中考英语写作话题4-计划与安排课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧4巧用短语巧用短语分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面年中考真题的书面表达可知，与表达可知，与“计划与安排计划与安排”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：如何合理安排某事，如角度：如何合理安排某事，如2014宿迁；假期计划。结合全国宿迁；假期计划。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：人生规划。中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：人生规划。命题探索教材链接 (2019黄石改编黄石改编)假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你

2、的同学假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件写了一封邮件询问你暑期的安排询问你暑期的安排，请你给请你给Tom回封邮件回封邮件，告知，告知你的计划你的计划。 审主题：暑期的计划与安排审主题：暑期的计划与安排典例剖析典例剖析审文体：应用文审文体：应用文审时态：一般将来时审时态：一般将来时审时态：第一人称审时态：第一人称一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审要点：除以上审要点：除以上3点外，根据点外，根据第第4点省略号可知另外需要自点省略号可知另外需要自由发挥至少由发挥至少2点内容。如：计点内容。如：计划和朋友一起做锻炼；学习划和朋友一起做锻炼；学习弹吉他，发展自己的爱好；弹吉他

3、，发展自己的爱好；邀请对方暑假来玩邀请对方暑假来玩要点：要点：1. 读几本好书；读几本好书；2. 参加社会实践活动；参加社会实践活动； 3. 帮父母做家务；帮父母做家务； 4. (自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)参考词汇：经典文学作品参考词汇：经典文学作品classic literature works 社会实践活动社会实践活动social practice activities一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句注意事项：注意事项：1. 词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。不得出现真实的地名

4、、校名、人名等信息。Dear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you. _Yours，Li hua一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. I will spend my time on meaningful things. (扩写原因扩写原因) I will spend my time on meaningful things because time is so valuable for me now.2. You can make a plan before you start to do it. (扩写结果扩写结果)You can make a pla

5、n before you start to do it. Only in this way can you get close to your dream step by step.合理安排某事合理安排某事角度角度1扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3. They will make a survey first. (扩写目的扩写目的)They will make a survey first to learn about the publics thoughts.角度角度一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. I will give away my money t

6、o the charity.(扩写原因扩写原因) _ _2. You can look up some materials before you start to write the report.(扩写结果扩写结果) _ _ _I will give away my money to the charity because in this way, I can help others.You can look up some materials before you start to write the report. Only in this way can you get enough

7、materials to write for your report.句句 子子 扩扩 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3. He will ask his teacher about the competition.(扩写目的扩写目的) _ _He will ask his teacher about the competition to make full preparations for it.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4. Next year, I am going to take up a new hobby.(扩写想法和做法扩写想法和做法)Next yea

8、r, I am going to take up a new hobby. I think singing is a great activity, so I am going to learn to sing.5. Reading books is a good way to get knowledge.(扩写计划扩写计划)Reading books is a good way to get knowledge, so I want to read more books to improve myself.人生规划人生规划角度角度2扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.

9、 I will work hard in the new year.(扩写想法和做法扩写想法和做法) _ _5. I decide to spend more time with my family. (扩写计划扩写计划) _ _6. I want to be healthier than before.(扩写计划扩写计划) _ _I will work hard in the new year. I think making a plan is good for my study, so I will make a plan first.I decide to spend more time

10、 with my family. I will share my happiness and sadness with them.I want to be healthier than before, so I am going to eat healthy food and do sports.句句 子子 扩扩 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。良好的开端是成功的一半。7. No pain, no gain. 一份耕耘，一份收获。一份耕耘，一份收获。8. Nothing is impossi

11、ble to a willing mind./Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。有志者，事竟成。9. Great hopes make great man. 伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。速记速记俗语谚语俗语谚语一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段How should we _(点出主题点出主题)? As students, _(建议建议1). Besides，_(建议建议2). At last, _(建议建议3). If so, Im sure we wi

