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1、Writing 中考英语专题复习中考英语专题复习书面表达书面表达 1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性. 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型掌握常用的连接词或句型,令作文更有灵气令作文更有灵气. 3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信.学习目标学习目标一、考试要求一、考试要求 书面表达考查学生综合运用英语的能力，特别是表达和传递信息的能力。书面表达考查学生综合运用英语的能力，特别是表达和传递信息的能力。根据根据课程标准课程标准要求，初中阶段书面表达要求学生围绕所给的文字信息、要求，初中阶段书面表达要求学生围绕所给的文字信息、大意和要求，

2、用自己所掌握的语言进行表达，所写内容要大意和要求，用自己所掌握的语言进行表达，所写内容要切中题意、文理切中题意、文理通顺、语言准确、结构完整、层次分明、段落清晰、体裁正确、格式规范通顺、语言准确、结构完整、层次分明、段落清晰、体裁正确、格式规范书写工整、拼写和语法正确，大小写和标点无误，词数符合要求。书写工整、拼写和语法正确，大小写和标点无误，词数符合要求。二、评分标准二、评分标准一档（一档（8-10分分)：内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。：内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。二档二档 (6-7分）：内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错分）：内容切题

3、、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错 误较少。误较少。三档（三档（4-5分）：内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。分）：内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。四档（四档（1-3分）：有一定内容，但语法错误较多。分）：有一定内容，但语法错误较多。（注意书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过（注意书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分；单词拼写错误全卷扣分不分；单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过得超过2分分)Step 1Step 1. .要求与标准要求与标准1 1、不知道怎样写不知道怎样写2 2、不、不知道写什么知道写什么3 3、写出的句子不正确（人称写出的句子不正确（人称时态不对，语序不

4、对）时态不对，语序不对）4 4、不会写、不会写 Step 2. .写作写作难点难点 Traditional Chinese festivals (中国传统节日中国传统节日):the Spring Festivalthe Lantern Festival the Qingming Festivalthe Dragon Boat Festivalthe Mid-autumn Daythe Chongyang FestivalTopic the Spring FestivalWhen is it? in January or FebruaryWhat do you think of it? In m

5、y opinion,/ I think the festival is exciting/ important/ meaningful/ interesting/ amazing/ great/ I feel happy/ excited/ cheerful/ pleased/ What do people usually do?clean the houseput up chunlianput up chuanghuabuy new clothesshoot off fireworksget together and have a big dinnervisit relatives and

6、friends/pay a New Year call（拜年）get lucky moneythe meaning of the Spring Festivalring out the old year and get new（辞旧迎新）（辞旧迎新）give the best wishes to othersget together The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out

7、the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is fa

8、r away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. Its interesting and exciting for us to shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Whats more, children often get lucky money from their e

9、lders. They feel very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time.The Spring Festival The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes

10、in January or February.(P1) Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy Its time to get together. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Children often get lucky money from their elders

11、. They feel very happy.(P2) The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time. (P3) Time and feelings秘诀一：三段式结构秘诀一：三段式结构 ActivitiesMeanings Step 3Step 3. .写作技巧指导写作技巧指导Activities(P2)Meanin

12、gs (P3)Time and feelings(P1)Main ideas要点要点 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully befo

13、re it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We often shoot off fireworks to celebrate the

14、 new year. We must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. I

15、ts cheerful time. 内容要点包括：内容要点包括： 1. 1. 节日时间节日时间 2. 2. 节日活动节日活动 3. 3. 节日意义节日意义1.要点齐全可适当补充要点齐全可适当补充2.表达清楚流畅表达清楚流畅3.语言无错误语言无错误秘诀二：要点原则秘诀二：要点原则 ,秘诀三：逻辑秘诀三：逻辑 关联词关联词 Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses careful

16、ly before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We often shoot off fireworks to celebr

17、ate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. whats more, children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy. 关联词作用：文章更通顺并符合逻辑关联词作用：文章更通顺并符合逻辑1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand., not onlybut also.2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror.

