应注意符合题意，同

39、时应注意写作语言的准确性和连贯性。九【范文】In July, China introduced the double reduction policy. It hopes to reduce schoolwork burden on primary and junior high school students. The policy calls for reducing homework and after-school classes.In my opinion, the policy is good for us. Our homework is clearly less than be

40、fore, and we have enough time to process new knowledge now. We have more chances to do experiments and learn from real life. This is a much better way to learn things than just hitting the books. We can also spend more time taking part in clubs and activities.Although we feel less stress than before

41、, self-discipline becomes the key. We should balance the schoolwork and after-school activities. We also should finish our homework on time. Moreover, listening to the teacher carefully in class becomes more important. Otherwise, we will fall behind other students.【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“双减政策”写一篇短文

42、。2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段描述双减政策的内容；第二段表达自己对双减的观点，以及我们学习和生活发生的变化；最后就如何在此环境下成为一个优秀的学习者提出相应的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。十【范文】Whether homework is an angle or a devil, it depends on what you will get from it. As for me, homework is a helpful friend that can guide me to study efficiently. It can not only

43、help us review what we have learned, but also give us a chance to think about the knowledge and their connections.What impressed me most is a survey about lucky money. I interviewed my classmates online about how they spent their lucky money. I found half of my classmates used it to buy books or gav

44、e away to the poor children while some of them bought snacks or played online games. From then on, I learned to make good use of my lucky money.As a student, I love the homework which can help us find out the problems and solutions by ourselves instead of copying or repeating something boring. We also need to discuss in groups and work together.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据图片内容及自己的生活实际，讲述一次你觉得有意义的作业体验，并说明它对你的影响或启示。2. 写作指导：写作时要结合具体的语境来使用时态，讲述自己的作业体验时用一般过去时，讲述影响或启示用一般现在时。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写或语法错误。11