12、ll do a very good job. make use of our time properly/use our pocket money wisely/.语语 段段 练练 习习 1合理安排某事合理安排某事 we should make a plan every day/we should save money/.we should listen carefully in class/use our pocket money to do some meaningful things like buying books/.we can spend some time in develop

13、ing our interest/we can give away our money to the people in need/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Id like to make some resolutions for my high school. First, Im going to _(计划计划1), because _(原因原因). Second, Im going to _(计划计划2). Third, Im going to _(计划计划3), so _(目的目的)get up early in the morning/get up early to d

14、o exercise/.语语 段段 练练 习习 2 2人生规划人生规划 I used to stay up late and be late for school/I want to be energetic/.have a healthier diet and exercise more/live a healthier life/. work harder in the new school/study hard at school/.I can do better at school/I will go into a good university/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写

15、好句成篇章成篇章Dear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you. Now Im going to tell you my plan for the summer vacation.First of all, I want to read some meaningful and good books. Such as classic literature works or grammar books. Maybe these books will be helpful for my future study. Also, Im going to take part

16、 in some social practice activities at the weekend. I think they are useful 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句for my future work. Then, I want to spend more time helping my parents do some housework. Finally, I plan to go to the park with my friends every morning or afternoon for exercise.I hope you can come to H

17、uangshi this summer vacation. At that time, I will be your tour guide.Best wishes to you!Yours，Li Hua(2020原创原创)初中生活即将结束，你将步入人生下一阶段。在今后初中生活即将结束，你将步入人生下一阶段。在今后的生活中，为了成为一个更好的自己，你对自己有哪些承诺呢？请根的生活中，为了成为一个更好的自己，你对自己有哪些承诺呢？请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。写作练兵写作练兵我对自己我对自己的承诺的承诺1. 高中更加努力学习，争取进入理想的大学；高中更加努力学

18、习，争取进入理想的大学；2. 每天打扫房间；每天打扫房间；3. 远离垃圾食品；远离垃圾食品；4. (自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)注意事项：注意事项：1. 词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵My junior high school days will be over._写作练兵写作练兵 Before setting out on new journey, I want to make promises to myself.I promis

19、e I will study harder in senior high school. Ill try my best to get into my dream university. I promise Ill clean my room every day. Ill stay away from junk food. I promise Ill never talk back loudly to my parents. Ill try to help out at home. _写作练兵写作练兵 I promise Ill get on well with my friends. Ill

20、 keep calm when we have disagreements. Maybe these promises are hard to keep. But to improve myself, Ill try my best.巧用短语利用不定式短语、介词短语或形容词短语等来增加句子利用不定式短语、介词短语或形容词短语等来增加句子的句式，从而使句子表达更加多样化。的句式，从而使句子表达更加多样化。巧用短语1. 利用不定式短语：利用不定式短语：My parents encouraged me. They told me to believe in myself. My parents en

21、couraged me to believe in myself.2. 利用介词短语：利用介词短语：You can write well by reading more. You should read more in order to write well.3. 利用形容词短语：利用形容词短语：We got to school after a threehour trip. We were tired but happy. We got to school after a threehour trip, tired but happy.句式连接范例句式连接范例 巧用短语1.在老师的帮助下，我

22、的英语取得了很大的进步。在老师的帮助下，我的英语取得了很大的进步。 _ _2.现在很多衣服在促销，它们很漂亮但不贵。现在很多衣服在促销，它们很漂亮但不贵。 _3.众所周知，志愿者在这些活动中起了很重要的作用。众所周知，志愿者在这些活动中起了很重要的作用。 _ _小试牛刀小试牛刀 With the help of my teacher, I have made great progress in my English.Many clothes are on sale now, beautiful but not expensive. As is known to all, volunteers play an important role in these activities.巧用短语4.为了保障我们的安全，我们的学校不允许我们游泳。为了保障我们的安全，我们的学校不允许我们游泳。 _5.不论生活多么艰难，她从未放弃过。不论生活多么艰难，她从未放弃过。 _ In order to keep us safe, our school doesnt allow us to swim.No matter how hard the life is, she never gives up.