18、 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, though, after all 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so5.表示条件表示条件: if, 6.表示列举表示列举: for example, for instance, such as, like7.表示顺序表示顺序: First,. Second,. Third,. Firstly,. Secondly,. Thirdly,. First of all,. Then,. Next,. Finally,.8.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, in fact 9.表示结论表示结论:

19、 In a word,.10.个人总结：个人总结：In my opinion,. I think.常用常用 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses car

20、efully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. Its interesting for us to shoot of

21、f fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Whats more children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give

22、 the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time.秘诀四：语秘诀四：语 法法重点关注：重点关注：时态，人称时态，人称, , 名词名词/ /动词的单复数动词的单复数1.It usually come in January or February. 2.Its time to ring out the old year and gets new. 3.we on the doors puted up chunlian. 4.Everyone is go home to get together. 5.we shoot

23、off fireworks is interesting and exciting 6.I best/very like the Spring Festival. 7.They are feel very happy7.They feel very happy.动词错误动词错误6.I like the Spring Festival best/very much.汉式英语汉式英语 5.Its interesting and exciting for us to shoot off fireworks.句子结构错误句子结构错误 4.Everyone goes home to get togeth

24、er.人称错误人称错误 3.We put up chunlian on the doors .语序错误语序错误 2.Its time to ring out the old year and get new.动词用法错误动词用法错误 1.It usually comes in January or February.时态错误时态错误 常见错误常见错误 1. 1.The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. 2.It usually comes in/on 3.Its time to (ring out

25、 the old year and get new). 4.People usually do We also 5. It is interesting/exciting/ for us to 6. Everyone goes home to get together with their family though someone is far away from home. 7. (activity 1). Whats more/ Besides/ In addition, (activity 2). 8. It is our duty to respect the traditions

26、and make Chinese culture known to the world. 9.I like best/very much. 秘诀五：亮点秘诀五：亮点 万能句型万能句型Useful sentence patterns: 秘诀六：书写工整美观秘诀六：书写工整美观十二字秘诀：十二字秘诀：结构结构+ +要点要点+ +逻辑逻辑+ +语法语法+ +亮点亮点+书写书写解密四：书面表达的技巧解密四：书面表达的技巧structure +key points +logic +grammar +shiny points + handwriting假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Maria对中国的传统节日中

27、秋节很感兴趣,希望你给她写封信介绍中秋节。信中应包含以下要点：1. 中秋节是中国重要的传统节日之一；2. 中秋节的时间是每年的农历八月十五（August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar(农历)；3. 人们在中秋节吃月饼，赏月并把祝福送给亲人和朋友；4. 自己对中秋节的认识与节日的意义。注意： 1. 词数：80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Step 3. .Writing practiceWriting practice3.Its time to 4.People usually do We al

28、so The beginning The body The ending 8.Its time to 9.It is our duty to and make Chinese culture known to the world. 10.I think its 11.I Like best/very much1.The Festival is 2.It usually comes in/onThe structure of the article (文章的结构）文章的结构）6.(activity 1). Whats more/ Besides/ In addition, (activity 2

29、).5.It is interesting/exciting/ for us to 写作关键：写作关键： 1. 1. 先布局构思，提炼出要点（节日时间活动与意义）。先布局构思，提炼出要点（节日时间活动与意义）。 2. 2. 灵活运用常用句型，使文章富于变化，增加感染力。灵活运用常用句型，使文章富于变化，增加感染力。 3. 3. 有条理，少错误，尽量使用简单的、熟悉的句子来表达。有条理，少错误，尽量使用简单的、熟悉的句子来表达。 4. 4. 书写工整，完成后认真检查。书写工整，完成后认真检查。7.Everyone goes home to get together with their fami

30、ly though someone is far away from home.Dear Maria, Im very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now Let me tell you something about the Middle Autumn Festival._Yours,Li Hua 短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。畅，语言基本无误。9-109-10分分短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，短文较通

31、顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误。语言有少量错误。7-87-8分分能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。较多错误，但表达尚能达意。5-65-6分分仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。错误，影响意思表达。3-43-4分分仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。0-20-2分分Step4 展与评展与评 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Maria对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣，希望你给她写封信介绍端午节。信中应包含以下要点： 1. 端午节是中国重要

32、的传统节日之一； 2. 端午节的时间是每年的农历五月初五； 3. 人们庆祝端午节是为了纪念中国古代伟大的诗人屈原； 4. 人们在端午节吃棕子、赛龙舟； 5. 自己对中华民族传统节日的认识。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Maria,Im very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now Let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat

33、Festival._Yours,Li Hua要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点1.要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。2.结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话3.逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first,second,third,fin

34、ally等还可以使用高级点的，如firstofall(首先)，inaddition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思)，inaword,allinall（表示总结的）。转折：but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。4.语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。5.亮点：但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一

