（写作公开课）高中英语读后续写(The-Continuation-Writing)课件.pptx

1、The Continuation WritingcrowbeakSuddenly , he found a water bottle, but the opening was too small for the crows beak to fit in.The wise crow found a lot of stones and put them in the bottle , making the water come up.the storybehaviorfeelingsbefore taskcharactersfirst tasksecond taskbehaviorhelp the

2、 plane; show the light feelingslook after goatsbehaviorhappy/proud/excited/promise; cant show the light nervous/calm/worried/MarieFrench soldiersGerman soldiersthe storybefore taskcharactersfirst tasksecond taskhelp the plane; show the light look after goatshappy/proud/excited/promise; cant show the

3、 light nervous/calm/worried/MarieFrench soldiersGerman soldiersActivity 1 : Predict what happened next.Tip 1：Use the basic information to predict the ending in a logical way . conflict resolutionPara7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._Para 8: Noiselessly she got out of the cot

4、tage and set fire to it. _Suddenly a good idea hit her.Activity 2. Present the first sentences of the next two paragraphs to check whether you have a logical guessing.Para 7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._Why did Marie feel more and more anxious?And how did the author bring

5、 out her anxiety? Construct the content of the storyConstruct the content of the storyActivity: Review the text and find out ways to express the feelings according to the details.Im helping the plane; wondering did as told;heard a plane flyingsat still;couldnt show the light; I wont fail a large for

6、est;night fell;two German soldiers with guns; forbidden;Her feelingshappyproudnervousfirmcalmworriedactionsthoughtswordssurroundings?more and more anxiousConstruct the content of the storyactionsthoughtssurroundingswordsTip 3: The change of feelings can be brought out through words, thoughts, action

7、s , surroundings and so on.Activity: Create the details by yourself according to the four ways to express the feelings .Continue the story Para 7: With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious._ _Requirements: 1.应使用应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；续写完成后，请用下划线标出

8、你所使用的关键词语；3.字数字数70词左右。词左右。Evaluate the continuation Checklist（ ）Have I included at least 5 of the given words and underlined them？（ ）Have I described people and things in four ways?（ ）Have I used appropriate transitional words（过渡语）（过渡语） to make the paragraph coherent?（ ）Have I used the simple past t

9、ense to narrate（叙述）（叙述） the story?（ ）Are there any grammatical errors in plurals and verb forms?Para. 7 With time approaching, Marie got more and more anxious. She quietly approached the little window，however, the German soldier suddenly turned over. Marie held her breath, standing still. Fortunatel

10、y, they didnt wake up. As time went by, the anxiety in her heart accumulated. “ Tonight is very important.” the words from the French soldier echoed around her ears. “I wont fail!” she repeated it firmly, thinking about how to show the light instead. Suddenly, a good idea hit her.1. Polish your continuation writing. 2. Finish the second paragraph and evaluate it by yourself.Assignment