初中英语记叙文写作课件..ppt

1、Discussion Who do you like best? Could you please say something about him/her? 以以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇80词词左右的英语短文。左右的英语短文。要求如下：要求如下：1.短文内容应包括短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之爱好和使你难忘之处。处。2. 短文中不得出现短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。真实的校名和人名。中考题展示中考题展示 解题步骤：解题步骤：文体文体要点要点词汇词汇时态时态人称人称句型句型过渡过渡语语格式格式词数词

2、数拼写拼写一、人称代词一、人称代词主格主格 I we you he she it they 宾格宾格 me us you him her it themit 的特殊用法的特殊用法指时间指时间: What time is it? Its eight oclock now.指天气指天气: It is a fine day today. It is raining cats and dogs.指距离指距离: Its only 15 minutes drive. How far is it from here?做笼统主语做笼统主语: Whos is it? Oh, its you, Mary.做形式主

3、语做形式主语 : Its no use crying loudly. Its important to learn English.做形式宾语做形式宾语: Do you think it difficult to keep slim? 二、物主代词二、物主代词形容词性形容词性 my your his her its our their名词性名词性 mine yours his hers its ours theirs1名词性物主代词跟名词一样可充当主语、表语、宾语：名词性物主代词跟名词一样可充当主语、表语、宾语：作主语作主语Mine is a new handbag.Hers was a sm

4、all room.作表语作表语That car is ours.These chairs are yours.作宾语作宾语 Look at theirs. You may use mine.2、形容词性物主代词严格来说不是代词，是形容词，因、形容词性物主代词严格来说不是代词，是形容词，因为他们不能作别的成分，为他们不能作别的成分，只能作前置定语只能作前置定语My watch is quite old now.Cant you tell me your story ?Our chairs are different from their chairs?三、指示代词三、指示代词 this, the

5、se, that, those 作主语作主语: This is a special present. 作表语作表语: What he wants is just this.作宾语作宾语: Take these with you.作定语作定语: Have you visited those villages?写人常用句型写人常用句型 外貌：外貌：Shes (with ). She is and She has . She is of. She looks 性格：性格：Shes (but she is) She always/never 爱好爱好 (When she is free,) She l

6、ikes(doing/ to do) Her hobby is(doing) She is good at(doing), she always 难忘之处难忘之处 help strict外貌 She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He has

7、blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.) .性格性格 She is outgoing. She is good-looking but she is a little bit quiet. She is always smiling. She never stops talking.爱好爱好 She likes reading and playing chess. Her hobby is playing the violin. When she is free, she likes singing and dancing. She is good at

8、 drawing. She always draws pictures on weekends.难忘之处 She often helps us (to) do/with the laundry. She is helpful. She is ready to help others. She is very strict with us and we are usually tired after class. However, we have learned a lot from her.范文欣赏 He is one of the cleaners in my school. He is o

9、rdinary, but he is the person I will never forget. He looks really old and his skin is black. He is quiet and I heard that he liked singing very much. I remember that last year there was a big earthquake in Sichuan. Students donated money to help the poor people. He donated 500 yuan. It was a large

10、amount of money for him, I think. But in his mind, there must be something more important. That is called love.写作参考答案 The person Ill never forget is my English teacher. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes h

11、is classes lively and interesting. Hes kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.1.（1315分）符合题目要求，内容完整，层分）符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。2.（912分）基本符合题目要求，内容较完分）基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。量错误。3.（48分）部分符合题目要求，内容不够完分）部分符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。有较多错误。4.（03分）不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清分）不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。楚或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。