读后续写高分作文4则—2022届高考英语备考写作专练.docx

1、读后续写高分作文4则2022届高考英语备考写作专练One fall, my wifeElliand I had a single goal: tophotographpolar bears. We were staying at a research campoutside “the polar bear capital of the world” the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Takingpicturesof polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears like all w

2、ild animals should bephotographed from asafedistance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through acamerawith atelephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearb

3、y lake sniffed, and smelledour garlicbread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wirefence. He pulled and bitthe wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at

4、 the bear, hit pots hard, and firedblank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoiseslike these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but

5、it would be 30 minutesbefore it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp managersuggested I use pepperspray. The spray burns the bears eyes. but doesnt hur

6、t them. So I approached our uninvitedguest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bearranto the lake towash his eyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1.A few minutes later，the bear headed back

7、 to our camp.Para 2.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.范文1Paragraph 1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.In a huff, the bear pounded at thefenceviolently. Frozen with terror, I could make no action buttrembled helplesslywith tears rolling down my face. At that very moment

8、,Ellirushedout of the cabin with a bag of garlicbreadembraced in her arms. Before I realized, shehadcast the bag to a long haul, which eventually landed in a bush. At this sight, the bearturned aroundfrom the fence andheadedtantivyfor the bush. Having finished the bread, the bear paced towards our c

9、amp again, likely to give our fence another fierce impact. Nothing left,we could but await our doom, with fear engulfing both of us.Paragraph 2：At that moment, the helicopter arrived.Two wildlife control workers looked out from the aircraft wearing counter-assault overalls and they fired a warning s

10、hot to deter the bear. Astonished by thenoisesof the helicopter and the shot, the bear was startled to leap into the bush andgallopedtoward the forest like a shot. Immediately, Iforcedmyself to calm down and managed to photo somepicturesbefore the bear disappeared into the forest. The workers left u

11、s with some pine-based detergent, for its smell is supposed to deter bears. What a thrilling experience!范文2Paragraph 1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.With greater rage, the bear roared and tried totear downthefencewith all his might. Igathered up my courageand tried to spray h

12、im again. Unfortunately, he managed to escape and my heart froze in my chest. At this moment,Ellicame up with a crazy idea and threw our garlicbreadat the bear. To my great surprise,the bear stopped and bowed down to eat the bread. Seeing this, all of us let out a sigh of relief. Before long however

13、, the hungry bear finished eating and pushed the fence again. The fence was about to fall down!Paragraph 2：At that very moment the helicopter arrived.Shocked by thenoises,the bear stopped and turned around. Seeing the people equipped with guns, he ran away and disappeared in the woods as if he knew

14、who they were we finally got our breath and Elli and I embraced tightlywith still racing hearts. After we calmed down, the locals told us that the bears were losing their homes and food because of human activities and climate changes. On the way back home,I checked the preciouspicturesin thecamera,

15、lost in thought . This experience would be remembered, forever.范文3Paragraph 1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.Roars and screamspierced the silencewithneedle-like shrillness. ThenoisesturnedElliand Ipale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our wholefence. He roare

16、d repeatedly,shatteringwhat was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take somepicturesof the bear. The animals noisesechoedall around us. Webetrayedour feelings byhuddlingtogether, shivering with fear. After thoroughlyscrutinizingthe area, hetrottedforward a few steps.Paragraph 2：At

17、that very moment the helicopter arrived.My heartleaped with joyas I knew we werelikely to be saved. Elliused peppersprayagain to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. Heregardedus withthe merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and

18、 starteddevouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like a thousand times to show thankfulness of beingsafeand sound.范文4Paragraph 1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.He could notresist the temptation ofthe bread. The peppersprayhad slowed the bear but wasnt enough

19、 tostop the beast. On the contrary, itprovokedthe bear and made him evenmore furious. Much as I wanted tophotographthe approaching bear, mysurvival instinctovertook my desire to capture the perfect photo. In a moment of panic,Elliand I decided to give him what he wanted the garlicbread. Whileit wasl

20、oominglikea dark cloud, we threw the bread at the bear a little bit at a time until it hadrunout.Paragraph 2：At that very moment the helicopter arrived.But theirritatedbear has already started towhackthefence. I feared that the bear would tear down the fence at any minute. Luckily, the rangers came

21、to our rescue. They managed to calm the bear down and distract him with some sort ofacoustics. Even though my heart was stillthumpingwildly inside my chest, Isnatchedmycameraand snapped one last shot of the bear, a photo that I had always longed to capture. Though risking my life, Ive got the best picture ever and its all worth it.