35、点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。1.语序错误语序错误 He often on foot goes home. He every day works hard. I am in Grad

36、e 8, Class 5.2. 动词用法错误动词用法错误 I like play basketball. He can sings songs.3. 代词错误代词错误 He favorite animals are pandas. He name is Tom. Hes name is Tom.4. 汉式英语汉式英语 He best likes animal is giraffes. There are three boys are swimming in the river. There is going to have a football match in our school. The

37、re are twenty people agree with me. 5. 时态错误时态错误 They go to HK last Sunday.Tomorrow we are meet at the school gate 6. 人称错误人称错误 I like pandas because it is cute. 7. 连接词的错误连接词的错误 Because I was ill, so I didnt go to school that day.8. 搭配错误搭配错误 He is friendly for us.9. 形容词和介词的用法错误形容词和介词的用法错误 I often by b

38、ike to school. I for your idea.10. 冠词错误冠词错误 His mother is worker. You are good boy. 11. 单复数单复数 I think she is one of the best singer in the world. 12.逻辑关系混乱逻辑关系混乱 At the age of seven, his grandfather died.13. 错词错词 belive; fell lonely, 14. 篇章问题等篇章问题等对于基础薄弱生1.写写对对句式积累，帮助训练孩子们能够句式积累，帮助训练孩子们能够熟练正确地使用简单句

39、。熟练正确地使用简单句。2.切题（准确）切题（准确）-内容（朴实）内容（朴实）-句式（简单）句式（简单）-词汇（朴素）词汇（朴素）-细节（正确）细节（正确）对于优秀生1. 写写好好2. 切题（准确）切题（准确）-内容（朴实但内容（朴实但有新意）有新意）-句式（多样并流畅）句式（多样并流畅）-词汇（丰富并准确）词汇（丰富并准确）-细细节（完全正确）节（完全正确）1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand., not onlybut also.2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror. 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, thoug

40、h, after all 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so5.表示条件表示条件: if, 6.表示列举表示列举: for example, for instance, such as, like7.表示顺序表示顺序: First,. Second,. Third,. Firstly,. Secondly,. Thirdly,. First of all,. Then,. Next,. Finally,.8.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, in fact 9.表示结论表示结论: In a word,.10.个人总结：个人总结：In my o

41、pinion,. I think.常用常用谋篇布局写好篇章结构 Middle 正文Ending 结尾concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。supporting sentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论topic sentence 主题句主题句 -说出文中的要点、核心问题Beginning开头开头 框架框架结构结构一一 开头：开头：引出话题 1.finish my study 2.start my new life二二 正文：正文：从学习、生活上谈论新年计划 1.work harder 2.after school activities 3

42、.do more exercise三三 结尾：结尾：表感想 2.2.合理利用过渡词合理利用过渡词（1 1）表顺序：）表顺序：first of all, above all, first of all, above all, Firstly.Secondly.Lastly.Firstly.Secondly.Lastly.to begin/start with,at the same time,later, to begin/start with,at the same time,later, soon,finally/in the end/at last,after a soon,finally

43、/in the end/at last,after a while,after.,before.while,after.,before.（2 2）表并列和转折：）表并列和转折：and,both.and.,not only.but and,both.and.,not only.but also.,either.or.,neither.nor.,with,however.also.,either.or.,neither.nor.,with,however.（3 3）表总结：）表总结：In a/one word,As a result,As/So far as I In a/one word,As

44、a result,As/So far as I know,Its well known that.,Its clear that.,so,in know,Its well known that.,Its clear that.,so,in short,In my opinion,I hope/think.short,In my opinion,I hope/think.First of all,you said you You also said you The beginning The body The ending I hope you ,Best wishes!I know it is

45、nt easy ,butThe structure of the article (文章的结构）文章的结构）At last, if you I think doing . is.Youd better.Why dont youYou canYou couldnt.,either.写作关键：写作关键： 1. 1. 先复述先复述mousemouse的问题，再针对其问题逐条给出建议。的问题，再针对其问题逐条给出建议。 2. 2. 灵活运用提建议的常用句型，使文章富于变化，增加感染力。灵活运用提建议的常用句型，使文章富于变化，增加感染力。 3. 3. 有条理，少错误，尽量使用简单的、熟悉的句子来表达。有条理，少错误，尽量使用简单的、熟悉的句子来表达。 4. 4. 书写工整，完成后认真检查。书写工整，完成后认真检查。