Unit 3 Section Ⅴ Writing ppt课件-（2019）新人教版高中英语必修第二册.pptx

1、Section Writing如何写如何写与与网络网络安全相关的博客安全相关的博客互联网早已成为日常生活的重要部分并深刻影响着人们的社交、自我表现、心理状况等诸多方面，因此，人们更应该重视个人信息保护等网络安全问题。本单元通过对互联网利弊的探究，针对网络安全的相关内容以博客的形式提出建议。这些建议包括人们在使用互联网时应注意的事项，并就不明智举动给予劝勉或告诫。以相关主题写作时，要先介绍存在的问题及其不良影响，然后阐述个人观点并给出建议。在提建议时，要做到条理清楚、逻辑严密，所提建议应有较大的实际价值。另外要注意语气委婉、中肯，切忌粗鲁、生硬。【常用表达】1开头句：引出问题/话题Nowaday

2、s, . has become a serious problem.Recently, the problem of. has aroused peoples concern.A number of people seem to think that.It is said that.It is quite obvious that.A recent survey has found that.I am writing to express my views concerning.2过渡句：承上启下I have gone through some terrible experiences onl

3、ine.There are some suggestions for.I would like to suggest/recommend that.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you.As to., I suggest that you should.3结尾句：礼貌表达I hope you will find these suggestions/recommendations helpful/pra

4、ctical/useful.I trust you will take my suggestion into account.I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.书面表达随着社会的发展和互联网的普及，许多不文明用语也在网上流传开来。假定你是李华，最近学校网站正在征集英文建议，请你就“网络不文明用语”话题写一篇英文博客，内容要点如下：1现状；2危害(损害网络环境，影响身心健康等)；3提出建议(远离不文明用语，共创网络文明环境等)。注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：网络环境the Internet environm

5、ent，不文明的uncivilized_教你审题本篇属于应用文，要求学生用英语写一篇博客。第一步：根据提示确定内容要点；第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词(词组)；第三步：根据提示要点以及关键词进行遣词造句，注意时态、语态、人称；第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的过渡词、连接词，使文章衔接自然，注意书写规范。 名师指津本篇作文包含了所有的要点，结构清晰，语句连续，点出了问题的严重性并提出了合理建议。【1】交代问题产生的背景。【2】非限制性定语从句的运用强调了网络不文明现象的恶劣影响。【3】加强了文章的逻辑性与连贯性。【4】分条陈述建议，使得文章结构更加清晰、内容更加完整。【5】以祈使句表达对未来的美

6、好愿景及倡议。范文展示With the development of society, more and more people become lost in the Internet and like chatting online. 【1】 As a result, lots of uncivilized words come into being, which does great harm to our society 【2】. On one hand 【3】， they damage the Internet environment. On the other hand 【3】， t

7、hey influence teenagers physical and mental health, which will have a bad effect on their development.As high school students, we need to take measures to solve the problem. Firstly 【4】， we should call for our classmates and friends to keep away from uncivilized words and express our ideas politely.

8、 Secondly 【4】， we should report this problem to the government to ask for some help. Lets work together to create a better network atmosphere. 【5】 写作训练假定你是李华，是某中学学生。请你根据以下倡议书的内容写一篇英文博客，谈谈作为中学生如何履行网络文明公约。倡议书为了创造良好的网络环境，我提倡大家文明上网，做文明网民。1浏览正规网站，拒绝不良信息；2合理安排时间，不沉迷于网络；3友好聊天，不侵犯他人隐私。让我们共同携手，让网络更好地为我们的学习和生

9、活服务。注意：1词数80左右；2开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：网络环境network environment，文明网民civilized netizenEveryone，I am Li Hua. _One possible version：Everyone，I am Li Hua. In order to create a favorable network environment, I think we should be civilized netizens. Therefore, first we should only visit regular websites and r

10、efuse harmful information. Second, we ought to make good use of our time and not to become addicted to the Internet. Third, we should be friendly to our epals and respect each others privacy.It is our duty to do what we can to make sure the Internet plays a positive part in our study and life.假定你是李华

11、，是一名高中生。随着科技的发展，iPad已成为中学生的新宠。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容必须包括以下几点：1使用iPad对学习的好处；2对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响；3提出自己的建议并说明理由。注意：1词数80左右；2开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor，Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them._Yours sincerely，Li HuaDear

12、 Editor， Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read ebooks on the screen. Obviously, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening

13、. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games. In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help imp

14、rove our study. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore, concentration is greatly needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way. Yours sincerely， Li Hua假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom得知你在生日时收到远方叔叔寄来的能将中文翻译成英文的智能

15、机器人，特写信向你询问。请你给他回一封电子邮件，向Tom介绍这款机器人，内容包括： 1.外形特点； 2.功能及用途。 注意：词数80左右。_Dear Tom， I am glad to tell you something about the intelligent robot that my uncle gave me as a birthday gift. The robot called Lili looks like a young girl with big eyes and long hair. What attracts me most is that it can transl

16、ate Chinese into English, which is very helpful to me. Whatever I express in Chinese, the robot will translate it into English by itself at once. Therefore, every time I am free, I will play with it to practice my English. I am fond of it very much and it is the best gift I have ever received. Yours

17、， Li Hua阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 The nicer their neighborhood sidewalks are, the more active people will be, according to a new study from Detroit. “While a number of studies have looked at the presence of sidewalks and their association (关联) with physical activity, very few have examined the cond

18、ition of the sidewalks，” said Jamila L. Kwarteng, who led the new study. Kwarteng and her coworkers studied 919 adults in poor and middleclass neighborhoods in Detroit, asking them how much they exercised and how often. The researchers also walked around the neighborhoods and studied the condition o

19、f sidewalks and streets.According to the results, people who lived near more uneven (不平坦的) sidewalks would be less active. That was especially the case for younger people, “We found that better sidewalk condition was associated with increases in physical activity among women and men，” Kwarteng said.

20、 Kwarteng said although its possible that sidewalk condition affects how much time people spend outside being active, its only one way. “Another reason for the result is that people hating physical activity choose to live in neighborhoods that are rundown (破旧的)，” Kwarteng said. “Maybe thats because

21、its less expensive to live there.”Following a neighborhood over a long time and seeing if activity levels change with sidewalk condition would be a better way of understanding how much effect the sidewalks have. “This study makes sure an association between sidewalk condition and physical activity，”

22、 Kwarteng said. “Further studies should try to explain why this is.”Most homeowners with the freedom to choose between neighborhoods will probably pick the one in better condition. “Good living environments should be available to all people，” Kwarteng said. “Cities should implement (贯彻) policies tha

23、t keep sidewalks in good condition to increase physical activity among people.”_ A new study shows that the better sidewalks are, the more often people will take exercise. (要点1) According to the study, people living near uneven sidewalks would take less physical activity, which was especially for yo

24、unger people. (要点2) Another reason is that people not liking physical activity tend to live in old neighborhoods for its cheaper to live there. (要点3) Kwarteng thinks good living environments should be offered to all people and the government should make sidewalks in good condition to let people do more physical activity.(要点4)