2022届高考英语三轮冲刺写作之读后续写：斗狼记.docx

1、2022届高考英语三轮冲刺写作之读后续写：斗狼记原题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright，warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch

2、up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly

3、 that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it w

4、as by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep

5、uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side

6、of the road. A bit later，they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所续写短

7、文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。P1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.P2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.参考范文一The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught

8、 up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Macs b

9、icycle. Soon afterwards, after several fruitless attempts to break into the car, the animal ran away. A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die.” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gat

10、hering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful and he couldnt wait to be reunited with his family. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again.参考范文二The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Beck

11、y got out of the car immediately to help him. With nothing at hand, they didnt dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling嗥叫 angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bic

12、ycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock僵局.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight against the wolf. More and more cars stop

13、ped. Some drivers took out sticks from their cars, and some took out knives, and even guns. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran off the road and disappeared in the distance.写作注意问题避免节外生枝，添加不必要的细节要开车,车没油了。警察来了, 开枪把狼杀了。用弓箭把狼射杀了

14、。Mac钻进车, 朋友们来了面对狼,再度陷入险境。情况紧迫, Mac从自行车跳到另一辆车上。车上的couple见状问: 咋了？Mac:我被狼追了！写作素材积累动作：jump, wave, kick, hit, beat, strike, hug, bite, shout, scream, rush, hurry情绪：frightened, fiercely, like crazy, crazily, burst into tears burst out crying, thankful, grateful, gratitudeImmediately, instantly, directly,

15、the moment, the minute = as soon as;give up; be shocked at; hug sb. tightly;as quickly as possible; speed up; rush into the car; be armed with;be under control; breathe deeply; stare at; glare at;a narrow escape; be out of breath; Fear flooded over him.Without a second thought毫不迟疑 safe and sound 平安无

16、恙helpless; be faced with; without hesitation; wear an expression of relief; breathe a sigh of relief.Luckily, the door of the car was hard enough and Mac was safe. Becky threw some food out of the window and Paul pressed the button of the horn to make an alert. Finally, the wolf left and disappeared

17、.Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Macs bicycle. Soon afterwards, after several fruitless attempts to break into the car, the animal ran away.Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight against the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers t

18、ook out sticks from their cars, and some took out knives, and even guns. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran off the road and disappeared in the distance.One of Macs friends took out some meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods.