中考英语写作话题6-健康与安全课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧6巧用比较等级巧用比较等级分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面年中考真题的书面表达可知，与表达可知，与“健康与安全健康与安全”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：如何保证自身安全，如角度：如何保证自身安全，如2016宿迁；如何保持健康，如宿迁；如何保持健康，如2015盐城。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：如盐城。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：如何保护视力。何保护视力。命题探索教材链接健康：七健康

2、：七(上上)Unit 6 Food and lifestyle安全：八安全：八(上上)Unit 8 Natural disasters(2016宿迁宿迁)为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“如何如何提升自我保护能力提升自我保护能力”的讨论。请以的讨论。请以“How to protect ourselves”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容必须包括以下要点：为题，写一篇英语短文。内容必须包括以下要点： 审标题：保护自己的方法审标题：保护自己的方法审文体：说明文审文体：说明文审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时典例剖析典例剖析一阶 审

3、好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审要点：除了以上审要点：除了以上3点外，还需要自由发挥至点外，还需要自由发挥至少少2点内容。如：处于困难中时，立即向警察点内容。如：处于困难中时，立即向警察求助；要有安全意识求助；要有安全意识1. 尊敬师长，与同学友好相处；尊敬师长，与同学友好相处；2. 公共场所，举止文明，公共场所，举止文明，不追逐打闹；不追逐打闹； 3. 不乱交网友，不泄露个人信息；不乱交网友，不泄露个人信息；4. (自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)注意事项：注意事项：1. 词数词数90左右，标题与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；左右，标题与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的

4、地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句How to protect ourselves_Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. We can shout to our parents and let them know about the danger.We can shout to our parents to let them know about the

5、 danger.2. Sixteenyearolds shouldnt be allowed to drive.I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive.3. We should be careful when we make friends online.We are supposed to be careful when we make friends online.如何保证自身安全如何保证自身安全角度角度1升格范例升格范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. You should keep the bathro

6、om floor dry, or you may fall down.(用动词不定式表目的升格用动词不定式表目的升格) _2. We can ask the police for help when we are in danger at home alone.(用宾语从句升格用宾语从句升格) _You should keep the bathroom floor dry to avoid falling down.I think we can ask the police for help when we are in danger at home alone.句句 子子 升升 格格一阶 审

7、好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3. When we surf on the Internet, we shouldnt tell others about our personal information.(用用be supposed to do sth升格升格) _ _When we surf on the Internet, we arent supposed to tell others about our personal information.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4. The best way to relax is exercise.(扩写看法扩写看法)Th

8、e best way to relax is exercise. It is healthy for the mind and the body.5. Jane has many good habits.(扩写做法扩写做法)Jane has many good habits. She always gets up early.如何保持健康如何保持健康角度角度2扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6. You need to take breaks away from the computer.(扩写原因扩写原因)You need to take breaks away fr

9、om the computer because you played computer games all weekend.7. Staying up to study is harmful to your health.(扩写原因扩写原因)Staying up to study is harmful to your health. It will affect your study for lack of energy.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4. We can play sports with friends in our spare time.(扩写看法扩写看法) _ _

10、5. In order to live a healthy life, you need to keep a balanced diet.(扩写做法扩写做法) _ _ _We can play sports with friends in our spare time. I think sports can make us stronger and healthier.In order to live on a healthy life, you need to keep a balanced diet. Remember to have meals regularly and eat mor

11、e vegetables and fruit instead of junk food.句句 子子 扩扩 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6. We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad.(扩写原因扩写原因) _ _7. You should have breakfast every morning no matter how busy you are.(扩写原因扩写原因) _ _ _We shouldnt eat food that has gone bad because it will do harm to our health.You sh

12、ould have breakfast every morning no matter how busy you are. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句速记速记8. Old habits die hard. 旧习难改。旧习难改。9. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。一天一苹果，医生远离我。 七七(上上)Unit 6 P6810. He who has health has hope.留得青山在，不

13、怕没柴烧。留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。11. Health is the first wealth.健康是第一财富。健康是第一财富。12. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。13. Safety comes first.安全第一。安全第一。俗语谚语俗语谚语一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段As teenagers, we know it is important to keep

14、safe on our way to school and home. Here, Id like to share my advice about keeping ourselves safe. Above all, _(建议建议1). Second, on our way to school or home, _(建议建议2). Whats more, its necessary to be careful when we make new friends/we should ask police for help immediately when in danger/.语语 段段 练练

15、习习 1如何保证自身安全如何保证自身安全 it is wise to go to school or return home together with classmates/we shouldnt walk alone/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句_(建议建议3). Then, _(建议建议4) wed better not stay outside for a long time/we should pay attention to the traffic lights/. we are supposed to know some basic ways to keep our

