读后续写2则：小狗帮助治疗焦虑症、带小狗回家-2022届高考英语写作备考.docx

1、读后续写2则：小狗帮助治疗焦虑症、带小狗回家读后续写：小狗帮助治疗焦虑症原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Sally had anxiety disorder trouble that made her fail to speak in social situations. Im a nurse and use Bella to help children in my community, to bring them comfort and confidence the way only a dog can. I thoug

2、ht back to the day when Id first brought Bella to the school.That morning in January, her teacher led us to a room. “Sally hasnt spoken outside her home in two years,” she told me. “Her parents have taken her to doctors, but nothing has worked. ” A little girl stood shyly just inside the doorway. He

3、r eyes brightened when she noticed my dog.“This is Bella.” I said. “She does tricks. Would you like to see?”Sally nodded. I motioned with my hand. Bella lay down and then rolled over. Sallys eyes lit up. I showed Sally the hand signals for various commands. She was a natural with Bella, maybe becaus

4、e she couldnt rely on the spoken word herself. Bella sensed that and responded. Soon Sally was able to put Bella through her paces all on her own. I could see her standing taller, more sure of herself each time we met.One morning in March when she was working with Bella, I heard a tiny voice, barely

5、 a whisper, “Good dog. Sally didnt take her eyes off Bella, but I wanted to jump for joy. Sally spoke a little more each week, only to Bella at first, but then to me. Later, she started giving voice commands with her hand signals and her confidence rose.Now, five-year-old Sally stood nervously in fr

6、ont of her kindergarten class, with Bella, my trained dog, sitting calmly by her side. All the eyes of her classmates were focused on Sally. They were waiting for her to speak. It was Juneonly one week of school leftbut they had never heard her voice. Not once.Paragraph 1:But not a word came out.Par

7、agraph 2:The next week, she told me she wanted to try again, looking up at me with determination.写作思路分析通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲了萨莉患有焦虑症，这使她在社交场合不能说话。作者是一名护士，用贝拉来帮助社区里的孩子们，给他们带来安慰和信心，只有狗才能做到这一点。在小狗贝拉的帮助下，萨莉逐渐可以在社交场合说话了。一天，在幼儿园里，大家都在等待着萨莉说话。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：但是，萨莉一个字也没有说出来，所以后文应该是讲述萨莉一言不发的尴尬场景。第二段开头是：第二个星期，她抬头坚

8、定地看着我，告诉我她想再试一次。本段应该写萨莉再次尝试，成功地把自己的好朋友小狗贝拉介绍给了自己的同学们。参考范文Paragraph 1:But not a word came out. Sally had been so excited about putting on a dog show for her class. She had been quite familiar with the hand signals and had practiced for weeks. Now her eyes found mine. I nodded encouragingly. She took

9、a deep breath and opened her mouth. Her mouth - then her whole body - seemed to close in on itself in defeat在失败中自我封闭. Sally stood off to the side站到一边去, head down. I felt awful. Sally returned to her seat, not looking at anyone, not even Bella.Paragraph 2:The next week, she told me she wanted to try

10、again,looking up at me with determination. I asked whether she was sure and suggested it would be OK if she waited till next year. She refused andinsisted givingher presentation that day. Then we headed to Sallys classroom. The kids were sitting in a circle on the floor listening to the teacher. We

11、walked to the front of the room. I shook Sallys hands and stepped back. For a few seconds, she stood silently,staring ather classmates. Finally she whispered, “This is Bella.” Then, a little louder with more confidence. “Bella.”读后续写：带小狗回家原题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

12、We firstset eyes onSpot on a hot June afternoon in Texas. The black-and-white dogmade her way tothe farm where my aunt and my uncle were preparing for their outdoor wedding ceremony. Spot walked behind them all day long and made herself at home in the small farm house. At the end of each day, they h

13、ad to push Spot out of the front door before they left.Their attempts to find Spots owner or a new home provedfruitless, so they invited Spot to the party. Spot had a good time with the guests. And my cousin was also drawn to Spot. While my uncle and my aunt chatted with friends and family, my cousi

14、n played with his new friend-Spot. My aunts eyes returned repeatedly to the happy scene of a kid and a dog, a natural combination.My uncles home had been adog-freehome. My cousin would get down on his knees at the dinner table，raise his arms above his head，bow up and down and say，“Daddy！Please， may

15、we get a dog?Even that failed to change my uncles mind，and he always refused firmly. So my aunt was really sad as she watched my cousin play with Spot happily.When my aunt and my uncle were sitting on the sofa and enjoying plates of beans and cookies，my uncle suddenly said something that surprised m

16、y aunt. “We could live with Spot. What do you think?” Hardly believing her ears, my auntseized the momentbefore itvanished(消失). “Yes!”Then they told the news to my cousin. He was really excited about the news.Hugging the dog, he repeated over and over, “Spot，youre coming home with us!”Then after the

17、 party was over and the guests all left, they collected their new pet and asked my parents to send them to the airport. Rolling through the Texas countryside with hot air blowing through the open car windows, they sang along to the radioat the top of their lungs, Who let the dogs out? Woof, woof, wo

18、of, woof, woof. They didnt really care who let them out. Spot would fly to their home and start a new journey soon.Paragraph 1:Butit turned out thatcarrying Spot home was not easy.Paragraph 2:Letting my aunt and my cousin fly home first, my uncle started finding information about cars for rent.写作思路分

19、析从原文得知，这是非常炎热的德克萨斯的六月，有一只小狗不知道怎么回事来到了我们的农场，我的堂弟非常喜欢这只小狗，但是他的爸爸不喜欢狗，不断请求之后，他的爸爸终于同意养这只小狗。文章最后，我们送堂弟一家三口和小狗去机场，他们要回家。从给出的第一句话“But it turned out that carrying Spot home was not easy.” 可知，小狗不能坐飞机，第一段可以解释原因，一家人的反应，尤其是堂弟的心情。以及解决的方案。从给出的第二句话“Letting my aunt and my cousin fly home first, my uncle started fi

20、nding information about cars for rent.”可知，堂弟和婶婶先坐飞机回家，叔叔打算租车，然后开车带小狗回家。第二段可以写，叔叔租车带小狗回家的准备工作，路上的经历，最后成功回家的感受，一家人的反应。参考范文Paragraph 1:But it turned out that carrying Spot home was not easy. They quickly discovered that all airlines refused to fly dogs in the hot summer. They were afraid that Spot migh

21、t get hurt on the plane in such terrible weather.Hearing the news, my cousin expressed great disappointment. But a promise was a promise. Just as firmly as he had refused the repeated requests for a dog，my unclestood by his words信守诺言.If I have to，I will rent a car to drive Spot home,” he said.Paragr

22、aph 2:Letting my aunt and my cousin fly home first, my uncle started finding information about cars for rent. He had made up his mind to drive home with Spot. My aunt was really surprised at his choice because my uncle was not a dog person. How could he manage to drive the long distance with a dog? My uncle said nothing but prepared some food and then started the journey. And several days later, they finally reached home. My cousin was really happy to see Spot again.Seeingmy cousins smile, my uncle said, That waswhathelped me manage the long distance.”