高中英语短文改错课件-公开课.ppt（无音视频）

1、How to do Proof-reading短文改错Class 7 Senior 2Miss Zhou In our everyday lives, if we make In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow.and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words 怎么改？ His

2、 salary is paid by an hour. Lihua hit me on a head. He always has dinner at the table. The teacher said the earth ran around the sun. I can go to home now.2. I like history of China.3. I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordofUnnecessary word高考短文改错的考察方式高考短文改错的考察方式 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或

3、修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。 从错误比例上看从错误比例上看， 2：1：7或者或者 1：1：8：多多 缺缺 错错一般以三种题型出现一般以三种题型出现: :增加增加,删除或修改删除或修改。设问的角度有三个设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑词法、句法和行文逻辑。动词形动词形，名词数名词数还要注意还要注意形和副形和副代词代词格，细领

4、悟格，细领悟介词介词短语须关注短语须关注习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾 A Limerick请先念一遍请先念一遍“咒语咒语”吧吧复杂句子复杂句子不放过不放过.一、动词一、动词形形 1.1.动词的动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误错误. . 高考链接高考链接1： However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国）全国）flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someon

5、e to rely on.（2008 全国）全国）needed 2.主谓不一致主谓不一致的错误的错误.高考链接高考链接: : I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷全国卷2) was3 3. 非谓语动词非谓语动词 错误高考链接高考链接: : I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）buying I was really dis

6、appointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011陕西卷陕西卷)disappointed5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. werelikes excitingget Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show them.3. They eager to know ev

7、erything about China and asked me lots of questions. 4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. practicecomePractice二、名词二、名词数数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。的用法错误。高考链接高考链接2： It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）luggage In early January this year, the rate

8、 of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷）辽宁卷）week1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations. 3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind. heartinformationkindspractice不可数名词不可数名词progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, informa

9、tion, advicePractice三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副 形容词和副词的误用形容词和副词的误用高考链接高考链接3： When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）浙江卷）slowly2 2比较级和最高级的混用或误用比较级和最高级的混用或误用. .The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西）陕西）faster还要注意形和副还要注意形和副 高考链接：高考链接： Unfortunate, I ha

10、d an accident and hit another （2012 浙江卷）浙江卷）UnfortunatelyWe lived in a comfortably double- room with a big bath.(2012陕西）陕西）comfortable 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happi

11、er today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefullypracticePractice四四、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟3. it3. it作形主、形宾作形主、形宾、指代时有缺漏指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think)或固定搭配或固定搭配. .高考链接高考链接4：With the help of Katia, a roommate of me (2011 重庆卷）重庆卷）mineIt was only when we did their chemistry project together th

12、at I began to understand (2010 辽宁卷）辽宁卷）He found difficult to learn math well.ourit1. 1. 人称代词，反身代词，不定代词人称代词，反身代词，不定代词2. 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. .2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I

13、wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myselfeverythingit Some students may also save up for our college or future use .theirpracticePractice五、五、介词短语介词短语须关注须关注，习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住 1. 1.主要考查主要考查固定短语，固定介词固定短语，固定介词的搭配。的搭配。2.2.介词的介词的多用，漏用多用，漏用和和误用误用3 3.时间状语前有指示代词时间状语前有指示代词this, thatthis, that或或one, o

14、ne, next,lastnext,last等修饰时不用介词等修饰时不用介词. . eg.Hepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon五、五、介词短语介词短语须关注须关注，习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住高考链接：高考链接： Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙浙 江卷江卷)withI also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. practice Im sure they will

15、laugh to me and see me as a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforonPractice连词连词butbut，andand，or, soor, so和和althoug

16、halthough的逻的逻辑性用法错误辑性用法错误高考链接：高考链接：六六 、冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. . . 冠词冠词a, ana, an和和thethe的用法错误的用法错误andI came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn

17、on the light.He will stay there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. andoran The smaller piece is that you want, right ?It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. Practice makes perfect, that is very im

18、portant for us .七七、复杂句子复杂句子不放过不放过 what Aswhich1.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改大小写不改.3.词序不改词序不改.4.标点符号不改标点符号不改.5.原意不改原意不改.五不改原则五不改原则考 查 目 标1 1）识别错误）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力并正确校正语篇的能力2 2）综合运用英语知识的能力）综合运用英语知识的能力3 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力辑的能力 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

19、 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。解题步骤解题步骤1. 通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，复读全文，检查验证检查验证动词形动词形，名词数名词数还要注意还要注意形和副形和副代词代词格，细领悟格，细领悟介词介词短语须关注短语须关注习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾 A Limerick请先念一遍请先念一遍“咒语咒语”吧吧复杂句子复杂句子不

20、放过不放过再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改大小写不改.3.词序不改词序不改.4.标点符号不改标点符号不改.5.原意不改原意不改.解题步骤解题步骤1.1.通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意2.2.整句理解，上下兼顾整句理解，上下兼顾3.3.复读全文，检查验证复读全文，检查验证五不改原则五不改原则At Christmas Eve, Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!They

21、put them in the corner of the sittingroom. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmastree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.At Ch

22、ristmas Eve, Jim went with his1._father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._on_chose_tall_it动词形动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of5._

23、Christmas light. The sitting room looked6. _really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas8. _tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his9. _parents singing and dancing happily.10._was_lights_beautiful_andwerewere动词形动词形还要注意形和副还要注意形和副动词形动词形名词数名词数

24、冠词连词须关注冠词连词须关注 I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job

25、. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do my homework. But I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I learned from school. ahadfeelinghardknowledgeittoothanAnd 从错误

26、比例上看从错误比例上看， 2：1：7或者或者 1：1：8：多多 缺缺 错错一般以三种题型出现一般以三种题型出现: :增加增加,删除或修改删除或修改。设问的角度有三个设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑词法、句法和行文逻辑。summary He who makes no mistakes，makes nothing 不犯错误的人必然一事无成。2. By ignorance we mistake, and by mistakes we learn 吃一堑 长一智。3. A stupid person always tries to justify himself for his mistakes; but a wise man tries his best to correct his errors. 愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护，聪明的人则力求改正。4.Dont make the same mistake twice. 不要重复犯同样的错误。 ProverbsGood luck in your coming exam!