16、selves safe/never tell your personal information to strangers/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句In order to keep healthy, I _(方法方法1). Every day I keep a balanced diet, and I _(方法方法2), which _(原因原因). In my spare time, I _(方方 get up early and run for an hour every day/exercise for half an hour every morning/.语语 段段

17、 练练 习习 2如何保持健康如何保持健康 eat many green vegetables and fruit/never eat junk food/.is good for my health/does good to my health/.take part in many activities/usually play sports/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句法法3), such as _(举例举例). Whats more, I also _ _(方法方法4)because it_(原因原因) swimming, dancing and traveling with

18、 friends/playing basketball and soccer ball/.like reading in my free time/enjoy listening to some music in my spare time/. can make me peaceful and relaxed/can sweep my stress away/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章How to protect ourselvesNo matter what we do, it is the most important to learn to protect o

19、urselves. Well, how to protect ourselves for us students?Firstly, we should respect the teachers and elders, and at the same time, we need to get on well with our classmates. Secondly, behave well in public and dont run after each other. Thirdly, we should be careful when we make friends, especially

20、 online. We 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句shouldnt give our exact personal information to them. Last but not least, its important for us to eat more healthy food and obey the traffic rules. Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!(2020原创原创)健康是人生的首要财富。如果没有了健康，财富、地健康是人生

21、的首要财富。如果没有了健康，财富、地位位一切也都失去了意义，所以在日常的生活中，我们一定要懂得一切也都失去了意义，所以在日常的生活中，我们一定要懂得如何保持健康，那么应该如何来保持健康呢？请你根据以下所给要点，如何保持健康，那么应该如何来保持健康呢？请你根据以下所给要点，以以“How to keep healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文。为题，写一篇英语短文。写作练兵写作练兵标题标题How to keep healthy具体具体方法方法1. 吃健康的食物，多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品；吃健康的食物，多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品；2. 多做锻炼，使得我们变强壮；多做锻炼，使得我们变强壮；3. 不要熬

22、夜，不然身体会运转很慢；不要熬夜，不然身体会运转很慢；4. 自主发挥自主发挥(至少两点至少两点)注意事项：注意事项： 1. 词数词数90左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵How to keep healthyAs far as we know, health is the first step to success._写作练兵写作练兵 Here are some ways to keep healthy. Firstly, we must eat

23、healthy food. Breakfast is necessary. It gives energy to our body. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. Secondly, its necessary to do exercise. It makes us active and strong. Thirdly, never stay up late. If we cant get enough sleep, the whole body will work slowly. As _写作练

24、兵写作练兵the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” Fourthly, learning to reduce pressure is also important for our health. We can listen to music and talk to others when we feel stressed out. Lastly, we should have a positive attitude towards our life. Dont

25、 be upset for something bad. Just let it go. Follow the ways, and you will be healthy!巧用比较等级当对事物进行程度上的比较时，可采用形容词和副词的当对事物进行程度上的比较时，可采用形容词和副词的三个比较等级：同级比较、比较级和最高级。常用结构有：三个比较等级：同级比较、比较级和最高级。常用结构有：as.as结构，结构，more.than结构，结构，“the比较级，比较级，the比较级比较级”结构，结构，“比较级比较级and比较级比较级”结构和结构和the most.结构。结构。巧用比较等级1. 同级比较：同级

26、比较：English is as interesting as Chinese.2. 比较等级：比较等级：The more exercise she does, the healthier she will be.Our city becomes more and more beautiful with the hard work of all people.3. 最高级：最高级：He is one of the best players in our school.句式连接范例句式连接范例 巧用比较等级1.在考试中，你越细心，犯的错误就越少。在考试中，你越细心，犯的错误就越少。 _ _2.站

27、得越高，看得越远。站得越高，看得越远。 _ 3.我已经习惯了这里的生活，而且和以前一样幸福地生活着。我已经习惯了这里的生活，而且和以前一样幸福地生活着。 _ The more carefully you do in the exam, the fewer mistakes you will make.The higher you stand, the farther you see.I have got used to the life here, and I live as happily as before.巧用比较等级4.我坚信中国会越来越强大。我坚信中国会越来越强大。 _5.这是我读过最有意义的一本书。这是我读过最有意义的一本书。 _ 6.她关心她的学生胜过自己的孩子。她关心她的学生胜过自己的孩子。 _ We believe that China will be stronger and stronger.This is the most meaningful book I have ever read.She takes care of her students more than her own child/children.