中考英语书面写作话题7-经历与感受课件.pptx

1、目录命题探索命题探索1 1背词汇背词汇2 2写句子写句子3 3写段落写段落4 4成篇章成篇章5 5写作练兵写作练兵6 6 分析云南近分析云南近6年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“经历与感受经历与感受”这这一话题共涉及过一话题共涉及过6次，次， 2017省卷省卷“A Special Day”、 2019昆明昆明“On my parents birthday”、 2018昆明昆明“A small thing”、 2017昆明昆明A“One day in my childhood”、 2015昆明昆明A“The good old days”、 2014昆明昆明A“A ha

2、ppy time”，全国近年中考真题针对自己或者他人的经历和感受全国近年中考真题针对自己或者他人的经历和感受也也进行进行了了考查。考查。命题探索命题探索背词汇背词汇开头句开头句1. 劳拉劳拉曾经曾经丢了钱包，担心了好几天。丢了钱包，担心了好几天。Laura once_her wallet， and _for days.2. 在我六年级的时候，我参加了一个钢琴比赛。在我六年级的时候，我参加了一个钢琴比赛。When I was in the sixth grade， I_ _ _ _.lost joined a piano competitionworried写句子写句子中间句中间句经历经历3.

3、米奇像一个普通人，但他总是米奇像一个普通人，但他总是试图试图面对任何危险。面对任何危险。Mickey was like a common man， but he always_ _ _any danger. 4. 从从那那以以后，我是如此害怕以至于我几乎不能清晰地思考。后，我是如此害怕以至于我几乎不能清晰地思考。I was_scared_I could hardly think clearly after that. tried to face sothat5. 第二天，彼得带着勇气而不是恐惧去参加足球训练。第二天，彼得带着勇气而不是恐惧去参加足球训练。 The next day， Peter

4、 went to soccer practice with courage_ _fear in his heart.6. 她很担心，因为她让父母失望了。她很担心，因为她让父母失望了。She was worried_she disappointed her parents. rather thanbecause感受感受7. 我和爷爷一起喂鸡。真是太有趣了。我和爷爷一起喂鸡。真是太有趣了。I_ _ _with my grandpa. It was so much fun.8. 一切都是关于机器人的，我对此不感兴趣。一切都是关于机器人的，我对此不感兴趣。Everything was about ro

5、bots and Im not_ _that.9. 我真的很累，因为我昨晚学习到半夜。我真的很累，因为我昨晚学习到半夜。Im really tired because I _ _ _ last night. fed the chickensinterested instudied until midnight10. 我的女儿更理解我，尽管她也为要舍弃某些玩具而感到难过。我的女儿更理解我，尽管她也为要舍弃某些玩具而感到难过。My daughter was more understanding，_ she also felt sad to _ _ certain toys.11. 他非常想念他的父

6、母，并且他经常感到孤独和不快乐。他非常想念他的父母，并且他经常感到孤独和不快乐。He_ _ _ so much and he often felt lonely and unhappy. althoughpart withmissed his parents结尾句结尾句12. 这对我来说是非常有用的一课。这对我来说是非常有用的一课。This was a very _ _for me. 13. 这食物尝起来很好，因为我太饿了。这食物尝起来很好，因为我太饿了。The food_ _because I was so hungry.14. 我真的很喜欢在镇上到处走走。我真的很喜欢在镇上到处走走。 I

7、really enjoyed _ _ the town. useful lessontasted great walking around 语段训练语段训练1：自己的经历与感受：自己的经历与感受When I was in the sixth grade, I joined a piano competition. I _(练习四个小时练习四个小时) every day and my piano teacher came _(一周三次一周三次) to help me. Then the big day finally arrived. I was so nervous when they _(叫

8、我的名字叫我的名字). I _(站了起来站了起来)and started to play. While I was playing, everyone sat still and listened. I played the song practiced for four hoursthree times a weekcalled my namestood up写段落写段落_(没有任何错误没有任何错误). Then I _(等候等候) them to call out the winner. When I heard my name, _(我的心跳得如此快我的心跳得如此快). I though

9、t I would _(停止呼吸停止呼吸). I couldnt believe it. I won! It was the happiest day of my life!without any mistakeswaited formy heart beat so quicklystop breathing语段训练语段训练2：他人的经历与感受：他人的经历与感受 Laura once lost her wallet， and worried for days. She _(很害怕把这件事告诉她的父很害怕把这件事告诉她的父母母). She even walked three miles to s

10、chool each day _(因为因为) she didnt have any money. She just kept thinking， “If I tell my parents， theyll be angry！”_(最后最后)， she talked to her parents and they were really understanding. Her dad said he sometimeswas afraid to tell her parents about itbecauseIn the end_(他自己会犯粗心的错误他自己会犯粗心的错误). They got h

11、er a new wallet and asked her to be more careful. “I will always _(记记住住分享我的分享我的问题问题) in the future！” Laura says.made careless mistakes himselfremember to share my problems作文：作文：(2019昆明昆明)On my parents birthday某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母感恩父母”为主题的征为主题的征文活动，请你用英文以文活动，请你用英文以 “On my parents b

12、irthday”为题目写一篇记叙为题目写一篇记叙文投稿，内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。文投稿，内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。成篇章成篇章范文范文点评点评On my parents birthday August 8th was my mothers birthd

13、ay. My father and I wanted to give her surprising birthday presents.文章采用文章采用“总总分分总总”的结构展开叙述。的结构展开叙述。范文范文点评点评 In the morning，my father and I went shopping and bought a very nice cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food. When we got home， my father cooked some nice food in the kitchen. I

14、went to my room to make a birthday card. I wanted to tell my mother that I loved her very much. Then I wrote in the card， “I love you， my dear mother！” I put it on her pillow， then we cleaned the room. We felt very tired，but we were very happy. My mother got home. We said， “Happy Birthday！” My mothe

15、r smiled. We had supper together. My mother said， “Thank you，my daughter！” How happy we were！第二段用一般过去时，第二段用一般过去时，时间状语从句和宾语从句时间状语从句和宾语从句等，讲述了事情的经过。等，讲述了事情的经过。结尾用感叹句表达结尾用感叹句表达我和我和家人的家人的感受感受。 My Happiness提示：幸福是什么？幸福可能是同学间互相帮助的感动，幸福提示：幸福是什么？幸福可能是同学间互相帮助的感动，幸福也可能是老师赞扬时内心的激动，幸福也可能是父母一也可能是老师赞扬时内心的激动，幸福也可能是

16、父母一个微个微小小的举动。请你以的举动。请你以“My Happiness”为题，叙述一件为题，叙述一件发生在你生活中令你感到幸福的事。发生在你生活中令你感到幸福的事。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作练兵写作练兵My Happiness_ Everyone has his or her own happy thing. So do I.It was a sunny day. After having four classes

17、, I felt very hungry. So I decided to buy something to eat in the market. When I waited in line, I suddenly found that I forgot taking any money with me. Then I had to go back to my classroom with hunger. After a while, I saw a man coming into my classroom. That was my father who carried a box in his left hand. He came to me and said, “You must be hungry, _dear, I forgot to give you money this morning. Eat now.”I felt so warm at that moment. It deeply touched me. Sometimes, maybe a common and small thing would make me happy. And that is my happiness.